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by aahnaa on January 04, 2013, 02:02:32 PM
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Hua Kaise....@


Dekhkar usko na jane ye haadsaa hua kaise
Dil pehlu se mere ek pal me judaa.. hua kaise

Umeedon ke saaye me palti rahi zindagi meri
Dil ye mera haar kar naummeed bhala.. hua kaise

Thokrein khai hain jabse jazbaaton ne apno se
Puchhti hun sabse dil ye mera sehra.. hua kaise

Hain lakhon ki bheed is jahan me magar fir bhi
Arthi  ko bheed me ik kandha na mila.. hua kaise

Apne hi jhut ki saza pai hai tumse aaj maine
Par sawal hai ke ye dil bekabu mera.. hua kaise

Badal jata hai har shakhs yahan mausam ki tarah
Fir meri baaton pe tujhe yakeen bata.. hua kaise

Gunaahon k daldal me dhansi ja rahi zindagi meri
Maasumiyat mujhme hai bachi ye bata..  hua kaise

Ab tak jo chhupaya tha gum - e - dil iss zamane se
Tujhse milkar 'aah' wo dard sab par zaya.. hua kaise…!!
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«Reply #1 on: January 04, 2013, 02:05:03 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai... excellant Thumbs UP
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«Reply #2 on: January 04, 2013, 02:28:36 PM »
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aahnaa ji marhabaa marhabaa bahut hee bright future hai keep it up
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«Reply #3 on: January 04, 2013, 02:54:43 PM »
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Hua Kaise....@


Dekhkar usko na jane ye haadsaa hua kaise
Dil pehlu se mere ek pal me judaa.. hua kaise

Umeedon ke saaye me palti rahi zindagi meri
Dil ye mera haar kar naummeed bhala.. hua kaise

Thokrein khai hain jabse jazbaaton ne apno se
Puchhti hun sabse dil ye mera sehra.. hua kaise

Hain lakhon ki bheed is jahan me magar fir bhi
Arthi  ko bheed me ik kandha na mila.. hua kaise

Apne hi jhut ki saza pai hai tumse aaj maine
Par sawal hai ke ye dil bekabu mera.. hua kaise

Badal jata hai har shakhs yahan mausam ki tarah
Fir meri baaton pe tujhe yakeen bata.. hua kaise

Gunaahon k daldal me dhansi ja rahi zindagi meri
Maasumiyat mujhme hai bachi ye bata..  hua kaise

Ab tak jo chhupaya tha gum - e - dil iss zamane se
Tujhse milkar 'aah' wo dard sab par zaya. (zaya kee jagah numaya hoga). hua kaise…!!


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«Reply #4 on: January 04, 2013, 02:55:20 PM »
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Dekhkar usko na jane ye haadsaa hua kaise
Dil pehlu se mere ek pal me judaa.. hua kaise

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Waaahhhhh...... Bahut khoob koshish hai. Ummeed hai aap aur behtar karengi.
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«Reply #5 on: January 04, 2013, 03:27:43 PM »
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Aahnaa ji, badi hi khoobsurat tarike se nibhaayi gayi rachnaa hai ye, bahut khoobsurat andaaz me likha hai aapne, bahut bahut khoob likha hai... !!!
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«Reply #6 on: January 04, 2013, 03:57:31 PM »
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boht khub aahna ji boht umda
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«Reply #7 on: January 04, 2013, 04:25:10 PM »
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bahot khub........ Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: January 04, 2013, 05:20:29 PM »
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Hua Kaise....@


Dekhkar usko na jane ye haadsaa hua kaise
Dil pehlu se mere ek pal me judaa.. hua kaise

Umeedon ke saaye me palti rahi zindagi meri
Dil ye mera haar kar naummeed bhala.. hua kaise

Thokrein khai hain jabse jazbaaton ne apno se
Puchhti hun sabse dil ye mera sehra.. hua kaise

Hain lakhon ki bheed is jahan me magar fir bhi
Arthi  ko bheed me ik kandha na mila.. hua kaise

Apne hi jhut ki saza pai hai tumse aaj maine
Par sawal hai ke ye dil bekabu mera.. hua kaise

Badal jata hai har shakhs yahan mausam ki tarah
Fir meri baaton pe tujhe yakeen bata.. hua kaise

Gunaahon k daldal me dhansi ja rahi zindagi meri
Maasumiyat mujhme hai bachi ye bata..  hua kaise

Ab tak jo chhupaya tha gum - e - dil iss zamane se
Tujhse milkar 'aah' wo dard sab par zaya.. hua kaise…!!


bahut khoob...!
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«Reply #9 on: January 04, 2013, 05:33:42 PM »
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BAHUT KHOO0B ...DAAD...DAAD..DAAD
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«Reply #10 on: January 04, 2013, 05:48:28 PM »
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bahut khoob bahut hi umda aahana ji
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«Reply #11 on: January 04, 2013, 05:54:47 PM »
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Aahnaa jee Aadaab!


Bahut bahut khoob jee.. Kia kahne.. aapne pahli hi kalaam meiN behad
khoob aaghaaz kiya hai... Usual Smile

is khoobsurat aur umdaa kalaam par humari dheroN daad o mubbarakbad kabul
kijiye.. Sabhi ashaar behad khoob rahe... Usual Smile


Aise hi umdaa kalaamoN ke saath aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: January 04, 2013, 06:09:58 PM »
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Bahut khoob Aahna jee.
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«Reply #13 on: January 04, 2013, 06:50:31 PM »
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ahchi kosish thi aahnaa ji, aapki is umda kosish pe meri daad qubool farmaayeN... Umeed karta hun ap aage v yahaaN yuNhi aati raheNgi aur mehfil ko apni kalamkaari se nawaazti raheNgi....
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«Reply #14 on: January 05, 2013, 11:02:28 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob aahaana jee
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