jhooth kahte ho.................MKV

by mkv on December 19, 2012, 04:51:09 AM
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Ab mujhe kaise tum bhulaaoge
mahfiileN kaise tum sajaaoge

jhooth kahte ho gir gaya tinka
kab talak aaNsu ye chupaaoge

ab tumhari hi aas hai mujhko
kyaa mujhe tum bhi chhorr  jaaoge

dard e dil ab sahaa naheeN jaata
pyaar se kab gale lagaooge

hai bharosa ‘mukesh ‘ kee khaatir
lautkar eik din to aaoge
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«Reply #1 on: December 19, 2012, 04:54:41 AM »
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Ab mujhe kaise tum bhulaaoge
mahfiileN kaise tum sajaaoge

jhooth kahte ho gir gaya tinka
kab talak aaNsu ye chupaaoge

ab tumhari hi aas hai mujhko
kyaa mujhe tum bhi chhorr  jaaoge

dard e dil ab sahaa naheeN jaata
pyaar se kab gale lagaooge

hai bharosa ‘mukesh ‘ kee khaatir
lautkar eik din to aaoge



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«Reply #2 on: December 19, 2012, 05:07:00 AM »
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waah waah mukesh bhai kya koob likhai ... Applause Applause Applause

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hume umeed hai eik din tum vapas aaoge zaroor
dard e dil ko traah (araam) pohonchaoge zaroor

galee lipatke humare tum khushi k ansuu bahaoge zaroor

humare puchne par k roo kun rahe ho ?? ..
humare puchne par k roo kun rahe ho ??

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 ye jhoot bol kar, hume hasaaaaoge zroor ....  

tum aaoge zaroor .. ..
tum aaoge zaroor . ..
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«Reply #3 on: December 19, 2012, 05:45:34 AM »
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MASHALLAH BOHOT KHOOB LIKHA HAI MUKESH JI  Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley icon_salut icon_salut

YAAD THA MUJHE WOH MANZAR
JAB TUM JHOOT KAHETE THE
PHIR BHI DIL YAKEEN KARTA THA
LAGTA THA TUM SACH BOLTE THE
NA MALUM KYA THA ISKE PICHE TUMHARA PYAAR YA DHOKAA
PHIR BHI DIL YAKEEN KARTA THA
TUMHARI HAR BAAT PAR PYAAR AATA THA
KAHAN GAYE WOH DIN KAHA GAYE MERE PYAAR KE PALCHIN...

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«Reply #4 on: December 19, 2012, 06:15:24 AM »
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Waaaaah Mukesh Ji...bahut khoob...
dili mubarakbaad kubool farmaayen...

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«Reply #5 on: December 19, 2012, 06:15:34 AM »
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kya baat hai mukesh jee bahut hi khoob likha hai tumne dheron daad qubool kare khaas kar ke yeh sher toh bahut hi khoob raha

Jhoot kahte ho gir gaya tinka
kab talak aansoon yeh chipaaoge

bahut bahut bahut hi khoob
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«Reply #6 on: December 19, 2012, 06:33:51 AM »
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Bahut khoob  , kya  khubsurat ghazal hai aaur kitni khuburat baat kahdeee is sher mein.

jhooth kahte ho gir gaya tinka
kab talak aaNsu ye chipaaoge


 Dheron daad aur mubarakbaad is sher ke sath :

Gar ye zor e qalam raha , ek din
Shamma - e -Bazm  ban ke chhaoge
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«Reply #7 on: December 19, 2012, 06:35:54 AM »
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Ab mujhe kaise tum bhulaaoge
mahfiileN kaise tum sajaaoge

jhooth kahte ho gir gaya tinka
kab talak aaNsu ye chupaaoge

ab tumhari hi aas hai mujhko
kyaa mujhe tum bhi chhorr  jaaoge

dard e dil ab sahaa naheeN jaata
pyaar se kab gale lagaooge

hai bharosa ‘mukesh ‘ kee khaatir
lautkar eik din to aaoge


wonderful ghazal mkv jee. excellant and nice wordings Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Shabash  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #8 on: December 19, 2012, 06:41:36 AM »
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Waah bhaai Jaan kyaa mast likhaa hai.
Ab mujhe kaise tum bhulaaoge
mahfiileN kaise tum sajaaoge
Wakai Joker ke bin party me kaise maza aa sakta hai.
jhooth kahte ho gir gaya tinka
kab talak aaNsu ye chupaaoge
Ye shar zabardast hai. Wakai ye shar Haasil-ae-gazal rahaa.  
ab tumhari hi aas hai mujhko
kyaa mujhe tum bhi chhorr  jaaoge
Nahi jee kabhii nahi.  
dard e dil ab sahaa naheeN jaata
pyaar se kab gale lagaooge
Eid tak to intizaar karo meri jaan. Eid ke din hi gale milte hai ham
hai bharosa ‘mukesh ‘ kee khaatir
lautkar eik din to aaoge
Ham to kaheeN gaye hi nahi jo lautkar aayeNge.  
Mukesh bhaai aapki es rachna ne dil jeet liya. Maza aa gaya. Aese hi likhte rahiye. Khush rahiye.

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«Reply #9 on: December 19, 2012, 06:51:46 AM »
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main hasan bhaai ke khyaal pooree trah sahmat hoon dheron daad
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«Reply #10 on: December 19, 2012, 07:20:16 AM »
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«Reply #11 on: December 19, 2012, 07:58:47 AM »
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Superbbbbbb Awesome ........Zabardast Creation Mkv Ji .

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«Reply #12 on: December 19, 2012, 11:46:44 AM »
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shukriya bhai
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«Reply #13 on: December 19, 2012, 01:16:46 PM »
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MKV jee Aadaab!

Wallaah janab kia kahne waaH behad khoobsurat gazal kahi
hai janab... bade hi umdaa ahsaas O khayaal aur behad khoob
rawaani... Usual Smile

Janab chhoti bher meiN Umdaa gazal kah jaana kafi badi fankari
hai sukhanwar kii... aapki is kalaam par hazaaroN dili daad
O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile


Likhate rahiye... Aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

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«Reply #14 on: December 19, 2012, 01:28:46 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut khoob Mukesh ji...!!!
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