Hadd se guzarna chahte hain................................Aqsh.. -Panna 2:Ghazals

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«Reply #15 on: September 16, 2013, 09:35:09 PM »

Quote from: ~Hriday~ on September 16, 2013, 01:16:47 PM

waah waah waah waah waah kyaa kehne Aqsh ji, itni deewaangi, itnaa deewanaapan, itni mohabbat, uuuffff jaaduu saa chhaane lagaa hai ise padh ke, kyaa kahun taarif mein, alfaaz hi gum ho gaye hain, jaan le li hai aapne is poem se, ek dum zabardasssttttt.....!!!

bhar len tumhe baahon mein ki toot ke bikhar jaao
chhoo len tumhe is tarhaa tum aur bhi nikhar jaao

tumhaari husn-o-adaa se hum, sharm-o-hayaa se hum
diwaane ho jaayen, hamaari aankhon mein utar jaao

abhi to baarish hai, tumhe aur kareeb aanaa hogaa
tumhe dekh len thik se hum pal do pal thahar jaao

jaanaa hulchul jo hoti hai paani mein paththar se
mere tan man mein tum, kuch aisi hulchul kar jaao

tasveer tumhaari humne dil mein apne banaa li hai
ek baar tum aakar usme chaahat kaa rang bhar jaao

'Hriday' diwaanaa hai, bas yahi tum se kehtaa hai
paagal to hain hi hum, aakar aur zyaadaa kar jaao

*****HRIDAY*****

Wooooooooooooooow.. khoooooooobsurat reply hriday ji... bahut bahut bahut pasand aaya.. aapke reply ke aage meri ghazal feeki padh gayi.. ek choti koshish meri bhi...

Apni sharm o haya ki adaon se tumhe pagal kar doon
Tum mujhpar baras jaao tumhe aawara badal kar doon

Chaahe bhi toh koi tumhe dekh na sake ek mere siwa
Tumhe khud mein chupakar sabki nazron se ojhal kar doon

Tumse lipat kar tum par apna husn o ada ke jalwe bikheroon
Aise aagosh mein lo ke baanhon ko apna aanchal kar doon

Na main hosh mein rahoon na hi tum hosh mein raho
Seene se lag jaao ke tumhare naam apna har ek pal kar doon

Bahut pyaasi aur adhoori adhoori si hai jo saansein jaana
Aaj tum mein sama kar har dhadkan ko mukammal kar doon


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Re: Hadd se guzarna chahte hain................................Aqsh..

«Reply #16 on: September 16, 2013, 09:37:11 PM »

Quote from: sahal on September 16, 2013, 01:24:13 PM

thnxxxxxxx a lotttttttt sahal...


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aqsh

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Re: Hadd se guzarna chahte hain................................Aqsh..

«Reply #17 on: September 16, 2013, 09:41:20 PM »

Quote from: Shihab on September 16, 2013, 01:57:05 PM

Bahut Khub Aqsh Sis. Aur Hriday Ji

Shad o Aabaad Rahiye

Shihab

thnxxxxxxxx shihab ji...


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Re: Hadd se guzarna chahte hain................................Aqsh..

«Reply #18 on: September 16, 2013, 09:41:55 PM »

Quote from: Iqtedar on September 16, 2013, 02:17:41 PM

Gar hum na hote toh, tumhare kareeb koi aur hota
Aise khayaloN se ab hum, ubharna chahte hain

bahot hi khooooob Applause

shukriya bahut bahut iqtedar...


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Re: Hadd se guzarna chahte hain................................Aqsh..

«Reply #19 on: September 16, 2013, 09:42:26 PM »

Quote from: jyuthika on September 16, 2013, 02:38:14 PM

very nice writing vd feelings good

thnx jyuthika ji..


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Re: Hadd se guzarna chahte hain................................Aqsh..

«Reply #20 on: September 16, 2013, 09:43:01 PM »

Quote from: marhoom bahayaat on September 16, 2013, 02:48:33 PM

gr8888888,ma'am

thnxx MB ji...


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Re: Hadd se guzarna chahte hain................................Aqsh..

«Reply #21 on: September 16, 2013, 09:43:40 PM »

Quote from: Masoom Shahzada on September 16, 2013, 03:42:18 PM

Behad khooobsurat........ ++1 for u

Hmmmmmm nice pic masoom and thnx a lot...for the rau..


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Re: Hadd se guzarna chahte hain................................Aqsh..

