Imtihaan....

by satish-Aman on August 07, 2013, 07:07:04 PM
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apni chahat ko tum ab koyi naya naam na do
zahar  toh pi chuke hain ab naya ilaazm na do

Bhatkane do sahra sahra gardish ke maro ko
ae khuda ab hame manzil koyi sar.e.aam  na do

Shayary koyi khel nahi mere jazbato ka  dariya haiN
bahne do labzo ke tufan ko ab koyi naya naam na do

likh chuka huiN apne naseebo ki  zindagi, ya rabb
mere hawale ab tum koyi lawh.o.qalam na do

ho gaye itne badnaam apni hi dariyadili meiN
ke  shoharat me waaizo ab koyi  neik-naam na do

Unko raaj na aaya phulo ka khilkhilake hasna ,
jate hain hum ab mujhe zindagi ka naya jaam na do

uske kuche se jo bhatak rahe hain sadiyo se
zindagi rahne do tum ab koyi  aakhiri maqaam na do

ban chuka haiN 'Aman'  khaakh zindagi jeete jeete
udne do usse ab tum koyi jhuta  ehteram  na do
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«Reply #2 on: August 07, 2013, 08:15:25 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: August 07, 2013, 08:16:10 PM »
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bahut khoob bahut umda....
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«Reply #4 on: August 07, 2013, 09:11:07 PM »
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apni chahat ko tum ab koyi naya naam na do
zahar  toh pi chuke hain ab naya ilaazm na do

Bhatkane do sahra sahra gardish ke maro ko
ae khuda ab hame manzil koyi sar.e.aam  na do

Shayary koyi khel nahi mere jazbato ka  dariya haiN
bahne do labzo ke tufan ko ab koyi naya naam na do

likh chuka huiN apne naseebo ki  zindagi, ya rabb
mere hawale ab tum koyi lawh.o.qalam na do

ho gaye itne badnaam apni hi dariyadili meiN
ke  shoharat me waaizo ab koyi  neik-naam na do

Unko raaj na aaya phulo ka khilkhilake hasna ,
jate hain hum ab mujhe zindagi ka naya jaam na do

uske kuche se jo bhatak rahe hain sadiyo se
zindagi rahne do tum ab koyi  aakhiri maqaam na do

ban chuka haiN 'Aman'  khaakh zindagi jeete jeete
udne do usse ab tum koyi jhuta  ehteram  na do


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«Reply #5 on: August 07, 2013, 09:41:09 PM »
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NICE ONE,,,,,,,,,
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«Reply #6 on: August 07, 2013, 10:47:08 PM »
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waah waah kyaa kehne Satish ji, bahut khoob likha hai aapne....!!!
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«Reply #8 on: August 08, 2013, 08:35:20 PM »
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खूब कहा अमन जी..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: August 11, 2013, 05:19:34 PM »
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