INTEZAAR-E-YAAR KHATAM NA HUA

by Taasir siddiqui on June 05, 2008, 10:18:15 AM
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Shab-e-zindagi ho chali intezaar-e-yaar khatam na hua;
umeedon ko neend aa gai par junun tera kum na hau:

yun to mile the raah-e-zindagi me kai dost magar;
dum bhar ke liye bhi koi yahan hum-dum na hua;

mili yeh zindagi bhi to bus char din ke liye;
aur us par gham ke siva koi aur mausam na hua ;

mere hum-raah to bus ek mera saaya hi tha;
woh bhi chala aise ke mere hum qadam na hau;

hawaon ke tarz par yeh shaakhon ka raqs;
kitne ujjad gaye nasheman koi maatam na hua:

"taasir" ki zindagi ki dastaan woh khud hi jane;
log to yeh  samjhe us par koi sitam na hua;
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«Reply #1 on: June 05, 2008, 10:58:30 AM »
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Shab-e-zindagi ho chali intezaar-e-yaar khatam na hua;
umeedon ko neend aa gai par junun tera kum na hau:
yun to mile the raah-e-zindagi me kai dost magar;
dum bhar ke liye bhi koi yahan hum-dum na hua;
mili yeh zindagi bhi to bus char din ke liye;
aur us par gham ke siva koi aur mausam na hua ;
mere hum-raah to bus ek mera saaya hi tha;
woh bhi chala aise ke mere hum qadam na hau;
hawaon ke tarz par yeh shaakhon ka raqs;
kitne ujjad gaye nasheman koi maatam na hua:
"taasir" ki zindagi ki dastaan woh khud hi jane;
log to yeh  samjhe us par koi sitam na hua;

waah taasir ji kya khoob likha hai aapne
aapki last 2 line hamein behad pasand aayi
 
taasir ki zindgi ki daastan wo khud hi jaane
log to ye samjhe uspar koi sitam na hua
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«Reply #2 on: June 05, 2008, 11:23:49 AM »
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Bohot Khoob Taasir Ji !
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«Reply #3 on: June 05, 2008, 12:15:04 PM »
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wah wah tasir ji very good poetry
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«Reply #4 on: June 05, 2008, 04:20:46 PM »
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Shab-e-zindagi ho chali intezaar-e-yaar khatam na hua;
umeedon ko neend aa gai par junun tera kum na hau:
yun to mile the raah-e-zindagi me kai dost magar;
dum bhar ke liye bhi koi yahan hum-dum na hua;
mili yeh zindagi bhi to bus char din ke liye;
aur us par gham ke siva koi aur mausam na hua ;
mere hum-raah to bus ek mera saaya hi tha;
woh bhi chala aise ke mere hum qadam na hau;
hawaon ke tarz par yeh shaakhon ka raqs;
kitne ujjad gaye nasheman koi maatam na hua:
"taasir" ki zindagi ki dastaan woh khud hi jane;
log to yeh  samjhe us par koi sitam na hua;

wah Tassir  ji ek ek line kamal ki likhi hai apne... bahoot khoob!!

sahi kaha apne: umeedon ko neend aa gai par junun tera kum na hau

bahoot khoob!!!
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«Reply #5 on: November 14, 2009, 10:16:49 PM »
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Shab-e-zindagi ho chali intezaar-e-yaar khatam na hua;
umeedon ko neend aa gai par junun tera kum na hau:

yun to mile the raah-e-zindagi me kai dost magar;
dum bhar ke liye bhi koi yahan hum-dum na hua;

mili yeh zindagi bhi to bus char din ke liye;
aur us par gham ke siva koi aur mausam na hua ;

mere hum-raah to bus ek mera saaya hi tha;
woh bhi chala aise ke mere hum qadam na hau;

hawaon ke tarz par yeh shaakhon ka raqs;
kitne ujjad gaye nasheman koi maatam na hua:

"taasir" ki zindagi ki dastaan woh khud hi jane;
log to yeh  samjhe us par koi sitam na hua;

Really nice indeed Taasir Ji
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