Kashti nahi Mili

by suman59 on October 22, 2012, 02:17:56 AM
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«Reply #15 on: October 23, 2012, 01:50:15 PM »
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Quote from: dmw on October 22, 2012, 05:42:56 AM
Bahot achhi ghazal kahi hai. Mubarakbaad. Lekin aakhri sher mein kuchh gadbad hai.

spelling mistake ho gaya. ab aap padenge to teek lagega

Sar ko haqikaton se jhukati mai jis jagah
Tumhare shehar mein vo dar(दर) nahi mila.

Thanks for your valuable comments
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«Reply #16 on: October 23, 2012, 03:13:21 PM »
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 suman ji bahut sunder rachna hai.
badhai.
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«Reply #17 on: October 23, 2012, 03:30:22 PM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on October 23, 2012, 03:13:21 PM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
 suman ji bahut sunder rachna hai.
badhai.


Thank you jee
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