Ghazal hai meri.....( Ghayel )

by Sajid_Ghayel on July 07, 2011, 08:26:03 PM
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Badi masoom meharbaan ghazal hai meri
Meri duniya yeh meri jaan ghazal hai meri

Iske dum se hi mili mujhko jaha me shohrat
Ab yeh jaisi bhi hai pehchaan ghazal hai meri

Koi jageer na daulat na mahal pass mere
Mujhko rakhti hai jo dhanwaan ghazal hai meri

Na main mulla hu na pundit hu na main gyani hu
Na yeh Geeta hai na Quran ghazal hai meri

Na yeh hindi hai na urdu na yeh marathi hai
Dil se nikli hui zubaan ghazal hai meri

Sajid Ghayel
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«Reply #1 on: July 07, 2011, 08:38:16 PM »
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BHAI WAH AAPKA BLOG BHI DEKHA MAINE BAHUT HI UMDA UMDA GHAZAL LIKHTE HAIN AAP ....

AAPKA TO KOI JAWAB HI NI LAJAWAB HO AAP
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«Reply #2 on: July 08, 2011, 09:41:46 AM »
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Kya likha hai sajid bhai.. Tarif karu to kitni.. Bahut badhiya..
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«Reply #3 on: July 08, 2011, 09:51:32 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: July 08, 2011, 11:26:15 AM »
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Badi masoom meharbaan ghazal hai meri
Meri duniya yeh meri jaan ghazal hai meri

Iske dum se hi mili mujhko jaha me shohrat
Ab yeh jaisi bhi hai pehchaan ghazal hai meri

Koi jageer na daulat na mahal pass mere
Mujhko rakhti hai jo dhanwaan ghazal hai meri

Na main mulla hu na pundit hu na main gyani hu
Na yeh Geeta hai na Quran ghazal hai meri

Na yeh hindi hai na urdu na yeh marathi hai
Dil se nikli hui zubaan ghazal hai meri

Sajid Ghayel

bhut hi sundar gajhal hai aapkiiiiiiii

Hats off to you!
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«Reply #5 on: July 12, 2011, 05:27:45 AM »
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Badi masoom meharbaan ghazal hai meri
Meri duniya yeh meri jaan ghazal hai meri

Iske dum se hi mili mujhko jaha me shohrat
Ab yeh jaisi bhi hai pehchaan ghazal hai meri

Koi jageer na daulat na mahal pass mere
Mujhko rakhti hai jo dhanwaan ghazal hai meri

Na main mulla hu na pundit hu na main gyani hu
Na yeh Geeta hai na Quran ghazal hai meri

Na yeh hindi hai na urdu na yeh marathi hai
Dil se nikli hui zubaan ghazal hai meri

Sajid Ghayel



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«Reply #6 on: July 22, 2011, 08:49:37 PM »
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BHAI WAH AAPKA BLOG BHI DEKHA MAINE BAHUT HI UMDA UMDA GHAZAL LIKHTE HAIN AAP ....

AAPKA TO KOI JAWAB HI NI LAJAWAB HO AAP


Nawazish Karam Raja saheb.
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«Reply #7 on: July 23, 2011, 07:45:57 AM »
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ab iss gazal k bare me kuch kehna...aap jante ho ghayal ji..k main kya kahun ab ..........aapki gazal hai..khubsurat to honi hi hai na.......
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«Reply #8 on: July 23, 2011, 07:54:26 AM »
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Sare Shayaro ko khud pe fakr karne pe majboor kar diya aapne Sajid sahab..

bahut umda.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: August 15, 2011, 01:31:44 PM »
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Kya likha hai sajid bhai.. Tarif karu to kitni.. Bahut badhiya..

Kya likha hai sajid bhai.. Tarif karu to kitni.. Bahut badhiya..


Nawazish Karam Jee.
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«Reply #10 on: August 15, 2011, 07:50:36 PM »
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Badi masoom meharbaan ghazal hai meri
Meri duniya yeh meri jaan ghazal hai meri

Iske dum se hi mili mujhko jaha me shohrat
Ab yeh jaisi bhi hai pehchaan ghazal hai meri

Koi jageer na daulat na mahal pass mere
Mujhko rakhti hai jo dhanwaan ghazal hai meri

Na main mulla hu na pundit hu na main gyani hu
Na yeh Geeta hai na Quran ghazal hai meri

Na yeh hindi hai na urdu na yeh marathi hai
Dil se nikli hui zubaan ghazal hai meri

Sajid Ghayel

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«Reply #11 on: August 16, 2011, 01:53:55 AM »
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Badi masoom meharbaan ghazal hai meri
Meri duniya yeh meri jaan ghazal hai meri

Iske dum se hi mili mujhko jaha me shohrat
Ab yeh jaisi bhi hai pehchaan ghazal hai meri

Koi jageer na daulat na mahal pass mere
Mujhko rakhti hai jo dhanwaan ghazal hai meri

Na main mulla hu na pundit hu na main gyani hu
Na yeh Geeta hai na Quran ghazal hai meri

Na yeh hindi hai na urdu na yeh marathi hai
Dil se nikli hui zubaan ghazal hai meri

Sajid Ghayel

aadaab sajid bhai
main aap ko arsey se parh rahaa hun aor aap ke khiyaalaat se badee had tak aagaah bhi hun jo ki mohabbaat ke sewaa kuchh nahi hai aor aaj aap ne is ghazal me bhi usee mazoo se khetaab kiyaa hai badaa achhaa lagaa ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,kamaal ye hain ki aap bahr ko achhaa nibhaa gaye hain mobaarak ho
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