Ghazal---(Riyaz)

by riyaz106 on November 18, 2009, 05:15:34 PM
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Har gham mera tumhare liye hai khushi ki baat
Behtar  yahi hai  tum  na karo dosti  ki baat

Aate hain kaam dost  musibat mein dost ke
Ye kar rahe ho kaun si guzri sadi ki baat

Wo log jo ki maghribi saanchon mein dhal gaye
Achhi  kahan  lagegi  unhein  saadgi  ki baat

Khusiyon ke din bhi aayenge kar sabra 'Ashna'
Buzdil ki tarah karte nahin khudkushi ki baat

Riyaz 'Ashna'
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«Reply #1 on: November 18, 2009, 10:33:56 PM »
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Very nice ghazal. Be continue...
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«Reply #2 on: November 18, 2009, 11:20:32 PM »
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Wah bahut khoob Riyaz ji ,very touching n beautiful gazal,excellent,lovely creation. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: November 20, 2009, 03:34:34 PM »
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Nice Riyaz JI
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«Reply #4 on: November 20, 2009, 04:01:20 PM »
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Many many Thanks Shihab Ji, Agarwal Ji and Madhewesh Ji for encouraging me.
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«Reply #5 on: November 20, 2009, 04:09:33 PM »
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Nice one Riyaz Ji
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«Reply #6 on: December 01, 2009, 01:33:40 AM »
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GUD ONE RIYAZ SAHAB Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: December 09, 2009, 09:01:02 AM »
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Thanks Rajesh sahab and Adil sahab for liking.
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«Reply #8 on: December 17, 2009, 10:36:32 PM »
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaah riyaz bhai Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: January 24, 2010, 06:00:02 PM »
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Sirji
Itni talkh haquikat aur usper ghazal......kya thought delivery hai...i am speechless
 Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: January 25, 2010, 05:09:28 PM »
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Waah Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Riyaz ji !
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«Reply #11 on: January 25, 2010, 05:10:30 PM »
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Thank you very much Kameeney ji, Pandey ji and Kaash ji aap sabka hausla afzai ke liye.
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«Reply #12 on: January 25, 2010, 05:12:32 PM »
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Thank you very much Sophi ji.
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