kahan dard-e-dil dard se nashaad hota hai

by @kaash on July 25, 2009, 03:15:36 PM
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kahan dard-e-dil dard se nashaad hota hai
dard had se guzre tabhi dil shaad hota hai


thhare hue ashqon ki rangat na poochiye
har qatra hamesha taaza azaab hota hai


hai to asaan apni aakhon ko nam rakhna
par khud se hi kia vaada kharaab hota hai


dard ke kum ya zyada ki tamanna kaun kare 'kaash'
ye vo shay hai jo khud-b-khud aabaad hota hai

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«Reply #1 on: July 25, 2009, 03:33:41 PM »
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Wah Kaash ji,very nice and beautiful creation.excellent. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: July 25, 2009, 03:37:47 PM »
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 notworthy

your words are just melody to ears

umatched ghazal Applause
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«Reply #3 on: July 25, 2009, 03:42:51 PM »
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Wah Bahut Khoob Kaash Ji..Aacha likha hai aapne.. Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

Jisme husn aaye nazar wahi to naqaab hota hai,
Jo lafz na keh sake, aankhein keh de wahi to jawab hota hai,

Chupa ke rakhna dil ki kisi kone me ishq ko,
Ye shikaari, jaalim jamana bada kharab hota hai,

Jise dekho to nazre na hatt paaye ek pal ke liye,
Deewana bana de har insaan ko wahi to shabab hota hai.

Shally.

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«Reply #4 on: July 25, 2009, 03:45:24 PM »
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Wah Bahut Khoob Kaash Ji..Aacha likha hai aapne.. Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

Jisme husn aaye nazar wahi to naqaab hota hai,
Jo lafz na keh sake, aankhein keh de wahi to jawab hota hai,

Chupa ke rakhna dil ki kisi kone me ishq ko,
Ye shikaari, jaalim jamana bada kharab hota hai,

Jise dekho to nazre na hatt paaye ek pal ke liye,
Deewana bana de har insaan ko wahi to shabab hota hai.

Shally.



mashallah Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: July 25, 2009, 06:29:48 PM »
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Beautiful lines Shally ji.bahut khoob likha aapne aur Kaash ji ne. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause

Grim ji agar aapko kaash ji ke gazal pasand nahi aaya toh comments nahi karna chaiye tha.par iss tarah se likhna acha nahi lagta,aap bhi perfect nahi hai.
Kaash ji ne koshish kiya aur likha,hausle ke bajaye aap aisa comments kiya .
very sad. sad11
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«Reply #6 on: July 25, 2009, 08:19:16 PM »
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wah wah! boaht khoob kaash ji.... Applause Applause Applause Applause

 bohat khoob shally ji..... Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: July 25, 2009, 08:24:07 PM »
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Bahut khoob @kaash ji and Shally dear
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«Reply #8 on: July 25, 2009, 10:29:26 PM »
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Beautiful lines Shally ji.bahut khoob likha aapne aur Kaash ji ne. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause

Grim ji agar aapko kaash ji ke gazal pasand nahi aaya toh comments nahi karna chaiye tha.par iss tarah se likhna acha nahi lagta,aap bhi perfect nahi hai.
Kaash ji ne koshish kiya aur likha,hausle ke bajaye aap aisa comments kiya .
very sad. sad11


there has been some misunderstanding
i loved kaash 's poem thats why i said notworthy
doesnt this mean "note-worthy", something like the emoticon is bowing to the ghazal

i dont know what wqent wrong

i also added unmatched poetry
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«Reply #9 on: July 25, 2009, 11:04:38 PM »
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kahan dard-e-dil dard se bezaar hota hai
dard had se guzre tabhi dil shaad hota hai


thhare hue ashqon ki rangat na poochiye
har qatra hamesha taaza azaab hota hai


hai to asaan apni aakhon ko nam rakhna
par khud se hi kia vaada kharaab hota hai


dard ke kum ya zyada ki tamanna kaun kare 'kaash'
ye vo shay hai jo khud-b-khud aabaad hota hai



 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley wah wah wah ek ek shabd ka chun kar apne rachna likhi hai....kamaal@dhamal.good creation!!!

ek ek line gahre arth ke sath... dil ko chu gai apki yah kavita.... bahoot khoob!!
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«Reply #10 on: July 25, 2009, 11:06:15 PM »
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Wah Bahut Khoob Kaash Ji..Aacha likha hai aapne.. Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

Jisme husn aaye nazar wahi to naqaab hota hai,
Jo lafz na keh sake, aankhein keh de wahi to jawab hota hai,

Chupa ke rakhna dil ki kisi kone me ishq ko,
Ye shikaari, jaalim jamana bada kharab hota hai,

Jise dekho to nazre na hatt paaye ek pal ke liye,
Deewana bana de har insaan ko wahi to shabab hota hai.

Shally.



 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley wah wah wah kaya baat hai.... Kash ji ki poem ke ek dum baad apki poem parr kar... dil baag baag ho gaya... kaya lafz likhe hai aor kaya arth likhe hai... wah wah bahoot khoob Shally..

Apki jayadatar sad poems dekhi hai apne... magar yah poem kamaal ki likhi hai.. aise he likha karo.... Good creation dear!!!
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«Reply #11 on: July 25, 2009, 11:16:36 PM »
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kahan dard-e-dil dard se bezaar hota hai
dard had se guzre tabhi dil shaad hota hai


thhare hue ashqon ki rangat na poochiye
har qatra hamesha taaza azaab hota hai


hai to asaan apni aakhon ko nam rakhna
par khud se hi kia vaada kharaab hota hai


dard ke kum ya zyada ki tamanna kaun kare 'kaash'
ye vo shay hai jo khud-b-khud aabaad hota hai



Yash Bhai Bahut Umda Peshkash hai.. Behad Khubsoorat lafzon se aapne is Gazal ko Sajaaya hai.. Lafzon Ka Chunaaw Bhi bahut Khooooooob Hai.. Daad Kubool karen.. Applause Applause


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«Reply #12 on: July 25, 2009, 11:19:20 PM »
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Wah Bahut Khoob Kaash Ji..Aacha likha hai aapne.. Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

Jisme husn aaye nazar wahi to naqaab hota hai,
Jo lafz na keh sake, aankhein keh de wahi to jawab hota hai,

Chupa ke rakhna dil ki kisi kone me ishq ko,
Ye shikaari, jaalim jamana bada kharab hota hai,

Jise dekho to nazre na hatt paaye ek pal ke liye,
Deewana bana de har insaan ko wahi to shabab hota hai.

Shally.



Aaye Haye.. Kya Baat hai Shally.. Pahali Line Hi Jabardast likhi Hai Dear.. Bahut Hi Lajawab Alfaaz Likhe hain Dear.. Dil Ko Chhoo gai aapki Yeh Rachna.. Bahut Bahut khoooooooooob..!!

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


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«Reply #13 on: July 25, 2009, 11:27:19 PM »
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Waah waah Kaash Ji Bahoot Bahoot Khoob likha hai bahoot Khoob!

well Replied Shally dear...bahoot Khoob!

Good work both
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«Reply #14 on: July 29, 2009, 10:53:06 AM »
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Shukriya Dosto, Aap Sabne mere kaam ko itna saraha, aur apna keemti waqt diya..!! tahe-sil se aapka shukriya ada karti hoo.n.. notworthy  notworthy

Shally.
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