Is qafas se huN pareshaaN...............MKV:Ghazals

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Khudnumayee, badgumaani aur ik ghar khaak hai
Talkh-kaami yak-bayak seenah hua ye chaak hai

Voh raqeeboN kee balaayeN le raha hai aajkal
Raat din bas aashnaai ab bachaani naak hai

Raaz dil me zabt uske lab hai jaise sil liye
Dil me uske sab dafan hai voh bahut chalaak hai

Haq-parasti aur riyazat hai mera imaan ab
Is qafas se huN pareshaN bas yahee idraak hai

hasratoN se tauba kar lee badla-badla hai ‘Chiragh’
raaz-e-aalam haiN numaya, ab ibaadat paak hai


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Re: Is qafas se huN pareshaaN...............MKV

«Reply #1 on: May 16, 2013, 02:34:21 PM »

Marhaba, Marhaba !! waah Mukesh ji,Kya khubsurat ghazal likhi hai. Sanjeeda , gahre khayalaat , sanjeeda aur ba-maani alfaaz se murassa ye ghazal har sher par thaher kar sochne par majboor karti hai.Aala sukhanwari ki taraf ye sirf agla qadam nahi , eik zabardast chhalaang hai . Khuda ye rang qaaim o daaim rakhhe . 4th sher aur maqta par khusoosi mubarakbaad . bahut bahut khoob !!!


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«Reply #2 on: May 16, 2013, 02:51:19 PM »

Bohat Khub Mukesh Jee!!!

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Re: Is qafas se huN pareshaaN...............MKV

«Reply #3 on: May 16, 2013, 03:20:00 PM »

hasratoN se tauba kar lee badla-badla hai ‘Chiragh’
raaz-e-aalam haiN numaya, ab ibaadat paak hai

WAAH WAAH MUKESH JI LAJWAAB
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«Reply #4 on: May 16, 2013, 03:27:26 PM »

Quote from: mkv on May 16, 2013, 02:09:07 PM

gr888888888888 ghazal,sir you have selected few tough arabic words


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Re: Is qafas se huN pareshaaN...............MKV

«Reply #5 on: May 16, 2013, 06:03:54 PM »

Bahut khoob... Applause


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«Reply #6 on: May 16, 2013, 07:34:59 PM »

Awesome mukesh ji. ek alag hi andaaz dekhne ko mila aapka. badi achchi ghazal hui is baar. tareef ke liye alfaaz nahi. dil se mubarakbad qubool kijiyega.


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«Reply #7 on: May 16, 2013, 07:37:15 PM »

BAhut BAhut Khub Mukesh Ji


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«Reply #8 on: May 16, 2013, 07:58:19 PM »

Quote from: mkv on May 16, 2013, 02:09:07 PM

laajawab ,...........bohat c daad,..........


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«Reply #9 on: May 16, 2013, 08:43:39 PM »

Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on May 16, 2013, 02:34:21 PM

Aadaab Sir
ye sab aapki rahnumaaai ka asar hai.
aaj yahan tak mai aapki vajh se pahunch paaya hun.
aapki hausla afzai se mujhe har baar aage ke liye ek nayee raah mil jaati hai.
Sab vaqt ke haathoN me hai..par meri koshish badastoor jaari rahegi.
Bahut bahut shukriya aapka


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«Reply #10 on: May 16, 2013, 09:09:53 PM »

Marhaba Marhaba, Subhan Allah, Mukesh bhai, aaj sach bol raha huN taa'reef ke liye alfaaz nahiN haiN. MaiN to bilkul awaak rah gaya ye ghazal padh ke, ek se badh kar ek she'r jinka koi jawaab nahiN. Kya ghazab ke neyk aur aa'la khayaalaat nikaale haiN aapne, aur sath meiN itna khumaar bhara hai, khaastaur pe 4th aur maqte ka she'r, lekin baaqi ash'aar ko bhi kisi soorat kamtar nahiN kaha jaa sakta. Ye mere liye ek yaadgaar ghazal kahi hai jo mujhe hamesha yaad rahegi.

Iss pe jitni daad-o-mubarakbaad di jaae kam hai, khayr kuch to dena padega aur kam se kam in 5 ash'aar pe 5 Rau to bante hi haiN jo ki ek baar meiN nahiN diye jaa sakte, lekin phir bhi maiN inheN poora karuNga 3-4 din meiN.


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«Reply #11 on: May 17, 2013, 12:10:48 AM »

Quote from: Shireen Hakani on May 16, 2013, 02:51:19 PM

Bohat Khub Mukesh Jee!!!

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Bahut shukriya aapka
bas yun hi saath dete rahiyega


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Re: Is qafas se huN pareshaaN...............MKV

«Reply #12 on: May 17, 2013, 12:16:57 AM »

Quote from: mkv on May 16, 2013, 02:09:07 PM

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah mkv ji, 3rd aur 4rth sher khususi rahe Applause


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Re: Is qafas se huN pareshaaN...............MKV

«Reply #13 on: May 17, 2013, 12:44:01 AM »

Wah,Wah,Wah very nice composition.


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«Reply #14 on: May 17, 2013, 11:05:46 AM »

Quote from: sahal on May 16, 2013, 03:20:00 PM

hasratoN se tauba kar lee badla-badla hai ‘Chiragh’
raaz-e-aalam haiN numaya, ab ibaadat paak hai

WAAH WAAH MUKESH JI LAJWAAB
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Shukriya mere bhai


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