Jeet hai unkee, haartaa huun mein!

by abdbundeli on August 28, 2009, 05:38:39 PM
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«Reply #30 on: September 01, 2009, 01:19:20 PM »
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Bahut khoob Abd ji and Sayyid ji...  Applause
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«Reply #31 on: September 01, 2009, 05:14:58 PM »
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Bahut khoob Abd ji and Sayyid ji...  Applause
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«Reply #32 on: September 02, 2009, 05:04:22 PM »
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Roz hee to pukaartaa huun mein!
Bas yunhi din guzaartaa huun mein!!

Aasmaanoun kii har siyaahee ko;
Roshanee sey buhaartaa huun mein!

Jang hai dour-e-azal sey jaaree;
Jeet hai unkee, haartaa huun mein!

Har silah us kaa nahin, meyraa hai;
Khud ko bey-khud ho maartaa huun mein!

Wajan-e-yeemaan-o-wafaa key saarey
Pairahan, khud utaartaa huun mein!

Raat aatee hai; raat jaatee hai;
Silwateyn hii sudhaartaa huun mein!

Khwaab aagosh mein paatey tum ko;
Zulf dahroun sanwaartaa huun mein!

Woh, 'abd', mujh ko pyaar kartey hain;
Aur, unko dulaartaa huun mein!

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Wah wah... bahut khoob Uncle ji  Applause Applause
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«Reply #33 on: September 02, 2009, 05:46:22 PM »
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Wah wah... bahut khoob Uncle ji  Applause Applause
Thanks Roja!
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«Reply #34 on: September 03, 2009, 03:21:50 PM »
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Bahut khoob sayyid randeri ji! Waaqiyii bahut hee khoob! Kyaa baat hai!! Waah!

Nazar mein aaye: roo-b-roo thaa kahkashaan unkaa!
Husn har zarrey mein paithhaa yahaan-wahaan unkaa!
Eik muttahdah anaasir mein kyaa samaaye woh:
Jigar mein woh hain; aur, naam zubaan par un kaa!!

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zabardast! abd ji..
Takheer ke liye sharminda hun..

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«Reply #35 on: September 03, 2009, 03:22:44 PM »
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Bahut khoob Abd ji and Sayyid ji...  Applause

Shukriya....
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«Reply #36 on: September 03, 2009, 05:41:18 PM »
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Laaiq-e-sad ehtiraam abd bundeli ji..

Aap ki rafaqat main bohot kuch seekha, or us ke asaraat bhi mahsoos kar raha hun, aap ka bohot bohot shukriya...
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«Reply #37 on: September 08, 2009, 03:00:04 AM »
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Ek sang dil se pyar kiye jaa rahi hu mai
Meena-e-dil se dard piye jaa rahi hu mai

Hai unka nazariya, ki mohabbat gunah hai
Her roj ye gunah kiye jaa rahi hu mai

Labrej mohabbat se diya dil mujhe ya rab
Jo kuch atha  kiya, vo diye jaa rahi hu mai

Gam dene wale shukriya, kuch to diya mujhe
Ye tohfa tere saat liye jaa rahi hu mai

Apna Zakham khud se rafoo ho nahi sakta
Haan, doosron ke zakham siye jaa rahi hu mai

Zalim hai vo "Roja", magar vo muskura bhi de
Umeed ke maron se, jiye jaa rahi hu mai.


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«Reply #38 on: January 02, 2011, 03:06:15 PM »
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Laaiq-e-sad ehtiraam abd bundeli ji..

Aap ki rafaqat main bohot kuch seekha, or us ke asaraat bhi mahsoos kar raha hun, aap ka bohot bohot shukriya...
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Randeri ji! Yah aapkaa barhappan hai! You're always welcome!
Shukraguzaar huun!

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«Reply #39 on: January 02, 2011, 03:11:47 PM »
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Mashallah Bohat Umda Rahi Aapki Ye Ghazal Abd Ji..

Khuda Aapko Har Khushi Se Nawaaze,.

Aameen
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«Reply #40 on: January 02, 2011, 03:18:19 PM »
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Ek sang dil se pyar kiye jaa rahi hu mai
Meena-e-dil se dard piye jaa rahi hu mai

Hai unka nazariya, ki mohabbat gunah hai
Her roj ye gunah kiye jaa rahi hu mai

Labrej mohabbat se diya dil mujhe ya rab
Jo kuch atha  kiya, vo diye jaa rahi hu mai

Gam dene wale shukriya, kuch to diya mujhe
Ye tohfa tere saat liye jaa rahi hu mai

Apna Zakham khud se rafoo ho nahi sakta
Haan, doosron ke zakham siye jaa rahi hu mai

Zalim hai vo "Roja", magar vo muskura bhi de
Umeed ke maron se, jiye jaa rahi hu mai.

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Wo meyraa yaar hai: ho laakh sangdil chaahey:
Mom honey mein bahut deyr kahaan lagtee hai!
Meyree baahon mein wo taaseer hai, 'abd', jis sey,
Ta,anukon key ba'ad koh pighal jaatey hain!!

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«Reply #41 on: January 02, 2011, 03:27:55 PM »
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Quote from: Azeem on January 02, 2011, 03:11:47 PM
Mashallah Bohat Umda Rahi Aapki Ye Ghazal Abd Ji..

Khuda Aapko Har Khushi Se Nawaaze,.

Aameen


Azeem ji! Shukriyah! Aapkee duaayen baatinee hain, to pur asar hongeen hee!
WOH aapko 'sapariwaar' khush aur seyhatmand rakhey! Har nayaa saal aapkee khushiyon mein barkkat pai barakkat laaye!
Ameen!
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«Reply #42 on: January 02, 2011, 03:33:32 PM »
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Azeem ji! Shukriyah! Aapkee duaayen baatinee hain, to pur asar hongeen hee!
WOH aapko 'sapariwaar' khush aur seyhatmand rakhey! Har nayaa saal aapkee khushiyon mein barkkat pai barakkat laaye!
Ameen!
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«Reply #43 on: January 05, 2011, 06:14:31 PM »
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bahut khoobsurat ghazal abd ji
mazaa aa gaya.
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«Reply #44 on: January 05, 2011, 06:15:37 PM »
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roza ji bahut khoob
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Quote from: Roja on September 08, 2009, 03:00:04 AM
Ek sang dil se pyar kiye jaa rahi hu mai
Meena-e-dil se dard piye jaa rahi hu mai

Hai unka nazariya, ki mohabbat gunah hai
Her roj ye gunah kiye jaa rahi hu mai

Labrej mohabbat se diya dil mujhe ya rab
Jo kuch atha  kiya, vo diye jaa rahi hu mai

Gam dene wale shukriya, kuch to diya mujhe
Ye tohfa tere saat liye jaa rahi hu mai

Apna Zakham khud se rafoo ho nahi sakta
Haan, doosron ke zakham siye jaa rahi hu mai

Zalim hai vo "Roja", magar vo muskura bhi de
Umeed ke maron se, jiye jaa rahi hu mai.


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