JUB RUKH SE NAQAAB .................HASAN

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Jub    rukh  se   Naqaab   unke  ,  dheere  se  sarakti   hai ,
Kya    roop   nikalta   hai  ,  kya    shaan   jhalakti   hai

Woh   sho'la - badan   to   bus   ek   baar  hi   guzra   thha
Abb   tak   mere   seene   meiN  ,  ek   aag   dahakti   hai

Utthne   ko   woh   Ghoonghat   hai  ,  aayegi   Qayamat   kya ,
KyuuN   jism   larazta   hai  ,  kyuuN   Aankh   phadakti   hai

Daulat  ke   ujaaloN   meiN  ,  kyuuN   Jaam   chhalakte   haiN  ,
Ghurbat   ke   andheroN   mein   jub   bhook   sisakti   hai

Woh   Khwaaab   se   uthh'te   haiN  , lete  huay   Angdaai  ,
Ya    baad - e - sahar    se   koi   Shaakh   lachakti   kai

Ghalti   ho   Siyasat   ki  ,  ya   Shaikh - o - Brahman   ki  ,
Sholay   naheeN   thamte   haiN  , jub   Aag   bhadakti   hai

Taareef   HaseenoN   ki  ,  karna   meri   Fitrat   hai  ,
Per   unnko  'Hasan'   meri  ,  yeh   baat   khatakti   hai
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«Reply #1 on: December 10, 2011, 04:27:56 AM »
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Jub    rukh  se   Naqaab   unke  ,  dheere  se  sarakti   hai ,
Kya    roop   nikalta   hai  ,  kya    shaan   jhalakti   hai  Thumbs UP

Woh   sho'la - badan   to   bus   ek   baar  hi   guzra   thha
Abb   tak   mere   seene   meiN  ,  ek   aag   dahakti   hai

Utthne   ko   woh   Ghoonghat   hai  ,  aayegi   Qayamat   kya ,
KyuuN   jism   larazta   hai  ,  kyuuN   Aankh   phadakti   hai

Daulat  ke   ujaaloN   meiN  ,  kyuuN   Jaam   chhalakte   haiN  ,
Ghurbat   ke   andheroN   mein   jub   bhook   sisakti   hai  Applause Applause Applause

Woh   Khwaaab   se   uthh'te   haiN  , lete  huay   Angdaai  ,
Ya    baad - e - sahar    se   koi   Shaakh   lachakti   kai Applause Applause

Ghalti   ho   Siyasat   ki  ,  ya   Shaikh - o - Brahman   ki  ,
Sholay   naheeN   thamte   haiN  , jub   Aag   bhadakti   hai Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP

Taareef   HaseenoN   ki  ,  karna   meri   Fitrat   hai  ,
Per   unnko  'Hasan'   meri  ,  yeh   baat   khatakti   hai Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard


bahut zordaar hasan sahab
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«Reply #2 on: December 10, 2011, 04:30:43 AM »
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Jub    rukh  se   Naqaab   unke  ,  dheere  se  sarakti   hai ,
Kya    roop   nikalta   hai  ,  kya    shaan   jhalakti   hai

Woh   sho'la - badan   to   bus   ek   baar  hi   guzra   thha
Abb   tak   mere   seene   meiN  ,  ek   aag   dahakti   hai

Utthne   ko   woh   Ghoonghat   hai  ,  aayegi   Qayamat   kya ,
KyuuN   jism   larazta   hai  ,  kyuuN   Aankh   phadakti   hai

Daulat  ke   ujaaloN   meiN  ,  kyuuN   Jaam   chhalakte   haiN  ,
Ghurbat   ke   andheroN   mein   jub   bhook   sisakti   hai

Woh   Khwaaab   se   uthh'te   haiN  , lete  huay   Angdaai  ,
Ya    baad - e - sahar    se   koi   Shaakh   lachakti   kai

Ghalti   ho   Siyasat   ki  ,  ya   Shaikh - o - Brahman   ki  ,
Sholay   naheeN   thamte   haiN  , jub   Aag   bhadakti   hai

Taareef   HaseenoN   ki  ,  karna   meri   Fitrat   hai  ,
Per   unnko  'Hasan'   meri  ,  yeh   baat   khatakti   hai


Waah Waah Waah Hasan Ji...

Lajawaab!!! har ek ki Yehi kahani hai.. tongue3

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«Reply #3 on: December 10, 2011, 06:01:17 AM »
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Vaah Vaah Hasan Sir
Bahut khoob.




