Junun meri Jaan hai.....

by vipul kumar on December 26, 2010, 10:15:00 AM
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Hawao.n par chalenge ham jo hounslo me jaan hai....
Khwaab ke jo par lage.n, kathin kaha.n udaan hai...

Munsifo main kis tarah se chhod du sadaakate.n,
Zamiir hai khuda mera, junun meri jaan hai....
[sadaakat= Truth]

Rok denge ek din ye Jung Jurm Jor ham,
Dil me soch lo agar to mushkile.n aasan hai....

Aks hai mohabbato.n ka urdu ke lihaaj me,
Mout ko bhi jiit le ye urdu wo jubaan hai....

Koun baante hai mujhe mazhabo.n ke naam par,
Dil hai mera hindu meri jaan musalmaan hai...

Yu.n na dekhiye hame ye ahd-e-shouk apna hai,
Chaak hai pairaahani jo aashiqo.n ki shaan hai....

Dar nahi tuufan ka main paanio me rahta hu,
Saahilo pe saagaro.n ke Soch ka makaan hai....

Sikhaye maani aapne mohabbato.n ke, dard ke,
Mujhe ek fan ataa kiya ye aapka ehsaan hai...

Azal se lad rahe hai ham ye jung rozi-roti ki,
Muddato.n se chal raha ye kaisa imtehaan hai...

Faiz kii lakiir pe hai YaaRa sir nisaar ab,
"Khuun-e-dil me ungliya.n hai, sholo.n pe jubaan hai....."!!
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«Reply #1 on: December 27, 2010, 08:37:03 AM »
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ufffffffffffff.........

kya kahu vipul......apne jo likha he uske kin shabdo me tariif karu....bhai maja aa gaya ........ek se badkar ek poetry he apki........apki har post ka intjaar rahega hume........lawajab ji ....behtareen
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«Reply #2 on: December 27, 2010, 08:44:02 AM »
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Vipul ji aapka Autograph milega kya..
plzzz---
aapke Ghajlo.n itna sampurn paripurn aur mahatwapurn hote hain ki--qurbaan jaun mai to.
bas or kuch nhi sir--superb
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«Reply #3 on: December 27, 2010, 08:48:57 AM »
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Vipul ji aapka Autograph milega kya..
plzzz---
aapke Ghajlo.n itna sampurn paripurn aur mahatwapurn hote hain ki--qurbaan jaun mai to.
bas or kuch nhi sir--superb

malik suniye.........agar apko autograph mile to ek copy mere liye bhi le lena......
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«Reply #4 on: December 27, 2010, 08:54:41 AM »
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hahaha
pahle Sir ji ko pataane dijiye fir apko b denge
Usual SmileUsual SmileUsual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: December 27, 2010, 09:01:47 AM »
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aap dono ka bahut bahut shukriya...
Abhi bahut kuchh hai. Bas aap saath dete rahiye....
Aapka saath mere liye yahaan sab kuchh hai..
Shukriya Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: December 27, 2010, 10:08:06 AM »
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Hawao.n par chalenge ham jo hounslo me jaan hai....
Khwaab ke jo par lage.n, kathin kaha.n udaan hai...

Munsifo main kis tarah se chhod du sadaakate.n,
Zamiir hai khuda mera, junun meri jaan hai....
[sadaakat= Truth]

Rok denge ek din ye Jung Jurm Jor ham,
Dil me soch lo agar to mushkile.n aasan hai....

Aks hai mohabbato.n ka urdu ke lihaaj me,
Mout ko bhi jiit le ye urdu wo jubaan hai....

Koun baante hai mujhe mazhabo.n ke naam par,
Dil hai mera hindu meri jaan musalmaan hai...

Yu.n na dekhiye hame ye ahd-e-shouk apna hai,
Chaak hai pairaahani jo aashiqo.n ki shaan hai....

Dar nahi tuufan ka main paanio me rahta hu,
Saahilo pe saagaro.n ke Soch ka makaan hai....

Sikhaye maani aapne mohabbato.n ke, dard ke,
Mujhe ek fan ataa kiya ye aapka ehsaan hai...

Azal se lad rahe hai ham ye jung rozi-roti ki,
Muddato.n se chal raha ye kaisa imtehaan hai...

Faiz kii lakiir pe hai YaaRa sir nisaar ab,
"Khuun-e-dil me ungliya.n hai, sholo.n pe jubaan hai....."!!


behtreen behtreen aur bahooot behtreen...vipul ji bahoot asardaar likhte hain aap...daad kabool karen
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«Reply #7 on: December 27, 2010, 11:38:14 AM »
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Hawao.n par chalenge ham jo hounslo me jaan hai....
Khwaab ke jo par lage.n, kathin kaha.n udaan hai...

Munsifo main kis tarah se chhod du sadaakate.n,
Zamiir hai khuda mera, junun meri jaan hai....
[sadaakat= Truth]

Rok denge ek din ye Jung Jurm Jor ham,
Dil me soch lo agar to mushkile.n aasan hai....

Aks hai mohabbato.n ka urdu ke lihaaj me,
Mout ko bhi jiit le ye urdu wo jubaan hai....

Koun baante hai mujhe mazhabo.n ke naam par,
Dil hai mera hindu meri jaan musalmaan hai...

Yu.n na dekhiye hame ye ahd-e-shouk apna hai,
Chaak hai pairaahani jo aashiqo.n ki shaan hai....

Dar nahi tuufan ka main paanio me rahta hu,
Saahilo pe saagaro.n ke Soch ka makaan hai....

Sikhaye maani aapne mohabbato.n ke, dard ke,
Mujhe ek fan ataa kiya ye aapka ehsaan hai...

Azal se lad rahe hai ham ye jung rozi-roti ki,
Muddato.n se chal raha ye kaisa imtehaan hai...

Faiz kii lakiir pe hai YaaRa sir nisaar ab,
"Khuun-e-dil me ungliya.n hai, sholo.n pe jubaan hai....."!!


Behad umda tarike se apne ehsaso ko bayan kiya hai bahut khoob vipul ji...inshaallah umeed hai apki likhi aesi rachanye padhne ko milti rahengi...
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«Reply #8 on: December 27, 2010, 02:04:23 PM »
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Bohat Achche vipul Ji, Yunhi likhte rahein,.
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