Gham-E-Zindagi Ko Jeene Mein Rakha Kya Hai "Khwaish"

by khwaish on June 20, 2010, 11:42:44 AM
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Aankhon mein hai par aankh ne dekha Nahi abhi
Woh pathar Jisse Maine Tarasha Nahi Abhi..

Palkon Ne Thaama hai jisse umar bhar
Woh Ahhq ka katra aankh se Barsa Nahi Abhi...

Gham-E-Zindagi ko Jeene Mein Rakha Kya Hai
Par marne Ki Bhi Koi Aarzoo-E-Tamanna Nahi Abhi...

Kaun Kehta Hai Faaslo mein Log Ek duje Bhool Jaate Hai
Dooriyan Laakh Sahi par Woh Shaks ne Mujhe bhoola Nahi Abhi..

Zindagi Ki Iss Afra-Tafri mein Har Koi Mashroof Hai
Par Woh Shaks Meri Zehan Se Utra Nahi Abhi...

Khilone Ki Tarah Yahan Dil Bhi Tooth The Hai
Chot Khaakar Bhi usne Kuch seekha Nahi Abhi

"Khwaish" Duniya Ki Bheed mein Khud Ko Dhoondhta Hai!!!!
Apne Hi Aks Ko Jisne Kaagaz Par Utaara Nahi Abhi...



                 ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: June 20, 2010, 12:57:57 PM »
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wah wah kamaal ka likha hai .bahut behatreen ghazalon mein se ek superb.wonderful. icon_flower icon_flower Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley hello2 hello2
Aankhon mein hai par aankh ne dekha Nahi abhi
Woh pathar Jisse Maine Tarasha Nahi Abhi..

Palkon Ne Thaama hai jisse umar bhar
Woh Ahhq ka katra aankh se Barsa Nahi Abhi...

Gham-E-Zindagi ko Jeene Mein Rakha Kya Hai
Par marne Ki Bhi Koi Aarzoo-E-Tamanna Nahi Abhi...

Kaun Kehta Hai Faaslo mein Log Ek duje Bhool Jaate Hai
Dooriyan Laakh Sahi par Woh Shaks ne Mujhe bhoola Nahi Abhi..

Zindagi Ki Iss Afra-Tafri mein Har Koi Mashroof Hai
Par Woh Shaks Meri Zehan Se Utra Nahi Abhi...

Khilone Ki Tarah Yahan Dil Bhi Tooth The Hai
Chot Khaakar Bhi usne Kuch seekha Nahi Abhi

"Khwaish" Duniya Ki Bheed mein Khud Ko Dhoondhta Hai!!!!
Apne Hi Aks Ko Jisne Kaagaz Par Utaara Nahi Abhi...



                 ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~

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«Reply #2 on: June 20, 2010, 03:06:32 PM »
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wah wah kamaal ka likha hai .bahut behatreen ghazalon mein se ek superb.wonderful. icon_flower icon_flower Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley hello2 hello2

Bahut Bahut Aur bahut Shukriya Sureshji...

Thankyou Soooooooooooooo Much for giving your time.. icon_flower
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«Reply #3 on: June 20, 2010, 03:13:03 PM »
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Bahut umda peshkash hai aap ki Khwaish Ji
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«Reply #4 on: June 20, 2010, 03:33:12 PM »
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KHWAISH JI BAHUT KHOOB ! AAP KI IS PESHKASH SE BARBAS PARVEEN SHAQIR JI KI LIKHI EK GAZAL MUJHE YAAD AA GAYEE.......PESH-E-KHIDMAT HAI...........

TUJHSE TO KOI GILA NAHI HAI
QISMAT ME MERI SILA NAHI HAI

BICHADE TO NA JANE KYA HAAL HO
JO SHAKHS ABHI MILA NAHI HAI

JEENE KI TO AARZOO HI KAB THI
MARNE KA BHI HOUSLA NAHI HAI

JO ZEEST KO MOTBAR BANA DE
AISA KOI SILSILA NAHI HAI

KHUSHBOO KA HISAB HO CHUKA HAI
OR PHOOL ABHI KHILA NAHI HAI

IS THES PE DIL KA PHOOT BAHANA
CHOONE ME TO AABALA NAHI HAI
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«Reply #5 on: June 20, 2010, 03:40:42 PM »
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Bohat Achche KHwaaish Bhai,.
And Nice One Mamta Ji,.
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«Reply #6 on: June 20, 2010, 08:19:54 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob... bahut hi umda Khwaish ji...!!!
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«Reply #7 on: June 21, 2010, 01:13:43 AM »
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wah khwish saheb bahot khoob janab
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«Reply #8 on: June 21, 2010, 07:12:56 AM »
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Bahut hi khoob Khwaish ji very touchig gazal,beautiful lines by Mamta ji.great creation. Hats off to you! Both Thumbs Up Both Thumbs Up Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: June 21, 2010, 09:38:12 AM »
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Bahut umda peshkash hai aap ki Khwaish Ji

