Kahaan tak sitaarey gin-gin, uneendey khwaab deykheyn ham?

by abdbundeli on February 25, 2009, 05:29:47 AM
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Jhapatatey paas aatey ho: hamain achchhaa naheen lagtaa!
Bahaanoun sey bulaatey ho: hamain achchhaa naheen lagtaa!

Hamaarey dost, ham par fabtiyaan kastey hain; jaltey hain;
Unhain fir-fir jalaatey ho: hamain achchhaa naheen lagtaa!

Kahaan tak sitaarey gin-gin, uneendey khwaab deykheyn ham?
Garhhey sapney dikhaatey ho: hamain achchhaa naheen lagtaa!

Musalsal feihrishteyn hai: kareyngey yah, kareyngey wah;
Bahut baateyn banaatey ho: hamain achchhaa naheen lagtaa!

Tumhaarey saath jaayen bazm mein? Toubaa! Na jaayengey!!
Baraabar gul khilaatey ho: hamain achchhaa naheen lagtaa!

Tumhaarey saath rahtey huye, rahtey paas; fir bhi tum,
Bahut nazdeek aatey ho: hamain achchhaa naheen lagtaa!

Tumhaaraa kyaa, khisak jaatey ho gupchup baardaateyn kar?
Sabhi khillee urhaatey hain: hamain achchhaa naheen lagtaa!

Arey kyaa ho gayaa hai? Kareyngey, jo bhi kahogey tum!
Zaraa mein roothh jaatey ho: hamain achchhaa naheen lagtaa!!

Chalo ab maan jaaou! Roothhtey hain ham bhi: yah sach hai!
Chhalaawoun sey sataatey ho: hamain achchhaa naheen lagtaa!!

Tumhain jab ham manaatey hain: chahak uthhtey ho man hi man!
Magar jab tum manaatey ho: tumhain achchhaa naheen lagtaa!!

‘Abd’, yeh dil ki baateyn hain: raheyn dil mein to hain mouzoon;
Tunak jab barhbarhaatey ho: hamain achchhaa naheen lagtaa!!

                                           -   abd bundeli
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divyam
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«Reply #1 on: February 25, 2009, 11:57:50 AM »
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Garg saahab,

aap ki baaqi Ghazalo/n ki tarah , yeh Ghazal bhi behad achchhi lagii....

daad haazir hai..Usual Smile

Mayank
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abdbundeli
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«Reply #2 on: February 25, 2009, 12:04:02 PM »
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Garg saahab,
aap ki baaqi Ghazalo/n ki tarah , yeh Ghazal bhi behad achchhi lagii....
daad haazir hai..Usual Smile
Mayank
Thanks, Mayank ji!
            - abd bundeli

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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #3 on: February 25, 2009, 01:53:24 PM »
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Main padlu ghazal apni phir sunana tum ghazal apni
Baad teri ghazal ke kalam aur koi achcha nahi lagta

-SG-
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abdbundeli
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«Reply #4 on: February 25, 2009, 03:00:46 PM »
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Main padlu ghazal apni phir sunana tum ghazal apni
Baad teri ghazal ke kalam aur koi achcha nahi lagta

-SG-

Shukriyah!
Hain laakhoun-laakh aisey, jinkey lafzoun mein hai wo jaadoo;
Ki, aisaa ilm hotaa hai, sifar auqaat hai meyree!
Kahaan wo hain; kahaan mein hoon: naheen tamseel hai koyee;
Dilon ki baat kartaa hoon, bas, itnee baat hai meyree!!

                                         - abd bundeli

 

 
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