Unkee Aankhoun Mein, Do A’ainey Mil Gaye

by ishu_singh10 on August 01, 2010, 01:35:30 PM
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Unkee Aankhoun Mein, Do A’ainey Mil Gaye!
Zindagee Ko Naye Maainey Mil Gaye!!

Gouhar-E-Aab Palkoun Sey Jhalkeyngey Kyoun,
Jab Ki, Shabnam Sey Ley Itra, Gul Khil Gaye?

Hamney Khojaa Unhain: Is Jagah, Us Jagah!
Ab Wahee, Deed Ko Roo-B-Roo Mil Gaye!!

Ghar Hai Unkaa Basar; Ham Rahey Dar-B-Dar:
Kankarhoun Sey Thakey Paanw Chhil-Chhil Gaye!

Dard Ney Meyrey Unkaa Jigar Chhoo Liyaa!
Woh Hi Kyaa, Har Taraf Koh Tak Hil Gaye!!

Haal Apnaa Kisey Wah Sunaaye,
Jiskey, Seeney Mein Mahfooz, Hamdil Gaye?

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«Reply #1 on: August 27, 2012, 06:44:53 PM »
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Unkee Aankhoun Mein, Do A’ainey Mil Gaye!
Zindagee Ko Naye Maainey Mil Gaye!!

Gouhar-E-Aab Palkoun Sey Jhalkeyngey Kyoun,
Jab Ki, Shabnam Sey Ley Itra, Gul Khil Gaye?

Hamney Khojaa Unhain: Is Jagah, Us Jagah!
Ab Wahee, Deed Ko Roo-B-Roo Mil Gaye!!

Ghar Hai Unkaa Basar; Ham Rahey Dar-B-Dar:
Kankarhoun Sey Thakey Paanw Chhil-Chhil Gaye!

Dard Ney Meyrey Unkaa Jigar Chhoo Liyaa!
Woh Hi Kyaa, Har Taraf Koh Tak Hil Gaye!!

Haal Apnaa Kisey Wah Sunaaye,
Jiskey, Seeney Mein Mahfooz, Hamdil Gaye?




ishu_singh10 ji!
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Aapney meyree gazal apney naam sey 'post' kar dee: aur 'NM' yaanee 'NOT MINE' likhnaa bhuul gaye! Ab sudhaar deejiye! Yah gazal bahut pahley 'publish' ho chukee hai! Maqtey kaa sher jo aapney adhuuraa chhod diyaa hai, main pooraa kiye dey rahaa huun:-

Haal Apnaa Kisey Wah Sunaaye,'abd',
Jiskey, Seeney Mein Mahfooz, Hamdil Gaye?


Aapney isey, aisaa lagtaa hai, 'shers.in' sey copy kar paste kiyaa hai, aur maqtey key sher sey meyraa 'takhllus' hataa diyaa hai!

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Meyree yah gazal isee site (yoindia) par, neechey likhey 'title' key saath « on: July 13, 2010, 02:14:33 AM » post hokar saikadon logon ney padhee aur khoob saraahee jaa chukee hai hai
"Hamney khojaa unhain: is jagah, us jagah!"

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«Reply #2 on: August 27, 2012, 06:55:57 PM »
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ishu ji apko nm likhna chahiye tha .
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