Kheyt ek bhi hara nahi baaqi

by Syed Mohd Mahzar on October 02, 2013, 05:56:31 AM
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Ab jala do bujhe chiragho'n ko
tez thi jo hawa ... nahi baaqi

hukm sooli ka ho chuka pahle
is se barh ke sazaa nahi baaqi

baad muddat ke gao'n aaya to
kheyt ek bhi hara nahi baaqi

maine saare diye jala daley
eyk bhi ab bujha nahi baaqi

bik gayi aaj wo haveli bhi
paas ab kuch raha nahi baaqi

zikr e ehsaan ab nahi hota
ye chalan ab raha nahi baaqi

kar liya tark e taalluq usne
darmiya'n kuch raha nahi baaqi

sab ki sab le gaye mareez e ishq
dard e dil ki dawaa nahi baaqi

           .......S.M.Mahzar
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«Reply #1 on: October 02, 2013, 06:24:16 AM »
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hukm sooli ka ho chuka pahle
is se barh ke sazaa nahi baaqi

zikr e ehsaan ab nahi hota
ye chalan ab raha nahi baaqi

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«Reply #2 on: October 02, 2013, 06:46:46 AM »
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Laajawab,,,
Ab jala do bujhe chiragho'n ko
tez thi jo hawa ... nahi baaqi

hukm sooli ka ho chuka pahle
is se barh ke sazaa nahi baaqi

baad muddat ke gao'n aaya to
khet ek bhi hara nahi baaqi

maine saare diye jala daley
eyk bhi ab bujha nahi baaqi

bik gayi aaj wo haveli bhi
paas ab kuch raha nahi baaqi

zikr e ehsaan ab nahi hota
ye chalan ab raha nahi baaqi

kar liya tark e taalluq usne
darmiya'n kuch raha nahi baaqi

sab ki sab le gaye mareez e ishq
dard e dil ki dawaa nahi baaqi

           .......S.M.Mahzar

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«Reply #3 on: October 02, 2013, 06:50:18 AM »
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bahut khoob Mazhar sb.
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«Reply #4 on: October 02, 2013, 08:22:40 AM »
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Ab jala do bujhe chiragho'n ko
tez thi jo hawa ... nahi baaqi
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hukm sooli ka ho chuka pahle
is se barh ke sazaa nahi baaqi
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baad muddat ke gao'n aaya to
khet ek bhi hara nahi baaqi
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maine saare diye jala daley
eyk bhi ab bujha nahi baaqi
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bik gayi aaj wo haveli bhi
paas ab kuch raha nahi baaqi
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zikr e ehsaan ab nahi hota
ye chalan ab raha nahi baaqi
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kar liya tark e taalluq usne
darmiya'n kuch raha nahi baaqi
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sab ki sab le gaye mareez e ishq
dard e dil ki dawaa nahi baaqi
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           .......S.M.Mahzar



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«Reply #5 on: October 02, 2013, 02:30:30 PM »
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bahut sunder
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«Reply #6 on: October 02, 2013, 07:08:13 PM »
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Ab jala do bujhe chiragho'n ko
tez thi jo hawa ... nahi baaqi

hukm sooli ka ho chuka pahle
is se barh ke sazaa nahi baaqi

baad muddat ke gao'n aaya to
khet ek bhi hara nahi baaqi

maine saare diye jala daley
eyk bhi ab bujha nahi baaqi

bik gayi aaj wo haveli bhi
paas ab kuch raha nahi baaqi

zikr e ehsaan ab nahi hota
ye chalan ab raha nahi baaqi

kar liya tark e taalluq usne
darmiya'n kuch raha nahi baaqi

sab ki sab le gaye mareez e ishq
dard e dil ki dawaa nahi baaqi

           .......S.M.Mahzar



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«Reply #7 on: October 02, 2013, 08:07:52 PM »
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bahooooot khooooooob
zikr e ehsaan ab nahi hota
ye chalan ab raha nahi baaqi
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«Reply #8 on: October 02, 2013, 08:19:07 PM »
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bahaut hi khoobsurat ghazal kahi aapne mazhar saahab ...  ismein zindagi ke nasheb o faraaz aur dhoop chaanv ke khel ka bahaut hi sundar bayaan milta hai .... aap ko dheron daad o mubaarakbaad ...
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«Reply #9 on: October 03, 2013, 02:25:07 AM »
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very nice
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«Reply #10 on: October 03, 2013, 02:43:14 AM »
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zikr e ehsaan ab nahi hota
ye chalan ab raha nahi baaqi

kar liya tark e taalluq usne
darmiya'n kuch raha nahi baaqi

sab ki sab le gaye mareez e ishq
dard e dil ki dawaa nahi baaqi

waah waah mazhur sahab bohut khoob
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«Reply #11 on: October 03, 2013, 07:54:44 PM »
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Waaaaaaaaah Mazhar saab.. bahut khoob..badi achchi ghazal se nawaaza hai aapne.. aapko bahut bahut mubarak ho.. waise sabhi ashaar khoob hai.. mujhe yeh bahut pasand aaye..

zikr e ehsaan ab nahi hota
ye chalan ab raha nahi baaqi

kar liya tark e taalluq usne
darmiya'n kuch raha nahi baaqi

sab ki sab le gaye mareez e ishq
dard e dil ki dawaa nahi baaqi
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«Reply #12 on: October 04, 2013, 01:03:01 AM »
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hukm sooli ka ho chuka pahle
is se barh ke sazaa nahi baaqi

zikr e ehsaan ab nahi hota
ye chalan ab raha nahi baaqi

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Ram Saraswat ji,
                   bahut shukrguzar hoon aapkaa........
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«Reply #13 on: October 04, 2013, 01:04:27 AM »
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Laajawab,,,
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                     aapkaa bahut bahut shukriya..........
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«Reply #14 on: October 04, 2013, 01:07:07 AM »
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bahut khoob Mazhar sb.
Mohtaram F.H.Siddiqui Saheb,
              Behad mamnoon wa mashkoor hoon ki aap ne nacheez ki ghazal ko qabil e tareef samjha.........
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