hum ghareeb kahaan!

by mazHur on October 09, 2010, 07:37:30 PM
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aise apnay naseeb kahaan
woh kahaan hum ghareeb kahaan!

jin ko mil jaayen tum se dost
unko darkaar raqeeb kahaan?


hum ne toe kee thee piyar kee baat
kuch kaha tha ajeeb kahaan?

fasilay mit gaye laikin
phir bhi hum hein qareeb kahaan

 



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«Reply #1 on: October 09, 2010, 07:47:09 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: October 10, 2010, 09:56:30 AM »
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Waah Waah!!!

bahut bahut khoob mazhurji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: October 10, 2010, 04:21:43 PM »
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MazHur Sahab Aadaab!

Kia baat hai janab behad tez khayaaloN ko
Lafzi jama pehnaya hai aapne daad ....

kafi achche ashaar kaheN hai dil se daad hazir hai.. Usual Smile         



aise apnay naseeb kahaan
woh kahaan hum ghareeb kahaan!

Achcha sher hai behad sade se lafziN meiN kah diya achcha laga hume.. Usual Smile         


jin ko mil jaayen tum se dost
unko darkaar raqeeb kahaan?

Kia baat hai ise kahte hai shayari..
Masha Allah Aag bhi laga dii aur roshni bhi nahi hone dii bahut umdaa janab.... Usual Smile Bahut khoob... Usual Smile         



hum ne toe kee thee piyar kee baat
kuch kaha tha ajeeb kahaan?

Waah janab waah bahut khoob kia bayaani ki hai ... aur kia khayaal kaha hai bahut umdaa daad hazir hai achcha hai .. Usual Smile         


fasilay mit gaye laikin
phir bhi hum hein qareeb kahaan

Mindblowing ..... Bahut umdaa.... daad Janab         
 





Aise hi umdaa khayaal bazm ki nazar karte rahiye.....
Khush O aabaad rahiye...... Likhate rahiye ...
Aate rahiye....
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile         

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