ghazal

by sky_web2005 on June 22, 2005, 02:43:23 PM
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Khayal-e-mohabbat mein khoi hui aankhon ka khwab hai ghazal,
Raah-e-zindagi ki har khushnuma sahar ka aaftab hai ghazal.

Nasha-e-jawani, khumaar-e-ishq, rangat-e-husn se bhi judaa,
Nasha jiska kabhi kam na ho, aisi kaif-asar sharab hai gazhal.

Har lakht-e-jigar se nazaron ki zunbaan aati hai jo iltija-e-ishq,
Mehboob ki nigahon se aaya uska khaamosh jawaab hai ghazal.

Umeed bhari bechain aankhon mein base hue chahre ki chahat,
Mehboob ke intezaar mein lamhe ginta dil-e-betaab hai gazhal.

Jiske sahare zindagi ki bhooli rahon ko dhoondte ho 'sky',
Badr ki raat mein faila hua wahi maah taab hai gazhal.

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winter
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«Reply #1 on: July 12, 2005, 10:16:25 PM »
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Hi Sky, your ghazal, posted above seems to be a great description of Ghazals, lovely words, very well put togather. i specially love this one

Har lakht-e-jigar se nazaron ki zunbaan aati hai jo iltija-e-ishq,
Mehboob ki nigahon se aaya uska khaamosh jawaab hai ghazal.

Being an avid fan of ghazals, I really love the description you have gives. I am creating a Ghazal collection page including ghazals of some greats like Mir and Ghalib, and was wondering if I could use your Ghazal as an intro.

Thanks
Sumeet
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Ghazal
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«Reply #2 on: August 21, 2005, 04:05:42 PM »
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whaa bohot khoob

ghazal ko kya khobsoorat banaya hai appny

app dono hi accha likhty hao

kep it up janab
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raj_sensitive
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«Reply #3 on: October 12, 2005, 03:25:10 PM »
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ab agar aaO tho jaane ke liye math aana
shiRf eHsaan jataane ke liye math aana

meaine palkoN pe tammannnayeN saza rakhi hai
dil meiN ummeed ki  sau shammeN jala rakhi hai
ye hasiN shammeN buJhane ke liye math aana

pyaar ki aag meiN zanzeereN pighal sakti hai
chaahne waaloN ki takdeereN badal sakti hai
tum ho bebas ye bataane ke liye math aana

ab tum aana jo tumhe muJhse mohabbat hai koi
muJhse milne ki agar tumko bhi chaahat hai koi
tum koi rasM nibhaane ke liye math aana
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vipin goyal
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«Reply #4 on: December 09, 2005, 12:06:23 PM »
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tumhari is gazal per ek meri or se shyad pasand aaye .................................    happy9

yaad teri bhoolao kase,
tsveer dil se mitaoo kase,
bekarar ho is kadar,
jindgi tum bin bitaoo kase......?
gujarete he bina aapke din - rat,
hal-e-dil dabko sunaoo kase......?
aazib si kashish he yadoo me aksar,
tadak dil ki bataoo kase....?
azab sheh he ye dil bhi "vipin"
aarma to bahoot he jataoo kase....? Usual Smile
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