: Jise karaar na aaya bhula ke mujhe. " Faraz"

by R.M. Dixit on April 30, 2011, 12:04:52 PM
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              Payaam aaye hain us bewafa ka mujhe
              Jise karaar na aaya bhula ke mujhe.

              Judaiyan ho to aisi ki umra bhar na mile
              Fareb do to jara silsile bara-ke mujhe.

              Nashe se kam to nahin yaade-yaar ka aalem
              Ki le Ura hai koi dosh* per hawa ke mujhe.    *Kandha

              Main khud ko bhool chuka tha mager jahan wale
              Udas chor gaye aaina dikha ke mujhe.

              Bichi hui hai mere aansuon main ek tasveer
              Wo sangedil dekh raha hai muskara ke mujhe.
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«Reply #1 on: April 30, 2011, 12:07:26 PM »
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              Payaam aaye hain us bewafa ka mujhe
              Jise karaar na aaya bhula ke mujhe.

              Judaiyan ho to aisi ki umra bhar na mile
              Fareb do to jara silsile bara-ke mujhe.

              Nashe se kam to nahin yaade-yaar ka aalem
              Ki le fura hai koi dosah ke hawa ke mujhe.

              Main khud ko bhool chuka tha mager jahan wale
              Udas chor gaye aaina dikha ke mujhe.

              Bichi hui hai mere aansuon main ek tasveer
              Wo sangedil dekh raha hai muskara ke mujhe.



kya khoob farmaya dixit ji aapne. bahut umda
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«Reply #2 on: May 01, 2011, 09:44:41 AM »
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Kya baat hai Dixit Ji...achchha likhate..hain..Raqeeb Lucknowi
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«Reply #3 on: May 01, 2011, 11:05:17 AM »
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         Shukriya Sheba, aapne hamari pesh
         ki ghazal ko tavazzo di and apni
         daad se nawaja. So nice of U. Bye.
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«Reply #4 on: May 01, 2011, 11:08:51 AM »
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Kya baat hai Dixit Ji...achchha likhate..hain..Raqeeb Lucknowi

           Hi Satish Shukla,
           Thanks for appreciating and
           commenting for the Ghazal
           presentedd by me. Per ye
           Raqeeb Lucknowi kaun hai.
           samajh nahin aaya. So Nice of U.
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«Reply #5 on: May 02, 2011, 07:36:48 PM »
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MERA NAAM SATISH SHUKLA HAI 'RAQEEB' TAKHALLUS KARTA HOON

JYADATAR GHAZLEN HI KAHTA HOON HINDI/URDU ADAB KI DUNIYA MEN

SATISH SHUKLA 'RAQEEB' YA RAQEEB LUCKNOWI KE NAAM SE HI JANA

JATA HOOON.

PLEASE FORWAD THIS TO THE POET OF THIS POST ALSO
SATISH SHUKLA 'RAQEEB'
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