Jee rahaa hoon: haqeeqat mein beyjaan hoon!

by abdbundeli on August 01, 2008, 02:07:25 PM
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Meizbaanee hai zaahid kee? Hairaan hoon!
Kyaa karoon saaqiyah? mein pareishaan hoon!!

Us kaa yeemaan hai! Woh, us kaa paaband hai!
Jab ki, mein eik adnaa hoon: insaan hoon!!

Eik hee meyree mahboobaa hai: jaan ley!
Rind hoon: may kaa aashiq hoon: yeemaan hoon!!

Meiney toubaa naheen kee hai: sun, shak na kar;
Us key weeraan ghar mein hoon: weeraan hoon!!

Teyrey pahloo mein beyfikra thaa; shaad thaa!
Ab yahaan hoon, to, zerey nigahbaan hoon!!

Tujh sey nazareyn milaaney ko beychain hoon!
Yeh qafas hai hadeedee: fansee jaan hoon!!

Mujh ko shak hai, ki, zindaa hoon, yaa mar chukaa?
Zibh honaa hai! Lagtaa hai: haiwaan hoon!!

Jaa waheen: har bashar, jahaan aazaad hai!
Us kee nazaroun mein, mein eik hullaan hoon!!

Har taraf, sirf jallaad-o-saiyaad hain:
Jee rahaa hoon: haqeeqat mein beyjaan hoon!

Yeh zarooree naheen, ki, woh hai aadmee!
Tukhm-e-aadam hoon mein! Apnee pahichaan hoon!!

Un kaa kahnaa hai: jannat key dar pai hoon mein!
Lamhey bhar mein, maqaam-e-paristaan hoon!!

Din mein kuchh? Raat mein kuchh alag hain? 'Abd',
Mazhabaani mukeedat sey, anjaan hoon!!
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«Reply #1 on: August 01, 2008, 04:18:05 PM »
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bahoot khoob abd ji!
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«Reply #2 on: January 26, 2009, 11:36:01 AM »
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bahoot khoob abd ji!
Thanks sarthika ji!
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«Reply #3 on: January 26, 2009, 11:40:35 AM »
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Meizbaanee hai zaahid kee? Hairaan hoon!
Kyaa karoon saaqiyah? mein pareishaan hoon!!

Us kaa yeemaan hai! Woh, us kaa paaband hai!
Jab ki, mein eik adnaa hoon: insaan hoon!!

Eik hee meyree mahboobaa hai: jaan ley!
Rind hoon: may kaa aashiq hoon: yeemaan hoon!!

Meiney toubaa naheen kee hai: sun, shak na kar;
Us key weeraan ghar mein hoon: weeraan hoon!!

Teyrey pahloo mein beyfikra thaa; shaad thaa!
Ab yahaan hoon, to, zerey nigahbaan hoon!!

Tujh sey nazareyn milaaney ko beychain hoon!
Yeh qafas hai hadeedee: fansee jaan hoon!!

Mujh ko shak hai, ki, zindaa hoon, yaa mar chukaa?
Zibh honaa hai! Lagtaa hai: haiwaan hoon!!

Jaa waheen: har bashar, jahaan aazaad hai!
Us kee nazaroun mein, mein eik hullaan hoon!!

Har taraf, sirf jallaad-o-saiyaad hain:
Jee rahaa hoon: haqeeqat mein beyjaan hoon!

Yeh zarooree naheen, ki, woh hai aadmee!
Tukhm-e-aadam hoon mein! Apnee pahichaan hoon!!

Un kaa kahnaa hai: jannat key dar pai hoon mein!
Lamhey bhar mein, maqaam-e-paristaan hoon!!

Din mein kuchh? Raat mein kuchh alag hain? 'Abd',
Mazhabaani mukeedat sey, anjaan hoon!!

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«Reply #4 on: February 18, 2009, 06:11:40 PM »
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Thanks Roja ji!
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«Reply #5 on: February 22, 2009, 07:42:41 AM »
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Garg Saahab,

pranaam,

yuun to apa ki puuri Ghazal behad achchi hai, par mujhe yeh sher behad pasand aaye. bhad munfarid andaaz hai aap ka... meri aur se daad aur mubaaraq-baad qubuul keejiyegaa... aur ummeed hai aap ko aage paDhne ka mauqa milta rahega....




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Meizbaanee hai zaahid kee? Hairaan hoon!
Kyaa karoon saaqiyah? mein pareishaan hoon!!

Eik hee meyree mahboobaa hai: jaan ley!
Rind hoon: may kaa aashiq hoon: yeemaan hoon!!

Meiney toubaa naheen kee hai: sun, shak na kar;
Us key weeraan ghar mein hoon: weeraan hoon!!

Teyrey pahloo mein beyfikra thaa; shaad thaa!
Ab yahaan hoon, to, zerey nigahbaan hoon!!

Tujh sey nazareyn milaaney ko beychain hoon!
Yeh qafas hai hadeedee: fansee jaan hoon!!

Har taraf, sirf jallaad-o-saiyaad hain:
Jee rahaa hoon: haqeeqat mein beyjaan hoon!

