Ishq ki aag mein jal raha Iftakhar...........................IFTAKHAR

by Iftakhar Ahmad on June 25, 2012, 08:39:20 PM
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Dil mein  pyar  jagane waale
Ishq ki aag,     lagane waale

Deewana bana  k  kaha.n chal diye
Aye mujhko  pyar,  sikhaane waale

Duniya bhula   k  kaha.n chal diye
Duniya  meri  ye,  bhulaane waale

Aa jao  mujhe   hai  tera  intezaar
Duniya se naata,  churaane waale

Tashna labo.n ko,   hai tera intezar
Ishq  ki   pyaas,    bujhaane  waale

Paas mere raho, ab ho na judaa
Dil  ko  mere,   lubhaane   waale

Pad gaya pyar mein, kaha.n jau.n ab
Pyar   ka   matlab,    bataane  waale

Bata do k dil mein kitna hai pyar
Dil  ke   raaz,    chupaane   waale

Ishq ki aag mein jal raha ‘Iftakhar’
Bujha do ye aag, bujhaane waale



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wah bahut khoob  Applause Applause Applause Applause
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iftakhar sir aadab,

sir aapki Ghazal padhi lekin sir matale aur baqi ashar ka wazan mujhe alag laga. ye meri niji rai hai baqi ye meri kund zehni bhi ho sakti hai, aap zyada senior hain mujhse zyada samajhte hain . isliye barah e karam ghazal ke wazan par kuch roshni daliye. gustakhi ke liye muazrat chahunga.

                                           DuaoN Ka Taalib
                                           Aapka chhota Bhai
                                               "Aarish"
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iftakhar sir aadab,

sir aapki Ghazal padhi lekin sir matale aur baqi ashar ka wazan mujhe alag laga. ye meri niji rai hai baqi ye meri kund zehni bhi ho sakti hai, aap zyada senior hain mujhse zyada samajhte hain . isliye barah e karam ghazal ke wazan par kuch roshni daliye. gustakhi ke liye muazrat chahunga.

                                           DuaoN Ka Taalib
                                           Aapka chhota Bhai
                                               "Aarish"


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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob Iftakhar ji....!!!
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Shukriya Hriday jee.
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wah bahut khoob  Applause Applause Applause Applause
Shukriya Suman jee.
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Applause Applause Applause
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very nice
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