Jab Bhi Tarz-e-amal Gaya

by A.$.H on September 15, 2010, 05:33:11 PM
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Jab bhi tarz e amal gaya mera
Zor dil se nikal gaya mera

Roshni kya chiragh de ga mujhe
Din andheroun main dhal gaya mera

Dhond lijye mujhe jo mumkin ho
Rasta hi badal gaya mera

Duniyan mud jayegi ussi janab
Jis taraf bhi amal gaya mera

Tu gaya hai jo dil ki duniyan se
Hosla hi nikal gaya mera

Zindagi teray ek ishare se
Ashiyana hi jal gaya mera

Uss ki rahmat se zindagi main
Waqt mushkil ka tal gaya mera
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«Reply #1 on: September 15, 2010, 05:40:00 PM »
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Aadaab Janab .... Usual Smile

Aapka is bazm meiN istqbaal hai..... Kafi umdaa kalaam pesh ki hai aapne tahe dil se har ashaar par daad hazir hai....

behad khoob khayaal aur adaygi lagi hume...
Aise hi lokhate rahiye....
Aate rahiye.... Khush rahiye.... Usual Smile
Khuda Hafez...... Usual Smile           
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«Reply #2 on: September 15, 2010, 07:53:35 PM »
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Bohat khoobsurat sharing hai......agar shayer ka nam bhi bata dete to badi meharbani hoti.
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«Reply #3 on: September 15, 2010, 09:41:40 PM »
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achchi takhleeq par aapki khidmat mai daad hazir sath hi saath aapka is khoobsurat mehfil mai khairmaqdam hai umeed hai apne kalaamoN se nawaazte rahenge........keep writing

ek baat kehni thi, aap apne is sher ka misra oola dobara daikh laiN, kuch out sa lag raha hai.......

uski rehmat se zindagi mein
wqt mushkil ka tal gaya mera



aslam
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«Reply #4 on: September 16, 2010, 12:21:08 AM »
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Quote from: A.$.H on September 15, 2010, 05:33:11 PM
Jab bhi tarz e amal gaya mera
Zor dil se nikal gaya mera

Roshni kya chiragh de ga mujhe
Din andheroun main dhal gaya mera

Dhond lijye mujhe jo mumkin ho
Rasta hi badal gaya mera

Duniyan mud jayegi ussi janab
Jis taraf bhi amal gaya mera

Tu gaya hai jo dil ki duniyan se
Hosla hi nikal gaya mera

Zindagi teray ek ishare se
Ashiyana hi jal gaya mera

Uss ki rahmat se zindagi main
Waqt mushkil ka tal gaya mera

Kalaam ke ehsaas bahut khoob lage ... thanks 4 sharing.. khush rahen..

duaaon ke saath...
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A.$.H
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«Reply #5 on: September 17, 2010, 11:05:45 AM »
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Bohat bohat shukriya app sab ka...
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«Reply #6 on: September 17, 2010, 11:14:07 AM »
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aji bahut khoobb sahab maja ayaa bas meri thodi urdu kamjor he.... gar khata maaf ho to mujhe tarz -e- amal ka matlab bata dijiye...
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«Reply #7 on: September 17, 2010, 11:20:07 AM »
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Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on September 17, 2010, 11:14:07 AM
aji bahut khoobb sahab maja ayaa bas meri thodi urdu kamjor he.... gar khata maaf ho to mujhe tarz -e- amal ka matlab bata dijiye...

Shukri app ka...

Tarz-e-amal means Amal karne ka tarikha Amal means Good deeds
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«Reply #8 on: September 17, 2010, 11:28:11 AM »
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ohh apka bahut shukriya dost~
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«Reply #9 on: September 17, 2010, 11:31:56 AM »
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Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on September 17, 2010, 11:28:11 AM
ohh apka bahut shukriya dost~

app ki bhi Shukriya
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«Reply #10 on: September 18, 2010, 04:48:19 PM »
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Wah wah wah Janab A$H Ji. Sab se pahle to aapka yoindia pe inteqbaal karta hoon. Kamaal ki ghazal hai janab ye aapki. Aik aik sher gauhar-e-naayaab hai. Bahut hi meyaari, murassa aur purmaghz ghazal hai. Aap zara aakhri sher aikbaar dekh len. Aapko aisi shaandaar ghazal k liye mubaarakbaad k saath saath hazaroN daad qubul kijiye.

(Waquif Ansari)

Quote from: A.$.H on September 15, 2010, 05:33:11 PM
Jab bhi tarz e amal gaya mera
Zor dil se nikal gaya mera

Roshni kya chiragh de ga mujhe
Din andheroun main dhal gaya mera

Dhond lijye mujhe jo mumkin ho
Rasta hi badal gaya mera

Duniyan mud jayegi ussi janab
Jis taraf bhi amal gaya mera

Tu gaya hai jo dil ki duniyan se
Hosla hi nikal gaya mera

Zindagi teray ek ishare se
Ashiyana hi jal gaya mera

Uss ki rahmat se zindagi main
Waqt mushkil ka tal gaya mera
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«Reply #11 on: September 20, 2010, 04:31:45 AM »
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Quote from: waquif ansari on September 18, 2010, 04:48:19 PM
Wah wah wah Janab A$H Ji. Sab se pahle to aapka yoindia pe inteqbaal karta hoon. Kamaal ki ghazal hai janab ye aapki. Aik aik sher gauhar-e-naayaab hai. Bahut hi meyaari, murassa aur purmaghz ghazal hai. Aap zara aakhri sher aikbaar dekh len. Aapko aisi shaandaar ghazal k liye mubaarakbaad k saath saath hazaroN daad qubul kijiye.

(Waquif Ansari)


App Ka Bohat Bohat Shukriya Janaab
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