Yeh zarooree naheen, ki, woh hai aadmee!
Tukhm-e-aadam hoon mein! apnee pahichaan hoon!!
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«Reply #6 on: February 22, 2009, 07:57:23 AM »
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Garg Saahab,
pranaam,
yuun to apa ki puuri Ghazal behad achchi hai, par mujhe yeh sher behad pasand aaye. bhad munfarid andaaz hai aap ka... meri aur se daad aur mubaaraq-baad qubuul keejiyegaa... aur ummeed hai aap ko aage paDhne ka mauqa milta rahega....
Divyam ji! Sadaa saanand raheyn! Dhanyawaad! 70 kaa huun! Likhney ki raftaar kuchh kam to zaroor huyi hai; par likhnaa 'jeewan' hai meyraa! Aap jaisey 'shubhchintatoun' ki 'duaa' sey khaasaa thheek-thhaak hoon, aur 'saamaanya' jeewan jii rahaa hoon! Aap likhtey raheyn; ham zaroor hi padhhney ki koshish mein raheyngey!
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«Reply #7 on: February 22, 2009, 12:08:48 PM »
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Divyam ji! Sadaa saanand raheyn! Dhanyawaad! 70 kaa huun! Likhney ki raftaar kuchh kam to zaroor huyi hai; par likhnaa 'jeewan' hai meyraa! Aap jaisey 'shubhchintatoun' ki 'duaa' sey khaasaa thheek-thhaak hoon, aur 'saamaanya' jeewan jii rahaa hoon! Aap likhtey raheyn; ham zaroor hi padhhney ki koshish mein raheyngey!
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Garg saahab,

aap ne thoda bohat apne baare me.n bataaya, jaan kar behad achcha laga aur aap is umr me.n bhi apne is josh ko banaaye huye hai.n, yeh behad khushii kii baat hai... meri pratahana hai ki bhagwaan aap ko lambi umr de aur aap yuu.n hi likhte rahe.n..

maine kuchh din pahle ek tarahi Ghazal kahi thii, agar aap waqt nikal kar tafseel se us par raa'ey de sake.n aur meri Ghaltiaan sudhaar de.n to baDi mehrbaani hogii. mai.n Ghazal isi section me.n post kar raha huu.n. is ummeed ke saath ki aap usay zaruur dekhe.nge..

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«Reply #8 on: February 22, 2009, 01:57:59 PM »
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Garg saahab,
aap ne thoda bohat apne baare me.n bataaya, jaan kar behad achcha laga aur aap is umr me.n bhi apne is josh ko banaaye huye hai.n, yeh behad khushii kii baat hai... meri pratahana hai ki bhagwaan aap ko lambi umr de aur aap yuu.n hi likhte rahe.n..

maine kuchh din pahle ek tarahi Ghazal kahi thii, agar aap waqt nikal kar tafseel se us par raa'ey de sake.n aur meri Ghaltiaan sudhaar de.n to baDi mehrbaani hogii. mai.n Ghazal isi section me.n post kar raha huu.n. is ummeed ke saath ki aap usay zaruur dekhe.nge..
divyam(Mayank)
Mayank ji!
Mein aapki gazal zaroor hi padhhuungaa! You're welcome!
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«Reply #9 on: February 22, 2009, 02:08:18 PM »
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Bahoot hi khoob abd ji Thumbs UP
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«Reply #10 on: February 22, 2009, 02:34:08 PM »
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Bahoot hi khoob abd ji Thumbs UP
Thanks a lot, salma786 ji!
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«Reply #11 on: June 29, 2009, 05:00:01 PM »
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Mr. Abdbundeli
Nice to know more about you and your age, I am too young to suggest.
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«Reply #12 on: June 30, 2009, 03:51:50 AM »
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Mr. Abdbundeli
Nice to know more about you and your age, I am too young to suggest.
I'm obliged! But, here age is no bar! You've all the rights to speak! Waisey bhi 'Naye zaahidoun' keen baateyn barhee hee dilchasp hoteen hain! You're welcome!
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«Reply #13 on: June 30, 2009, 12:58:35 PM »
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Meizbaanee hai zaahid kee? Hairaan hoon!
Kyaa karoon saaqiyah? mein pareishaan hoon!!

Us kaa yeemaan hai! Woh, us kaa paaband hai!
Jab ki, mein eik adnaa hoon: insaan hoon!!

Eik hee meyree mahboobaa hai: jaan ley!
Rind hoon: may kaa aashiq hoon: yeemaan hoon!!

Meiney toubaa naheen kee hai: sun, shak na kar;
Us key weeraan ghar mein hoon: weeraan hoon!!

Teyrey pahloo mein beyfikra thaa; shaad thaa!
Ab yahaan hoon, to, zerey nigahbaan hoon!!

Tujh sey nazareyn milaaney ko beychain hoon!
Yeh qafas hai hadeedee: fansee jaan hoon!!

Mujh ko shak hai, ki, zindaa hoon, yaa mar chukaa?
Zibah honaa hai! lagtaa hai: haiwaan hoon!!

Jaa waheen: har bashar, jahaan aazaad hai!
Us kee nazaroun mein, mein eik hullaan hoon!!

Har taraf, sirf jallaad-o-saiyaad hain:
Jee rahaa hoon: haqeeqat mein beyjaan hoon!

Yeh zarooree naheen, ki, woh hai aadmee!
Tukhm-e-aadam hoon mein! apnee pahichaan hoon!!

Un kaa kahnaa hai: jannat key dar pai hoon mein!
Lamhey bhar mein, muqaam-e-paristaan hoon!!

Din mein kuchh? Raat mein kuchh alag hain? 'abd',
Mazhabaani mukeedat sey, anjaan hoon!!
                   *******
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abd ji kitni tareef ki jaye aapke kalaam ki? mashallah bhut khoob
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«Reply #14 on: June 30, 2009, 01:52:34 PM »
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abd ji
aapko aaj pahli baar padha bahut acha laga
aap yunhi likhte rahiye hume aapki ghazalon ka intazaar rahega
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