Jee rahaa hoon: haqeeqat mein beyjaan hoon!

by abdbundeli on August 01, 2008, 02:07:25 PM
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«Reply #15 on: June 30, 2009, 02:12:35 PM »
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abd ji
aapko aaj pahli baar padha bahut acha laga
aap yunhi likhte rahiye hume aapki ghazalon ka intazaar rahega
nira
Thanks a lot, Nira ji! Gaye haftey kayee gazaleyn   'post' keen theen! You may plz. visit my profile at:
http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/profile.html;u=23622;sa=showPosts;start=15
and then a few latter pages as well.
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«Reply #16 on: June 30, 2009, 08:05:48 PM »
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Delighted Mr. Abdbundeli, a little correction

Zee = jee and beyzaan = beyjaan
In Urdu Z Ze and J Jeem are two different letters and with different pronunciation. You have written word Beyjaan correctly in the middle.
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«Reply #17 on: July 01, 2009, 07:02:46 AM »
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Delighted Mr. Abdbundeli, a little correction

Zee = jee and beyzaan = beyjaan
In Urdu Z Ze and J Jeem are two different letters and with different pronunciation. You have written word Beyjaan correctly in the middle.
Thanks MH
Thanks Mr MHussain!
You're perfectly correct! Most of my data entry work is done by my DEO, who knows almost no Urdu! I, generally, do the copy-paste work! I'd noticed the mistakes; but forgot to correct the title. I don't say that I know a lot of Urdu or that my Urdu is good. I also make a lot many mistakes in writing Urdu words; my mother tongue being Hindi. As Urdu uses a combination of Arabian and Farsi alphabets, all Arabian words are to be written as they are written in the Arabian language, and Farsi words as written in Farsi; it becomes pretty difficult for a person like me, who though knows a huge number of Urdu words, to write them correctly. I'm sorry, but I can't help: yet I've improved to some extent, and  I'm endeavoring to improve it further! I took just 4 month's informal Urdu education; otherwise, the medium of my education were Hindi / English or Sanskrit languages at different stages of my studies. You may visit the last page of my YoIndia profile, to know a little more about me!
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«Reply #18 on: July 02, 2009, 02:41:03 PM »
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Dear sir,
pleased to have your response, I have seen many members who can't write Urdu with perfection which is not a problem, but they don't even try to cope with the correct pronunciation of Urdu word, and this is not as easy as I feel.
But, as you know most of the words if written incorrect reflects a different meaning, as Jee = living and Zee = keeper of some quality as Zee-shan, if one write zeeshan as jeeshan, it's total loss of meaning.

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«Reply #19 on: July 03, 2009, 06:02:57 AM »
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Dear sir,
pleased to have your response, I have seen many members who can't write Urdu with perfection which is not a problem, but they don't even try to cope with the correct pronunciation of Urdu word, and this is not as easy as I feel.
But, as you know most of the words if written incorrect reflects a different meaning, as Jee = living and Zee = keeper of some quality as Zee-shan, if one write zeeshan as jeeshan, it's total loss of meaning.
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MH
You're absolutely right! Thanks!
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«Reply #20 on: July 03, 2009, 06:21:29 AM »
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Meizbaanee hai zaahid kee? Hairaan hoon!
Kyaa karoon saaqiyah? mein pareishaan hoon!!

Us kaa yeemaan hai! Woh, us kaa paaband hai!
Jab ki, mein eik adnaa hoon: insaan hoon!!

Eik hee meyree mahboobaa hai: jaan ley!
Rind hoon: may kaa aashiq hoon: yeemaan hoon!!

Meiney toubaa naheen kee hai: sun, shak na kar;
Us key weeraan ghar mein hoon: weeraan hoon!!

Teyrey pahloo mein beyfikra thaa; shaad thaa!
Ab yahaan hoon, to, zerey nigahbaan hoon!!

Tujh sey nazareyn milaaney ko beychain hoon!
Yeh qafas hai hadeedee: fansee jaan hoon!!

Mujh ko shak hai, ki, zindaa hoon, yaa mar chukaa?
Zibh honaa hai! Lagtaa hai: haiwaan hoon!!

Jaa waheen: har bashar, jahaan aazaad hai!
Us kee nazaroun mein, mein eik hullaan hoon!!

Har taraf, sirf jallaad-o-saiyaad hain:
Jee rahaa hoon: haqeeqat mein beyjaan hoon!

Yeh zarooree naheen, ki, woh hai aadmee!
Tukhm-e-aadam hoon mein! Apnee pahichaan hoon!!

Un kaa kahnaa hai: jannat key dar pai hoon mein!
Lamhey bhar mein, maqaam-e-paristaan hoon!!

Din mein kuchh? Raat mein kuchh alag hain? 'Abd',
Mazhabaani mukeedat sey, anjaan hoon!!
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Wah Wah Abd Ji, Bahut Khoob, Hamesha ki tarah! Applause Applause
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«Reply #21 on: July 03, 2009, 05:13:22 PM »
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Wah Wah Abd Ji, Bahut Khoob, Hamesha ki tarah! Applause Applause
Thanks a lot, Deepati!
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«Reply #23 on: April 15, 2013, 02:24:44 PM »
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Shukriyah, Ravi ji! Bahut-bahut shukriyah!

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