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Rajeshji.. icon_flower
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«Reply #10 on: June 21, 2010, 01:45:19 PM »
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KHWAISH JI BAHUT KHOOB ! AAP KI IS PESHKASH SE BARBAS PARVEEN SHAQIR JI KI LIKHI EK GAZAL MUJHE YAAD AA GAYEE.......PESH-E-KHIDMAT HAI...........

TUJHSE TO KOI GILA NAHI HAI
QISMAT ME MERI SILA NAHI HAI

BICHADE TO NA JANE KYA HAAL HO
JO SHAKHS ABHI MILA NAHI HAI

JEENE KI TO AARZOO HI KAB THI
MARNE KA BHI HOUSLA NAHI HAI

JO ZEEST KO MOTBAR BANA DE
AISA KOI SILSILA NAHI HAI

KHUSHBOO KA HISAB HO CHUKA HAI
OR PHOOL ABHI KHILA NAHI HAI

IS THES PE DIL KA PHOOT BAHANA
CHOONE ME TO AABALA NAHI HAI

Pasand Farmane Ke liye mamta ji aapka teh dil se shukriya..

Aur mamta ji, aapne bhi Parveen Shaqir ji ki Bahut khoobsurat Ghazal pesh ki hai..

umeed Karta hoon,aap yuhi Humara Hausla badhaate rahenge.. icon_flower
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«Reply #11 on: June 21, 2010, 01:49:24 PM »
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Bhai yaar Khawish saheb , Kya koi qazana likh kar rakha howa apne , Roz eak nayi Taqleeq ke saath  tashreef farma rahete ho , Bahoth qoob Hamesha ki tarhan ,  dad hazir hai ,, Allah apko hamesha khush rakhe


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«Reply #12 on: June 21, 2010, 01:51:11 PM »
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KHWAISH JI BAHUT KHOOB ! AAP KI IS PESHKASH SE BARBAS PARVEEN SHAQIR JI KI LIKHI EK GAZAL MUJHE YAAD AA GAYEE.......PESH-E-KHIDMAT HAI...........

TUJHSE TO KOI GILA NAHI HAI
QISMAT ME MERI SILA NAHI HAI

BICHADE TO NA JANE KYA HAAL HO
JO SHAKHS ABHI MILA NAHI HAI

JEENE KI TO AARZOO HI KAB THI
MARNE KA BHI HOUSLA NAHI HAI

JO ZEEST KO MOTBAR BANA DE
AISA KOI SILSILA NAHI HAI

KHUSHBOO KA HISAB HO CHUKA HAI
OR PHOOL ABHI KHILA NAHI HAI

IS THES PE DIL KA PHOOT BAHANA
CHOONE ME TO AABALA NAHI HAI


Wah Mamta saheba , Kya qoob Ghazal share ki hai , Jaise log waisi Pasand , Ap khudh itna acha likhti hoke kya kahen , aur apki pasand ka bhi jawab nahi , Bahoth qoob Parveen shakir saheba ki har ghazal eak shahkaar ki tarhan hai..


Duwa go

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«Reply #13 on: June 21, 2010, 09:33:27 PM »
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Wah mere dost..kya baat hai...Behad khubsoorat likha hai bhai jaan apne...hmm akhri shaer toh choooooo gaya... Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: June 21, 2010, 09:37:21 PM »
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KHWAISH JI BAHUT KHOOB ! AAP KI IS PESHKASH SE BARBAS PARVEEN SHAQIR JI KI LIKHI EK GAZAL MUJHE YAAD AA GAYEE.......PESH-E-KHIDMAT HAI...........

TUJHSE TO KOI GILA NAHI HAI
QISMAT ME MERI SILA NAHI HAI

BICHADE TO NA JANE KYA HAAL HO
JO SHAKHS ABHI MILA NAHI HAI

JEENE KI TO AARZOO HI KAB THI
MARNE KA BHI HOUSLA NAHI HAI

JO ZEEST KO MOTBAR BANA DE
AISA KOI SILSILA NAHI HAI

KHUSHBOO KA HISAB HO CHUKA HAI
OR PHOOL ABHI KHILA NAHI HAI

IS THES PE DIL KA PHOOT BAHANA
CHOONE ME TO AABALA NAHI HAI

Bahaut achi sharing hai Applause
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