jaata hoon(gul)

by gulzargul on September 01, 2008, 04:38:47 AM
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esy apny makaa'n sy jaata hoon
jesy iss jahaa'n sy jaata hoon

tum ko paana meri zindigi hy
bin tumhary jaa'n sy jaata hoon

koi tau roky ga perdes jaany sy
ghar sy iss gumaa'n sy jaata hoon

nahien roka kisi ny keh diya alwida
haath hilaaty smaa'n sy jaata hoon

dil dooba toot gay pul aankhon ke
kesy apny aashiyaa'n sy jaata hoon

ab rishton ko piyar nahi pessa chahye
dil ke armaa'n sy jaata hoon
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«Reply #1 on: September 01, 2008, 04:57:07 AM »
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bhai gulzar...bahoot hi khoob likha hai..aapne dil ko choo gai aapki shayri....taareef ke liye shabd nahi mere pass  Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: September 01, 2008, 05:08:37 AM »
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gulzar ji last 2 lines are amazing
keep it up
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«Reply #3 on: September 01, 2008, 05:20:18 AM »
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thanks bekarar ji

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«Reply #4 on: September 01, 2008, 05:21:26 AM »
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thank u kaushik ji

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«Reply #5 on: September 04, 2008, 05:57:51 PM »
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acha likha he gulzar mahashay man ku pasand aya
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«Reply #6 on: September 05, 2008, 01:29:37 PM »
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thanx a lot miss kanta ji ye mahashay ka kiya matlab hy?


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«Reply #7 on: September 05, 2008, 03:43:41 PM »
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adar kerte hen na jese samman dete hen kisi ku, means respectable honorable.
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«Reply #8 on: September 05, 2008, 09:26:11 PM »
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esy apny makaa'n sy jaata hoon
jesy iss jahaa'n sy jaata hoon

tum ko paana meri zindigi hy
bin tumhary jaa'n sy jaata hoon

koi tau roky ga perdes jaany sy
ghar sy iss gumaa'n sy jaata hoon

nahien roka kisi ny keh diya alwida
haath hilaaty smaa'n sy jaata hoon

dil dooba toot gay pul aankhon ke
kesy apny aashiyaa'n sy jaata hoon

ab rishton ko piyar nahi pessa chahye
dil ke armaa'n sy jaata hoon


Bohot hi Khoob Gul.... Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: September 07, 2008, 01:04:04 PM »
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thanx kanta ji aap ny honor diya mujh ko mager herat hy koi kanta kisi gul ko honor kary

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«Reply #10 on: September 07, 2008, 03:26:46 PM »
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hey mein Kanta hu, kaan Ta nahi or Kanta means lovely girl beloved girl ok. gulzar mahashay wese Kaan Ta pul ki raksha kerta he koe pul tore to use chub jata he. Kaan Ta to pul se prem kerta he.
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«Reply #11 on: September 08, 2008, 12:47:54 PM »
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tao aap ny maan liya ke aap kaanta ho, thanks for rakhsha kanta ji

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«Reply #12 on: September 08, 2008, 01:00:15 PM »
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wesy u r too smart in answers

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«Reply #13 on: September 08, 2008, 03:11:29 PM »
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wo to mein hu tum ku abi pata chala huh, thanks avatar dekho
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«Reply #14 on: September 09, 2008, 12:35:19 PM »
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thank u celmira ji

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