judaai~~~ Saahil

by salil2002 on July 08, 2009, 01:21:44 PM
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chaadar e anjum sar par mere aur main sota raha
hosh aaya tum nahin, aur na hi tere khwab thay

din yeh gujra raat aayi, aankhon ne phir palkein bichhayi
aankhen sooni , raaat tanha, taare bhi udaas thay

neend aankhon main nahin, chen dil ko nahin
yoon laga tum paas ho, phir bhi andhere saath thay

dil yeh roya main bhi roya, saath mere jag bhi khoya
kho gayi meri hansi, ab bas yeh gham din- raat thay

teri baatein, woh ladakpan, chehre se woh girta shabnam
kehta hai woh beeta kal,tum se hi ujaale paas thay

ab na dhadkan ,na hi jeevan sirf hai to hai yeh tadpan
keh raha "saahil" yeh tujhse, lauta de din jo tere saath thay

yaad tujhko karta hurdum, raatein meri , meri dushmann
din bhi andhere, raat bhi, ujaale bhi Syaah ab saath thay



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«Reply #1 on: July 08, 2009, 04:58:00 PM »
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chaadar e anjum sar par mere aur main sota raha
hosh aaya tum nahin, aur na hi tere khwab thay

din yeh gujra raat aayi, aankhon ne phir palkein bichhayi
aankhen sooni , raaat tanha, taare bhi udaas thay

neend aankhon main nahin, chen dil ko nahin
yoon laga tum paas ho, phir bhi andhere saath thay

dil yeh roya main bhi roya, saath mere jag bhi khoya
kho gayi meri hansi, ab bas yeh gham din- raat thay

teri baatein, woh ladakpan, chehre se woh girta shabnam
kehta hai woh beeta kal,tum se hi ujaale paas thay

ab na dhadkan ,na hi jeevan sirf hai to hai yeh tadpan
keh raha "saahil" yeh tujhse, lauta de din jo tere saath thay

yaad tujhko karta hurdum, raatein meri , meri dushmann
din bhi andhere, raat bhi, ujaale bhi Syaah ab saath thay




saahil ji

kash vo din phir se laut aayein
bahut dilko choone wale ehsaason ko piroya hai.
yunhi likhte rahiye.
 
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«Reply #2 on: July 08, 2009, 06:03:56 PM »
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bahut acha likha h aapne Saahil ji...har alfaaj se chalak rha hai judai ka dar
bahut bahut khub...... Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: July 08, 2009, 11:03:42 PM »
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Really toching Saahil ji.very beautiful creation.excellent. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: July 09, 2009, 05:39:57 AM »
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KYA BAAT HAI ..SAAHIL JI......

TERE SANG, DIN MEIN BHI DIKHTE THEY TAARE,
AB TO BIN TERE,RAAT KO BHI NAHIN, NAZAR AATE HAI TAARE.
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«Reply #5 on: July 09, 2009, 07:40:13 AM »
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Kaise kehta kaun sunta aur manta meri

Sach sune koi yaha, kaha aise halaat the...
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«Reply #6 on: July 09, 2009, 01:53:26 PM »
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chaadar e anjum sar par mere aur main sota raha
hosh aaya tum nahin, aur na hi tere khwab thay

din yeh gujra raat aayi, aankhon ne phir palkein bichhayi
aankhen sooni , raaat tanha, taare bhi udaas thay

neend aankhon main nahin, chen dil ko nahin
yoon laga tum paas ho, phir bhi andhere saath thay

dil yeh roya main bhi roya, saath mere jag bhi khoya
kho gayi meri hansi, ab bas yeh gham din- raat thay

teri baatein, woh ladakpan, chehre se woh girta shabnam
kehta hai woh beeta kal,tum se hi ujaale paas thay

ab na dhadkan ,na hi jeevan sirf hai to hai yeh tadpan
keh raha "saahil" yeh tujhse, lauta de din jo tere saath thay

yaad tujhko karta hurdum, raatein meri , meri dushmann
din bhi andhere, raat bhi, ujaale bhi Syaah ab saath thay




Bohot Khoob Salil
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«Reply #7 on: July 10, 2009, 05:51:36 AM »
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saahil ji

kash vo din phir se laut aayein
bahut dilko choone wale ehsaason ko piroya hai.
yunhi likhte rahiye.
 
bahut bahut shukriya nira dost aapne pad kar jis andaaz mein comment kiya oosse laga kii meri ghazal se aapko kissii kii yaad aa gayi
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«Reply #8 on: July 10, 2009, 05:52:39 AM »
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bahut acha likha h aapne Saahil ji...har alfaaj se chalak rha hai judai ka dar
bahut bahut khub...... Applause Applause Applause
Really toching Saahil ji.very beautiful creation.excellent. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause
thanks a lot madhi dear and puja
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«Reply #9 on: July 10, 2009, 05:53:59 AM »
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Kaise kehta kaun sunta aur manta meri

Sach sune koi yaha, kaha aise halaat the...
bahut ummda reply hai dastbardaar saheb ........
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«Reply #10 on: July 10, 2009, 05:54:54 AM »
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Bohot Khoob Salil
Applause Applause Applause

waah bahot khoob Salil dear,
umda ashaar aur bahot achi ghazal

shukriya talat di and kaash bhai
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«Reply #11 on: July 10, 2009, 05:58:01 AM »
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KYA BAAT HAI ..SAAHIL JI......

TERE SANG, DIN MEIN BHI DIKHTE THEY TAARE,
AB TO BIN TERE,RAAT KO BHI NAHIN, NAZAR AATE HAI TAARE.
shukriya cara dear aur bahut hi pyaari lines likhi hai aapne do lines aapke liye

dil kii aarzoo rahi kii lipat kar tujhse roye hum
aarzoo poori huyi marne k mere baad yeh....
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«Reply #12 on: July 15, 2009, 10:21:14 PM »
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ek achi ghazal saahil keep it up
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«Reply #13 on: July 17, 2009, 12:15:49 PM »
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shukriya aslam bhai
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