Iss Haadse Se Guzarna Hai......!!

by Talat on June 09, 2009, 08:12:25 AM
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«Reply #1 on: June 09, 2009, 08:17:47 AM »
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Wah wah Celmira ji,excellent and very beautiful creation,
aise hi likhte rahena,bahut acha likthe hai aap. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: June 09, 2009, 08:21:06 AM »
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Wah Wah Bahut Khoob, Bahut Umda aur jajbaato.n se bhari ye lines bahut pasadh aayi..!!! Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

Shally.
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«Reply #3 on: June 09, 2009, 08:30:43 AM »
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Talattttttt Ji.. yeh Gazal Behad Khubsoorat Likhi Hai aapne..!! Lafzon Ko Bahut Sunderta Se Sajaaya hai..!!! Applause Applause

Behad Lajawab aur dil Ko Chhoo Jane wali Peshkash Hai.. Bahut Bahut Khoooooooob Talat Ji..!! Daad Kubool Karen..  Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP


 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


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«Reply #4 on: June 09, 2009, 08:33:26 AM »
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bahut khoob lajawab
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«Reply #5 on: June 09, 2009, 11:41:09 AM »
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ek aur bhut khoobsurat paishkash celmira ji bhut hi umda, aap apni ghazlo.n mai har baar ek khoosurat ehsaas paish karti hain aur usse bhut khoob tarhan se ru ba ru karaati hain........mashallah dil se daad hazir hai aapke is kallam par, Allah aapko is sifat se nawaazta rhe hai, bhut khoob.........
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«Reply #6 on: June 09, 2009, 12:26:00 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Bahut Khoob Talat Dost!!!

Ek Se Badhkar Ek A'shaar Hai..padhte Waqt Har Ek Lafz Par Aankhein Rukh Si Jaati Hai..Bahut Hi khooobsurat Ehsaas Pesh Kiye hai Aapne..

Bahut Khoob!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: June 09, 2009, 12:35:44 PM »
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Wah wah Celmira ji,excellent and very beautiful creation,
aise hi likhte rahena,bahut acha likthe hai aap. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Thanks so much dear....bohot bohot shukriya Madhu iss khoobsurat taareef ka !
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«Reply #8 on: June 09, 2009, 12:38:23 PM »
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Tallu,

Chaa gaye boss ! Applause Applause Applause

Aaj kal ghazals bahut likh rahi ho...yeh inspiration kahan se mili Winking tongue3
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«Reply #9 on: June 09, 2009, 03:39:30 PM »
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Bohat khoob Talat bas "Motiye" lafz hota hain kya yeh janna tha aur makhte ka pehla misra thoda kamzor laga......aisa hota to shayed behtar hota

Abhi se hath q tumne dil pe rakh liya talat
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«Reply #10 on: June 09, 2009, 05:07:45 PM »
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Bohat khoob Talat bas "Motiye" lafz hota hain kya yeh janna tha

Motiya lafz Moti yaani pearls ke liye use hota hai...

Mujhe ilm nahin ki aapko urdu aati hai ya nahin.....Ye lafz maine Parveen Shakir Sahiba (jinki shayari ko sar-ankhon pe lagati hoon !!) ki ghazal main dekha tha, aur usi se inspired ho ke apni ghazal main use kiya hai........Neeche un ki kitaab "Khuda-Kalami" se image de rahi hoon !!



Yahan English Fonts main likh deti hoon:

Utri Hai Meri Aankh Main Khwaabon Ki Motiya
Toote Ga Roshni Ka Bhala Silsila Kahan


Parveen Sahiba ne shayad Motiya, pearls ko kaha hai, yaani moti..........aur maine apni ghazal main aansuon ko motiye ki mushabihat di hai..yaani aansuon ko moti ya pearls bola hai  !!



aur makhte ka pehla misra thoda kamzor laga......aisa hota to shayed behtar hota

Abhi se hath q tumne dil pe rakh liya talat

Bohot shukriya Sajid Bhai is suggestion ka......main sochungi iss baare main.....!

Bohot bohot shukriya aapne ise padha aur apne suggestions bhi diye.....  Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: June 09, 2009, 05:11:21 PM »
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Wow Di.. its so beautiful.. Bahoot hi pyara likha hai aapne.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: June 09, 2009, 05:25:55 PM »
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Wah wah Celmira Ji bahut khoob
Kamaal likha hai aapne, very very nice
SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #13 on: June 09, 2009, 06:42:29 PM »
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Wah Wah Bahut Khoob, Bahut Umda aur jajbaato.n se bhari ye lines bahut pasadh aayi..!!! Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

Shally.


Thanks so much Shally dear for reading and appreciating this work Usual Smile Bohot shukriya ...
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«Reply #14 on: June 09, 2009, 07:21:52 PM »
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Bohot achha celmira ji bohot umda ghazal hai, or andaaz bhi badaa pyara hai... misaal bhi ahchi di aap ne, khaas-kar Chashm-e-tar ko ufante darya se tashbih dena bohot achha laga..waah!!
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