Ibadatgaah

by @kaash on June 27, 2009, 04:22:31 PM

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Likhte hain khwaab pe kalam se sajda kia karenge,
markar bhi hakeekat me magar ibadatgaah bana denge
Tavajjo taajjub ko dia nahi jata,
hum rakeebon ko saare dil se dua denge,
Jo ghazal hi humse mukhtalif ho munsif ban baithi,
kalam ki adalat me kalaam se pairwi kia karenge
Unmaan kabhi to hoga jahan me apnepan ka,
aakhiri saanson tak parayepan ki kitaab na chhuyenge


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Re: Ibadatgaah bana denge

«Reply #1 on: June 27, 2009, 04:46:27 PM »

bahoot achche kaash ji


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Re: Ibadatgaah bana denge

«Reply #2 on: June 27, 2009, 04:48:36 PM »

Bahut Acche Kaash Mere Bhai.. Lajawab Alfaazon ke sath Behtreen Soch ke sath Likhi Yeh Rachna hai aapki.. Daad Kubool karen.. Bahut bahut Khooooooob.. Applause

**~** Mann **~**


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Re: Ibadatgaah

«Reply #3 on: June 27, 2009, 06:57:14 PM »

Beautiful gazal Kaash ji,bahut acha likha aapne. Applause


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Re: Ibadatgaah

«Reply #4 on: June 28, 2009, 02:40:36 AM »

Quote from: @kaash on June 27, 2009, 04:22:31 PM

(PLS MOVE MY THIS POEM TO GHAZALS FORUM AS BY MISTAKE IT'S POSTED IN THIS FORUM) Likhte hain khwaab pe kalam se sajda kia karenge,
markar bhi hakeekat me magar ibadatgaah bana denge
Tavajjo taajjub ko dia nahi jata,
hum rakeebon ko saare dil se dua denge,
Jo ghazal hi humse mukhtalif ho munsif ban baithi,
kalam ki adalat me kalaam se pairwi kia karenge
Imkaan kabhi to hoga jahan me apnepan ka,
aakhiri saanson tak parayepan ki kitaab na chhuyenge

GUD WORK KAASH JE..


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Sammual

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Re: Ibadatgaah

«Reply #5 on: June 28, 2009, 08:37:12 AM »

Nice Job Kaash Ji.


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deepika_divya

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Re: Ibadatgaah

«Reply #6 on: June 28, 2009, 09:28:01 AM »

Bahoot bahoot Khoob Kaash Ji


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Talat

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Re: Ibadatgaah

«Reply #7 on: June 29, 2009, 11:37:31 AM »

Quote from: @kaash on June 27, 2009, 04:22:31 PM

Likhte hain khwaab pe kalam se sajda kia karenge,
markar bhi hakeekat me magar ibadatgaah bana denge

Tavajjo taajjub ko dia nahi jata,
hum rakeebon ko saare dil se dua denge,

Jo ghazal hi humse mukhtalif ho munsif ban baithi,
kalam ki adalat me kalaam se pairwi kia karenge

Imkaan kabhi to hoga jahan me apnepan ka,
aakhiri saanson tak parayepan ki kitaab na chhuyenge

Bohot Khoob Kaash Ji