Haal apnaa, unhain sunaayengey!

by abdbundeli on February 11, 2011, 12:26:08 PM
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Khwaab mein jaa kisey jagaayengey?
Ham bhalaa kyon tumhain bhulaayengey!

Hijra kaa maahtaab doobeygaa;
Wasl key din qareeb aayengey!

Aashiyaan mein abhi bhi hain tinkey:
'Tumney jorhey they!' khud bataayengey!

Khushbuyen khalwaton kin bistar mein,
Mahmahaayengin: mahmahaayengey!

Tum rawaan ho haraik zarrey mein!
Kitney zarron ko ham hataayengey?

Laakh koshish key ba'ad bhi, kaisey
Tasawwuron ko rok paayengey?

Chaand-taaron sey kareyngey baateyn:
Haal apnaa, unhain sunaayengey!

Baarahaa roo-b-roo manaayaa hai;
Khwaab mein ab, 'abd', manaayengey!

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«Reply #1 on: February 11, 2011, 07:02:16 AM »
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Khwaab mein jaa kisey jagaayengey?
Ham bhalaa kyon tumhain bhulaayengey!

Hijra kaa maahtaab doobeygaa;
Wasl key din qareeb aayengey!

Aashiyaan mein abhi bhi hain tinkey:
'Tumney jorhey they!' khud bataayengey!

Khushbuyen khalwaton kin bistar mein,
Mahmahaayengin: mahmahaayengey!

Tum rawaan ho haraik zarrey mein!
Kitney zarron ko ham hataayengey?

Laakh koshish key ba'ad bhi, kaisey
Tasawwuron ko rok paayengey?

Chaand-taaron sey kareyngey baateyn:
Haal apnaa, unhain sunaayengey!

Baarahaa roo-b-roo manaayaa hai;
Khwaab mein ab, 'abd', manaayengey!

             - abd bundeli


BaDhe romaaniyat tabiyat se labrez khayaaloN ko bayaaN kiya aapne ... bundeli Sahab ! woh bhi khoobsurat andaaz meN ... tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... qubuul farmaayeN ... khush rahen ... !

duaaoN ke saath ... !
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«Reply #2 on: February 11, 2011, 07:44:21 AM »
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kya kahne aapki is peshkesh ke abd ji....
bht bht or bht khoob....
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«Reply #3 on: February 11, 2011, 07:48:56 AM »
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Khwaab mein jaa kisey jagaayengey?
Ham bhalaa kyon tumhain bhulaayengey!

Hijra kaa maahtaab doobeygaa;
Wasl key din qareeb aayengey!

Aashiyaan mein abhi bhi hain tinkey:
'Tumney jorhey they!' khud bataayengey!

Khushbuyen khalwaton kin bistar mein,
Mahmahaayengin: mahmahaayengey!

Tum rawaan ho haraik zarrey mein!
Kitney zarron ko ham hataayengey?

Laakh koshish key ba'ad bhi, kaisey
Tasawwuron ko rok paayengey?

Chaand-taaron sey kareyngey baateyn:
Haal apnaa, unhain sunaayengey!

Baarahaa roo-b-roo manaayaa hai;
Khwaab mein ab, 'abd', manaayengey!

             - abd bundeli


bahut khoob ... Abd Sahab !

ek dilkash peshkash ... tahe dil se humari bhi daad qabool karen ... bhai !

radhe radhe

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«Reply #4 on: February 11, 2011, 09:06:36 AM »
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Bundeli sirji--
aapke har kalaam se mai aapka bahut bada fan hota ja raha hun. ek alg si kasis hoti hai aapke alfazo me.
aapko padhna khusnaseebi sa lagta hai.
iss kalaam ki tareef ke shabd nhi mere paas.
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«Reply #5 on: February 11, 2011, 10:16:25 AM »
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   Bahut kamaal ki peshkash hai Abd ji, khaskar 3th or 5th sher to bahut pasand aaye mujhe. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: February 11, 2011, 10:35:09 AM »
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BaDhe romaaniyat tabiyat se labrez khayaaloN ko bayaaN kiya aapne ... bundeli Sahab ! woh bhi khoobsurat andaaz meN ... tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... qubuul farmaayeN ... khush rahen ... !

duaaoN ke saath ... !

Bahut-bahut shukriyah Anshumali ji!

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«Reply #7 on: February 11, 2011, 10:36:12 AM »
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kya kahne aapki is peshkesh ke abd ji....
bht bht or bht khoob....


Bahut-bahut shukriyah 'manzil-e-ishq' ji!

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«Reply #8 on: February 11, 2011, 10:38:59 AM »
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bahut khoob ... Abd Sahab !

ek dilkash peshkash ... tahe dil se humari bhi daad qabool karen ... bhai !

radhe radhe


Radhey-Radhey 'ISHK' Ji!
Bahut-bahut shukriyah!

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«Reply #9 on: February 11, 2011, 10:44:11 AM »
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Bundeli sirji--
aapke har kalaam se mai aapka bahut bada fan hota ja raha hun. ek alg si kasis hoti hai aapke alfazo me.
aapko padhna khusnaseebi sa lagta hai.
iss kalaam ki tareef ke shabd nhi mere paas.
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thanx
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Nirala ji! Khushqismat to main huun , ki, aap jaisey 'sahridaya paathak'mujhey miley hain! Aapkaa haardik dhanyawaad key saath swaagat hai!
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«Reply #10 on: February 11, 2011, 10:47:27 AM »
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   Bahut kamaal ki peshkash hai Abd ji, khaskar 3th or 5th sher to bahut pasand aaye mujhe. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Meyree khushqismatee hai, ki, gazal aapney sirf padhhee hi nahin saraahee bhee! Bahut-bahut shukriyah!

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abd sahab..........lajawab peshkash he ji..........kust mindblowing........bahot hi khubsurat kalam he ye..........hajaro daad apke is kalaam ko..........
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abd sahab..........lajawab peshkash he ji..........kust mindblowing........bahot hi khubsurat kalam he ye..........hajaro daad apke is kalaam ko..........

 Bahut-bahut shukriyah 'Matrix Guy' ji!

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«Reply #13 on: February 13, 2011, 12:50:24 PM »
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Bahut Khub ABD Ji ApplauseApplause
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«Reply #14 on: February 13, 2011, 10:55:37 PM »
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Bahut Khub ABD Ji ApplauseApplause

Shukriyah Rishi ji!

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