Hijr

by drpandey on January 25, 2010, 08:00:35 PM
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Hijr ka apne harpal mujhko arsaN lagta hai !
Bichhde unse sadiyaN beetiN aisa lagta hai !

Khamosi se dard samete jab se baitha hooN,
Yaad ka manjar sandal jaise mahka lagta hai!

Gham jab unka quasid bankar dastak deta hai,
Har aahat mein sargam ka ek sur sa lagta hai!

Mahfil mein bhi tanha-tanha aksar rahta hooN,
Dard ka mara har begana apna lagta hai!

Vo aayein to kahna unse jaldi soya hooN,
Khwab se hatkar jeena jaise marna lagta hai!

Dr HP Pandey
Allahabad
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«Reply #1 on: January 26, 2010, 10:14:23 AM »
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nice one
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drpandey
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«Reply #2 on: January 26, 2010, 10:47:20 AM »
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Thanks @kaas Ji
 Thankyou !
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #3 on: January 26, 2010, 08:39:49 PM »
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Wow mindblwing creation Pandey ji,very touching gazal.too good. Hats off to you! Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: January 26, 2010, 08:44:28 PM »
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Chadi hai isq-e-khumai na jane kya hoga?
Badhi hai had se bimari na jane kya hoga?
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«Reply #5 on: January 27, 2010, 10:36:42 AM »
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wah wah Pandey ji badi achhi aur asardaar ghazal likhi hai aapne. Nice creation. Continue posting.
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drpandey
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«Reply #6 on: January 27, 2010, 10:51:04 AM »
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Thank you sir aapki duwaon ka asar hai.....
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«Reply #7 on: January 27, 2010, 10:52:45 AM »
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wah wah Pandey ji badi achhi aur asardaar ghazal likhi hai aapne. Nice creation. Continue posting.
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«Reply #8 on: January 27, 2010, 10:54:04 AM »
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Wow mindblwing creation Pandey ji,very touching gazal.too good. Hats off to you! Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: January 27, 2010, 10:55:13 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause
behad acha likha hai aapne Pandey ji  Thumbs UP
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #10 on: January 28, 2010, 02:38:54 PM »
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Bahut Khub Pandey Ji
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drpandey
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«Reply #11 on: January 28, 2010, 06:12:07 PM »
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Sukriya Risi Bhai.....Aapki muhabbat bani rahe...
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malli
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«Reply #12 on: January 28, 2010, 06:18:09 PM »
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Hijr ka apne harpal mujhko arsaN lagta hai !
Bichhde unse sadiyaN beetiN aisa lagta hai !

Khamosi se dard samete jab se baitha hooN,
Yaad ka manjar sandal jaise mahka lagta hai!

Gham jab unka quasid bankar dastak deta hai,
Har aahat mein sargam ka ek sur sa lagta hai!

Mahfil mein bhi tanha-tanha aksar rahta hooN,
Dard ka mara har begana apna lagta hai!

Vo aayein to kahna unse jaldi soya hooN,
Khwab se hatkar jeena jaise marna lagta hai!

Dr HP Pandey
Allahabad


Wonderful creation Pandey ji  Applause Applause Keep up  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #13 on: January 28, 2010, 06:59:55 PM »
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Malli Ji Behad Sukriya mera prayas safal raha.....

Ghazal Aah se Waah tak ke Safar ka dusra naam hai
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«Reply #14 on: January 28, 2010, 07:54:01 PM »
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 Hats off to you! Thankyou !
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