Hamney khojaa unhain: is jagah, us jagah!

by abdbundeli on July 13, 2010, 02:14:33 AM
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Unkee aankhoun mein, do a'ainey mil gaye!
Zindagee ko naye maainey mil gaye!!

Gouhar-e-aab palkoun sey jhalkeyngey kyoun,
Jab ki, shabnam sey ley itra, gul khil gaye?

Hamney khojaa unhain: is jagah, us jagah!
Ab wahee, deed ko roo-b-roo mil gaye!!

Ghar hai unkaa basar; ham rahey dar-b-dar:
Kankarhoun sey thakey paanw chhil-chhil gaye!

Dard ney meyrey unkaa jigar chhoo liyaa!
Woh hi kyaa, har taraf koh tak hil gaye!!

Haal apnaa kisey wah sunaaye 'abd':
Jiskey, seeney mein mahfooz, hamdil gaye?

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«Reply #1 on: July 15, 2010, 11:26:03 AM »
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Unkee aankhoun mein, do a'ainey mil gaye!
Zindagee ko naye maainey mil gaye!!

Gouhar-e-aab palkoun sey jhalkeyngey kyoun,
Jab ki, shabnam sey ley itra, gul khil gaye?

Hamney khojaa unhain: is jagah, us jagah!
Ab wahee, deed ko roo-b-roo mil gaye!!

Ghar hai unkaa basar; ham rahey dar-b-dar:
Kankarhoun sey thakey paanw chhil-chhil gaye!

Dard ney meyrey unkaa jigar chhoo liyaa!
Woh hi kyaa, har taraf koh tak hil gaye!!

Haal apnaa kisey wah sunaaye 'abd':
Jiskey, seeney mein mahfooz, hamdil gaye?

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Wonderful Uncle ji..... mujhe last four lines bahut bahut pasand aaya..


Yeh jag sundar karnewale kahan gaye
Vyarth vyathaye verne wale kahan gaye?

Log lahu se aksar darte dekhe hai
Per aanu se darnewale kahan gaye?

Kanjer se merne wale to laakhon hai
Meete boli se merne wale kahan gaye?

Kahan gaye ve log raat ko mehkakar
Prath-kusum se jharne wale kahan gaye?

Geeton ki chaukat per ramjuhari mein
Apna mastak dharnewale kahan gaye?

Tann se nange rahe, magar mann se change
Dhan gumaan ko hernewale kahan gaye?

Kahan gaye ve ek bhoond aansu jal se
Agam sindu ko berne wale kahan gaye?
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«Reply #2 on: July 15, 2010, 11:39:38 AM »
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waahhhh.....Abdbundeli ji bht hi badhiya peshkash hai ji aapki
 aur malli ji aapne bhi bht hi achcha reply diya hai.......
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«Reply #3 on: July 16, 2010, 02:04:01 AM »
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Wonderful Uncle ji..... mujhe last four lines bahut bahut pasand aaya..


Yeh jag sundar karnewale kahan gaye
Vyarth vyathaye verne wale kahan gaye?

Log lahu se aksar darte dekhe hai
Per aanu se darnewale kahan gaye?

Kanjer se merne wale to laakhon hai
Meete boli se merne wale kahan gaye?

Kahan gaye ve log raat ko mehkakar
Prath-kusum se jharne wale kahan gaye?

Geeton ki chaukat per ramjuhari mein
Apna mastak dharnewale kahan gaye?

Tann se nange rahe, magar mann se change
Dhan gumaan ko hernewale kahan gaye?

Kahan gaye ve ek bhoond aansu jal se
Agam sindu ko berne wale kahan gaye?


Thanks 'malli'ji!
"Kahan gaye ve log raat ko mehkakar
Prath-kusum se jharne wale kahan gaye?"

Bahut khoob !

Ye rah-e-zeest hai: aatey hain log, jaatey hain!
Raahgeeroun ko, kayee yaar-e-dil banaatey hain!
Yuun to, mil-mil key kayee log, judaa hotey hain;
To, kayee saath yom-e-hashra tak nibhaatey hain!!

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«Reply #4 on: July 16, 2010, 02:07:12 AM »
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waahhhh.....Abdbundeli ji bht hi badhiya peshkash hai ji aapki
 aur malli ji aapne bhi bht hi achcha reply diya hai.......

Thanks *KasaK* ji!

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«Reply #5 on: July 16, 2010, 12:02:53 PM »
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Thanks 'malli'ji!
"Kahan gaye ve log raat ko mehkakar
Prath-kusum se jharne wale kahan gaye?"

Bahut khoob !

