Ghazal hai haqiqat..........Deepak sharma ji ka qalaam

by kavyadharateam on November 30, 2009, 06:38:57 AM
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Aajkal khun mein pehli si rawani na rahi
bachpan bachpan naa raha, jawani jawani na rahi

Qya libas kiya tyohar kiya riwazon ki kahen
apne tamddun ki koi nishani na rahi

badalte daur mein haalat kuch ho gaye hain yun
haqiqat haqiqat na rahi, kahani kahani na rahi

Is kadar chaa gaye hum par ajnabi saaye
apni zubaan tak hindustani na rahi

apno mein bhi gair ka ahsaas hai imroz
ab pahli si khushhal zindagani na rahi

Mujhko to har manzar ek sa dikhta hai 'deepak'
raunak raunak na rahi, veerani veerani na rahi

All right with @Kavi Deepak Sharma
Ghazal taken from poet's book "Falakdipti"
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Kavyadhara Team
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«Reply #1 on: November 30, 2009, 10:14:17 AM »
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Kya khoob Kahi hai Deepak ji.. Bahooot Sach kaha aap ne... Zindgai ki nai sachchai ko bakoobi bayaan kiya hai..Bahoot Khoob !

Mujhe aaki kavita ka hamesha itzaar rehta hai,,, Usual Smile
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«Reply #2 on: November 30, 2009, 07:56:40 PM »
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nice ghazal  Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: December 02, 2009, 06:24:33 AM »
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