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«Reply #4 on: December 10, 2011, 07:51:50 AM »
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Siddiqui Sahaab Aadaab!


Janab waah kia kahne aapke bahut hi khubsurat ashaaroN
bhari kalaam pesh ki hai janab.. kia pur asar ahsaas
aur kia umdaa bayaani rahi janab.. waah waah waah..

Bahut khoob janab.. is khubkalaam par dheroN daad O mubarakbad
kabul kijye... Usual Smile







Jub    rukh  se   Naqaab   unke  ,  dheere  se  sarakti   hai ,
Kya    roop   nikalta   hai  ,  kya    shaan   jhalakti   hai

Bahut khoob janab achcha matla hai.. khubsurat manzar
kashi.. daad daad daad... Janab documentry bahut umdaa karte haiN aap..

Daad daad ..


Woh   sho'la - badan   to   bus   ek   baar  hi   guzra   thha
Abb   tak   mere   seene   meiN  ,  ek   aag   dahakti   hai

Kia baat hai janab waah kia husn ki tareef ki hai..
bahut khoob aur umdaa janab.... hazaaroN daad is khub sher par .. Usual Smile


Utthne   ko   woh   Ghoonghat   hai  ,  aayegi   Qayamat   kya ,
KyuuN   jism   larazta   hai  ,  kyuuN   Aankh   phadakti   hai

Oye hoye gazab ka sher hai ahsaas behad pyaara hai janab
daad daad daad... Usual Smile


Daulat  ke   ujaaloN   meiN  ,  kyuuN   Jaam   chhalakte   haiN  ,
Ghurbat   ke   andheroN   mein   jub   bhook   sisakti   hai

Masha Allaah yeH to wohi jaane jiski duniyaa hai..
uska nizaam hai .. sad5


Woh   Khwaaab   se   uthh'te   haiN  , lete  huay   Angdaai  ,
Ya    baad - e - sahar    se   koi   Shaakh   lachakti   kai

Waah waah waah janab .. behad khubsurat ashaar pesh
kiya hai bahut khoob Bhabhi jee ki tareef ki hoNgi to kis kadar ki hoNgi
aapne yeHi soch raheN hai  Is it SO! Applause Applause


Ghalti   ho   Siyasat   ki  ,  ya   Shaikh - o - Brahman   ki  ,
Sholay   naheeN   thamte   haiN  , jub   Aag   bhadakti   hai

Waah waah janab bahut khoob achcha sher hai.. haqeekhat
kah gaye daad daad daad .. Usual Smile


Taareef   HaseenoN   ki  ,  karna   meri   Fitrat   hai  ,
Per   unnko  'Hasan'   meri  ,  yeh   baat   khatakti   hai

Gazab hai janab aapki fitrat aur aap waqai is meiN mahir hai..
Humare to khayaal hi tham jaate haiN.. ke kaise tareef kareN..




Is umdaa kalaam par hazaaroN daad hazir hai janab..
Aise hi kalaamoN ke saath bazm ko roshan karte rahiye..

Hum bhi sikhte raheNge ke tareef kaise kii jati hai.. Usual Smile
Khush O aabaad rahiye.. Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: December 10, 2011, 10:14:29 AM »
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"वह  शो'ला- बदन  तो  बस  एक  बार  ही  गुज़रा  था,         
 अब    तक    मेरे  सीने   में,  एक  आग   दहकती है "


"वह    ख़्वाब    से    उठते    हैं   , लेते    हुए     अंगडाई  ,
 या   बाद  - ए - सहर    से    कोई    शाख़   लचकती   है  "

"ग़लती  हो  सियासत  की,  या  शैख़ - ओ  - बिरहमन  की,
 शोले    नहीं    थमते    हैं ,  जब    आग    भड़कती    है"

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«Reply #6 on: December 10, 2011, 08:35:32 PM »
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Hasan Saheb,

Dil to chahta tha ke iss be misaal nazm par kuch aisi bemisaal dad don aapko
magar PARWAZ saheb ke khubsurat Andaz-e tareef ke baad koi aur kia kehe.

