jindagi ko toot te dekha hai

by saahill on June 29, 2012, 11:17:59 AM
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dil toot gaya to kya hua yahan jindagi ko toot te dekha hai ,
har shaks jo jurha tha mujse un sabko ruthte dekha hai .

Patjarh mein girte hain shaakhon se suna tha ,
ruth jaye jo mausam fizaon se to baharon mein paton ko sukhte dekha hai

karte hain waada zindagi ke safar mein sath chalne ka ,
un humsafar ke hath se hath chhut te dekha hai

Anmol hoti hai zindagi jo karte hain daawa jiske liye .
Uski saanson ko kaurhiyon ke dhaam mein bechte dekha hai
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«Reply #1 on: June 29, 2012, 12:03:49 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: June 29, 2012, 12:17:53 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: June 29, 2012, 09:11:14 PM »
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«Reply #6 on: June 29, 2012, 10:30:07 PM »
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wah wah... bahut acchi gazal likha hai aapne saahill jee.   Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: June 30, 2012, 12:17:29 AM »
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«Reply #9 on: June 30, 2012, 01:21:12 PM »
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Bahut hi khoobsurat peshkash saahil jee.
laajavaab, kya baat hai.
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umdaa :D khoob likha hai.
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