«Reply #22 on: September 16, 2013, 09:44:43 PM »

Quote from: kittoo on September 16, 2013, 04:16:19 PM

Bahut seedha sa msg diya...
Tareeka achha laga. good good good...>>>>>>

thnxxx a lotttt kittoo ji..


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Re: Hadd se guzarna chahte hain................................Aqsh..

«Reply #23 on: September 16, 2013, 09:45:18 PM »

Quote from: Sudhir Ashq on September 16, 2013, 04:37:15 PM

Tumhare pyaar meiN, hadd se guzarna chahte hain
Tumhe chhoo kar jism se, rooh meiN utarna chahte hain

Rukh na phero ki, ek haseen si tasveer banakar
Us meiN apni chahat ka rang, bharna chahte hain

Gar hum na hote toh, tumhare kareeb koi aur hota
Aise khayaloN se ab hum, ubharna chahte hain

Lutakar tumpar apne husn-e-ada ka jadoo ab
Rom rom tumhe apne bas meiN, karna chahte hain

Khol kar baaheiN apni, aagosh meiN le lo “Aqsh” ko
Ke bewajah ab chalna nahiN, bas theharna chahte hain

Wah,Wah,Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Aqshji,
Bahut hi khoobsurat aur romantic ghazal kahi hai aapne.Really Mujhe bahut pasand aayee.Meri dili mubarakbaad qabool kijiye.

bahut bahut shukriya sudhir ji...


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Re: Hadd se guzarna chahte hain................................Aqsh..

«Reply #24 on: September 16, 2013, 09:46:49 PM »

Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on September 16, 2013, 04:42:34 PM

तुम्हारे प्यार में, हद से गुज़रना चाहते हैं
तुम्हे छू कर जिस्म से, रूह में उतरना चाहते हैं
Kya bat bahut Romantic Nazar aa rahe ho ji,
Kahan Sitam Karne Ka Iraada hai,,
Any Way!! Aqsh ji Bahut Hi Bahut hi Rumaani Andaz mein ye Kalaam Aapne Pesh kiya hai,Bahut Khoob.
Ek Rau Qabool Karein.

shukriya ravi ji aapka bahut bahut.. kahin bhi sitam dhaane ka iraada nahin hai jee...


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Re: Hadd se guzarna chahte hain................................Aqsh..

«Reply #25 on: September 16, 2013, 09:47:23 PM »

Quote from: premdeep on September 16, 2013, 04:55:47 PM

lafz nahin hain itni pyari peshkash ke liye lajawaab ashqji love4

thnxxxx a lottttt premdeep ji...


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Re: Hadd se guzarna chahte hain................................Aqsh..

«Reply #26 on: September 16, 2013, 09:47:59 PM »

Quote from: livingbytheday on September 16, 2013, 07:11:19 PM

very nice

thnx a lot ji...


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Advo.RavinderaRavi

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Re: Hadd se guzarna chahte hain................................Aqsh..

«Reply #27 on: September 16, 2013, 09:52:01 PM »

You'er Welcome Aqshji.


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Re: Hadd se guzarna chahte hain................................Aqsh..

«Reply #28 on: September 16, 2013, 10:42:27 PM »

waah waah Aqsh jee bahut hi umda.


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Re: Hadd se guzarna chahte hain................................Aqsh..

«Reply #29 on: September 16, 2013, 10:49:42 PM »

Quote from: aqsh on September 16, 2013, 12:51:22 PM

Betaabi meri aur na badhaao, yun auron se baatein karke
Ke tadap jaata hai dil mera, tumhe khone ke ehsaas se

Tumhare pyaar meiN, hadd se guzarna chahte hain
Tumhe chhoo kar jism se, rooh meiN utarna chahte hain

Rukh na phero ki, ek haseen si tasveer banakar
Us meiN apni chahat ka rang, bharna chahte hain

Gar hum na hote toh, tumhare kareeb koi aur hota
Aise khayaloN se ab hum, ubharna chahte hain

Lutakar tumpar apne husn-e-ada ka jadoo ab
Rom rom tumhe apne bas meiN, karna chahte hain

Khol kar baaheiN apni, aagosh meiN le lo “Aqsh” ko
Ke bewajah ab chalna nahiN, bas theharna chahte hain

Waah Waah Waah Waah Waah

Kya Kehne Aqsh ji..bahuttttttttttttttttttttt Hi Khoobsurat..Mann Ko Lubha Jaane Wali Ghazal Pesh Ki Hai Aapne...Bahut Hi khoobsurat Ehsaas...Waah Waah


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