Hum Pal Pal q Martey Hain.............??:Ghazals

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Hum Pal Pal q Martey Hain.............??

« on: May 08, 2008, 04:14:15 AM »

Aye Moj-e-hawa ab tu hi bata,
Woh yaar hamara kesa hai..?

Jo bhool gaya hum ko kab se,
Woh jaan se pyaara kesa hai..?

Kia us k jeewan lamhon main,
Koi lamha mera baqi hai..?

Kia uski jaagti aankhon main,
Meri yaad se pheli udasi hai..?

Kia woh bhi meri tarhan unhi,
Shab bhar jaaga karta hai..?

Kia woh bhi saay-e-Rehmat main,
Hamain Rab se maanga karta hai..?

Agar aesa nahin to tuu hi bata,
Hum yaad usse q karte hain..?

Woh hum se bichar kar khush hai agar,
To hum pal pal q martey hain.....By (X@!N)


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Dil-o-Nazar se kuch der bhi juda rakhon,
Yeh mere bas main nahin k tujhe khafaa rakhon...

Nahi hai kuch bhi mere zehen main Siwa is k,
Main teri yaad Bhula doon to yaad kia rakhon...

Kabhi jo mujhse koi poochley marzi meri,
To Apna naam muhabbat tera Wafa Rakhon.....

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Re: Hum Pal Pal q Martey Hain.............??

« Reply #1 on: May 08, 2008, 05:07:21 AM »

HI,ZAINZUH....
AGAIN U WRITE VEY NICE WORDING....
MUJHE PATA NAHI KYUN AAPKI LINES
PADKAR AISA LAGATA HAI, JAISE AAP
MERE DIL KI DASTAAN BAYAAN KARTE HO,
HAR BAAR AAPKI LIKHI LINES MEIN MUJHE
MERI HALAT NAJAR AATI HAI....
AISA LAGTA HAI JAISE AAP MUJHE AUR MERE DIL
KI HALAT KO JANTE HO....
I DON'T KNOW WHY I FEEL LIKE THIS
BUT IT'S TRUE....
IF U FEEL SOMETHING WRONG THEN I'M SORRY
BY. K.SHAEL
THANX DOST


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Re: Hum Pal Pal q Martey Hain.............??

« Reply #2 on: May 08, 2008, 07:18:12 AM »

Quote from: zainzuh on May 08, 2008, 04:14:15 AM

Shayad ek tarfa pyaar isey hi kehte hai...

Neways... Its so true, very beautifully expressed Applause

Do Keep Writing..


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Re: Hum Pal Pal q Martey Hain.............??

« Reply #3 on: May 09, 2008, 04:12:03 AM »

sabse pehle to aapka yoindia mei swagat hai
sach aapki lines wakai behad khoobsurat hai aisa laga padhkar jaise aapne apni sachi daastan likhi ho is shayri mei
good work.......and keep writing...........


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hame zindgi se koi shikwa nahi,
koi gila nahi ki wo hamko mila nahi,
jeene k liye unki yaadon ka sahara bohu hai,
koi gam nahi jo wo do kadam saath chala nahi.

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Re: Hum Pal Pal q Martey Hain.............??

« Reply #4 on: May 09, 2008, 10:47:12 PM »

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Kia uski jaagti aankhon main,
Meri yaad se pheli udasi hai..?

Kia woh bhi meri tarhan unhi,
Shab bhar jaaga karta hai..?

Kia woh bhi saay-e-Rehmat main,
Hamain Rab se maanga karta hai..?

Agar aesa nahin to tuu hi bata,
Hum yaad usse q karte hain..?

Woh hum se bichar kar khush hai agar,
To hum pal pal q martey hain.....By (X@!N)

Bahut khoob. Dil ko chu gaya her ek line... Very good creation ji


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Re: Hum Pal Pal q Martey Hain.............??

« Reply #5 on: May 12, 2008, 10:57:18 AM »

Thanx doston
Aap logon k rply parh kar mujhe buhat khushi hui k aap ne mera kalaam pasand kia

ones again thanx buddeis


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Re: Hum Pal Pal q Martey Hain.............??

« Reply #6 on: May 14, 2008, 11:28:30 AM »

Quote from: zainzuh on May 08, 2008, 04:14:15 AM

Very nice....but please write NOT MINE when you share something not written by you. At YOIndia we always appreciate original work and try to give due to credit to original poet.


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