jo pilaane wala hi PYAASA nazara aata hai mujhe...!!

by ghayal_shayar on October 30, 2012, 02:18:25 PM
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Taareef me unki taareekheN badal gayiN,, dil to wahi tha nigaaheN badal gayiN,, nazar me, to kabhi dil me qaid hue hum,, khata-e-ishq ki sazaa rahi, salaakheN badal gayiN,, na haalaat badle, na haalat badli humari,, bas dekhne wali aankheN badal gayiN……………!!!!!



Tera ehsaas bhi jab haath lagaata hai mujhe,
Meri izz* ka wo husool** dilaata hai mujhe.

*kamjori, weakness..! **realization, ehsaas..!

meri hasti me jaane gum haiN hastiyaaN kitni,
waqt roz ek nayaa chehraa dikhaata hai mujhe.

LaashoN ke gale haar se phooloN ke na bharo,
Gul ki tauheen ka ehsaas rulaata hai mujhe.

Kya tawakko* ho mujhe,pyaas bujhegi is dil ki,
Jo pilaane wala hi pyaasa nazar aata hai mujhe.

*umeed, hope...!

Baazaar-e-jist* se to uthaa le gayi kazaa** hume,
“Taish” hai tu! Har khareedar bataata hai mujhe.

*zindagi ka baazaar,market of life..! **maut,, death..!
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«Reply #1 on: October 30, 2012, 02:42:03 PM »
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teesraa sher dil ko chhoo gayaa bahut bahut mubarakbaad
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«Reply #2 on: October 30, 2012, 03:12:10 PM »
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bahut hi khub achhi gazal ghayal ji,
ghanshamdas ahuja
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«Reply #3 on: October 30, 2012, 04:00:10 PM »
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wah ghayal ji wah lajawabgazal bahut hi umda padhkar maza aa gaya ...........saini sir ki tarah hee mujhe bhi teesra sher behad gazab ka laga...... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: October 31, 2012, 12:29:12 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on October 30, 2012, 02:42:03 PM
teesraa sher dil ko chhoo gayaa bahut bahut mubarakbaad

saini sir ji, shukriya, aur ye humari khusnasebi ko vo sher kahN aapko choo paya, bas yuNhi saath nibhaate rahiyegaa...
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«Reply #5 on: October 31, 2012, 12:48:18 AM »
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Quote from: ghayal_shayar on October 30, 2012, 02:18:25 PM
Taareef me unki taareekheN badal gayiN,, dil to wahi tha nigaaheN badal gayiN,, nazar me, to kabhi dil me qaid hue hum,, khata-e-ishq ki sazaa rahi, salaakheN badal gayiN,, na haalaat badle, na haalat badli humari,, bas dekhne wali aankheN badal gayiN……………!!!!!



Tera ehsaas bhi jab haath lagaata hai mujhe,
Meri izz* ka wo husool** dilaata hai mujhe.

*kamjori, weakness..! **realization, ehsaas..!

meri hasti me jaane gum haiN hastiyaaN kitni,
waqt roz ek nayaa chehraa dikhaata hai mujhe.

LaashoN ke gale haar se phooloN ke na bharo,
Gul ki tauheen ka ehsaas rulaata hai mujhe.

Kya tawakko* ho mujhe,pyaas bujhegi is dil ki,
Jo pilaane wala hi pyaasa nazar aata hai mujhe.

*umeed, hope...!

Baazaar-e-jist* se to uthaa le gayi kazaa** hume,
“Taish” hai tu! Har khareedar bataata hai mujhe.

*zindagi ka baazaar,market of life..! **maut,, death..!
jitni bhi tareef kari jaey kam hai.Dili daad.Congratulations.
sheel didi
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«Reply #6 on: October 31, 2012, 12:51:04 AM »
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bahut umda
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«Reply #7 on: October 31, 2012, 02:51:29 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
kya baat hai bahut khoob likha hai
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«Reply #8 on: October 31, 2012, 12:53:58 PM »
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Quote from: ahujagd on October 30, 2012, 03:12:10 PM
bahut hi khub achhi gazal ghayal ji,
ghanshamdas ahuja

Ghanshamdas ji bahut bahut shukriya, ise pasand karne ka aur apni tareef se nawaazne ka, bas aage v yuNhi saath nibhaate rahiyegaa...
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«Reply #9 on: October 31, 2012, 12:55:08 PM »
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Quote from: soudagar on October 30, 2012, 04:00:10 PM
wah ghayal ji wah lajawabgazal bahut hi umda padhkar maza aa gaya ...........saini sir ki tarah hee mujhe bhi teesra sher behad gazab ka laga...... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


janaab ye aapki meharbaani jo aapne ise saraaha, bas yahi duaa rahegi ki kuch aisa likh paauN jo aapko bhaata rahe... Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: October 31, 2012, 04:02:53 PM »
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Quote from: sushilbansal on October 31, 2012, 12:48:18 AM
jitni bhi tareef kari jaey kam hai.Dili daad.Congratulations.
sheel didi

sheel di tareef ka shukriya, bas yuNhi sath nibhaati rahen aap....
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«Reply #11 on: November 01, 2012, 01:01:51 AM »
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Quote from: nandbahu on October 31, 2012, 12:51:04 AM
bahut umda

Bahukhandi ji, aapki lagataar hausla afzaayi hume aur behtar likhne ki prerna deti hai, bas umeed karta huN yuNhi aapka saath bana rahegaa...
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«Reply #12 on: November 01, 2012, 02:45:57 PM »
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Quote from: aqsh on October 31, 2012, 02:51:29 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
kya baat hai bahut khoob likha hai

aqsh ji humare jahe naseeb ki aapko ye adni si peshkash pasadn aayi, bas aage v hume yuNhi padhte rehne ki jehmiyat uthaate rahiyegaa...
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