Ye rah-e-zeest hai: aatey hain log, jaatey hain!
Raahgeeroun ko, kayee yaar-e-dil banaatey hain!
Yuun to, mil-mil key kayee log, judaa hotey hain;
To, kayee saath yom-e-hashra tak nibhaatey hain!!

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Welcome Uncle ji...

Hame zindagi se pyare, Tum the Abd
Baat doosri hai aaj, ki tum ho na zindagi hai..!!
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«Reply #6 on: July 17, 2010, 03:21:53 AM »
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Welcome Uncle ji...

Hame zindagi se pyare, Tum the Abd
Baat doosri hai aaj, ki tum ho na zindagi hai..!!


Thanks 'malli' ji!

Laakh raaheyn hain: guzartey hain log, aatey hain!
Khaas wo hain, jinhain apnaa 'abd' banaatey hain!
Khwaab mein bhee jinhain kartey judaa dar lagtaa hai;
Wo hamaarey hamain khwaaboun-saa bhool jaatey hain!!

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«Reply #7 on: July 17, 2010, 10:05:43 PM »
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Thanks 'malli' ji!

Laakh raaheyn hain: guzartey log, aatey hain!
Khaas wo hain, jinhain apnaa 'abd' banaatey hain!
Khwaab mein bhee jinhain kartey judaa dar lagtaa hai;
Wo hamaarey hamain khwaaboun-saa bhool jaatey hain!!

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Kaha se lauu woh shabd,
Jo teri tarif ke kabil ho.
Aye mere Be-wafa sanam ek baar bata de,
Kaha se lauu woh kismat, tongue3

   
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«Reply #8 on: July 18, 2010, 02:07:37 AM »
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Kaha se lauu woh shabd,
Jo teri tarif ke kabil ho.
Aye mere Be-wafa sanam ek baar bata de,
Kaha se lauu woh kismat, tongue3
   

Shukriyah 'malli' ji!

Lafz kee us ko zaroorat hai, jo, binaa boley,
Khud riwaayaat-e-jigar ko na bayaan kar paaye!
Warnah apney uyoon kyaa naheen kah deytey hain?
Aur, kyaa-kyaa nahin kahtey hain ounthh muskaaye?

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«Reply #9 on: July 18, 2010, 02:12:50 AM »
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Wah wah Abd ji,hamesha ki tarah bahut khoobsurti se likha aapne,Mali ji aapne bhi khoob saath diya.great creatio. icon_salut icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Wah wah Abd ji,hamesha ki tarah bahut khoobsurti se likha aapne,Mali ji aapne bhi khoob saath diya.great creatio. icon_salut icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Thanks Madhu ji!

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«Reply #11 on: July 19, 2011, 01:58:04 AM »
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Bhuat Khoob..AB
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«Reply #12 on: July 25, 2011, 12:51:30 PM »
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Bhuat Khoob..AB

Shkriyah Sanjeev ji!
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«Reply #13 on: August 06, 2011, 10:55:38 PM »
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Odkar oos ki chaddar hawa behne lagi hai
Thand tadke hi basti mein, meri chalne lagi hai

Aa gaye kambalon ke dil, rajayi aur alawon ke
Raat mehfil vohi kisson ki fir chalne lagi hai

Kitni khamosh thi, gumsum, udaas raat ber galiyan
Subah hote hi hasti bolti lagne lagi hai

Thand ke kauf se hai band kidki aur darwaje
Koyi curfew jaisa meri gali lagne lagi hai

Dard mausam ke itne seh chuki jhopdi meri
Titurthi thand bi usko bhali lagne lagi hai....




Kahan gaye hame khojne wale.... Kahan gaye?
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«Reply #14 on: August 12, 2011, 01:38:37 AM »
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Odkar oos ki chaddar hawa behne lagi hai
Thand tadke hi basti mein, meri chalne lagi hai

Aa gaye kambalon ke dil, rajayi aur alawon ke
Raat mehfil vohi kisson ki fir chalne lagi hai

Kitni khamosh thi, gumsum, udaas raat ber galiyan
Subah hote hi hasti bolti lagne lagi hai

Thand ke kauf se hai band kidki aur darwaje
Koyi curfew jaisa meri gali lagne lagi hai

Dard mausam ke itne seh chuki jhopdi meri
Titurthi thand bi usko bhali lagne lagi hai....




Kahan gaye hame khojne wale.... Kahan gaye?


Khud hee gaayab rahey ho, poochhtey ho mujhsey hee:
Kahaan chaley gaye hain khojney waaley meyrey?


Abhuun na aaye sajanwaan,
Sakhee ri mori, baadar garjyo!

Purwaiyaa lahree, tan-man kon jurhaay, gayee!
Paachheyn-paachheyn ghahree barkhaa rut aay gayee!

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