Bahut alaa, Bahut hi umda matla
Bahut hi achi tareef e husn
Bahut hi acha manzar aap ne kheecha

Purjosh hazaron dad khubul kijeye

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«Reply #7 on: December 11, 2011, 12:16:23 AM »
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Jub    rukh  se   Naqaab   unke  ,  dheere  se  sarakti   hai ,
Kya    roop   nikalta   hai  ,  kya    shaan   jhalakti   hai

Woh   sho'la - badan   to   bus   ek   baar  hi   guzra   thha
Abb   tak   mere   seene   meiN  ,  ek   aag   dahakti   hai

Utthne   ko   woh   Ghoonghat   hai  ,  aayegi   Qayamat   kya ,
KyuuN   jism   larazta   hai  ,  kyuuN   Aankh   phadakti   hai

Daulat  ke   ujaaloN   meiN  ,  kyuuN   Jaam   chhalakte   haiN  ,
Ghurbat   ke   andheroN   mein   jub   bhook   sisakti   hai

Woh   Khwaaab   se   uthh'te   haiN  , lete  huay   Angdaai  ,
Ya    baad - e - sahar    se   koi   Shaakh   lachakti   kai

Ghalti   ho   Siyasat   ki  ,  ya   Shaikh - o - Brahman   ki  ,
Sholay   naheeN   thamte   haiN  , jub   Aag   bhadakti   hai

Taareef   HaseenoN   ki  ,  karna   meri   Fitrat   hai  ,
Per   unnko  'Hasan'   meri  ,  yeh   baat   khatakti   hai

bht khoob hasan sahab
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«Reply #8 on: December 11, 2011, 06:31:18 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob kahaa hasan bhai jab jab aapkee qalam chaltee hai ek shaandaar ghazal nikaltee hai beshumaar daad haajir hain
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«Reply #9 on: December 11, 2011, 10:16:27 AM »
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bahut zordaar hasan sahab

Sheba  ji ,  Hausla  afzai  ke  liye
 bahut  mamnoon  hoon . Duayein . Hasan
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«Reply #10 on: December 11, 2011, 10:52:24 PM »
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Waah Waah Waah Hasan Ji...

Lajawaab!!! har ek ki Yehi kahani hai.. tongue3

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Khwaish ji,Ghazal pasand karne aur
hausla afzai ke liye bahut mashkoor hoon.
Khush rahiye.Hasan
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«Reply #11 on: December 12, 2011, 03:44:20 AM »
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Vaah Vaah Hasan Sir
Bahut khoob.





MKV ji,Hausla afzai ke liye
bahut bahut shukriya.Hasan
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«Reply #12 on: December 12, 2011, 09:11:19 AM »
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Siddiqui Sahaab Aadaab!


Janab waah kia kahne aapke bahut hi khubsurat ashaaroN
bhari kalaam pesh ki hai janab.. kia pur asar ahsaas
aur kia umdaa bayaani rahi janab.. waah waah waah..

Bahut khoob janab.. is khubkalaam par dheroN daad O mubarakbad
kabul kijye... Usual Smile


Parwaaz  saheb , Aap  ke  tabsire  parh
kar   tabiat  khush  ho jaati  hai . Nasr
mein  shaairy  karna  koi  aap  se  seekhe .
Mujhe  jawaab dene  mein  sochna  parta  hai
ki  kya  likhun  jo  shayaan e shaan  ho  aur
her  baar  nakaam  ho  jaata  hoon . Phir  bhi
hamesha  ki  tarah  aap ki purkhuloos  tahreer
ke  liye  tah e dil  se  izhaar e tashakkur  
karta hoon . Khush  rahiye . Hausla  dete  rahiye .
                              Duago ,Hasan





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«Reply #13 on: December 12, 2011, 10:38:29 AM »
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"वह  शो'ला- बदन  तो  बस  एक  बार  ही  गुज़रा  था,        
 अब    तक    मेरे  सीने   में,  एक  आग   दहकती है "


"वह    ख़्वाब    से    उठते    हैं   , लेते    हुए     अंगडाई  ,
 या   बाद  - ए - सहर    से    कोई    शाख़   लचकती   है  "

"ग़लती  हो  सियासत  की,  या  शैख़ - ओ  - बिरहमन  की,
 शोले    नहीं    थमते    हैं ,  जब    आग    भड़कती    है"

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Arun Misra saheb,Ghazal pasand karne
 aur hausla afzai ke liye bahut shukrguzaar hoon.Hasan
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«Reply #14 on: December 12, 2011, 11:54:57 PM »
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bht khoob hasan sahab
aapki ghazal as usual superbbbbbbb


Bahut bahut shukriya ,Sarfira ji .
Khush rahiye.Duago , Hasan
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