..ki tarha...

by dead heart on November 14, 2008, 12:09:02 AM
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bheegi hai palkein humari ek nadi ki tarha,
ro rahe hai hum idhar aur hass rahi hai woh ek ajnabi ki tarha...

kabar ko napak samjha hai unn beimano ne,
par woh beimaan bhi wafadar nikle humare ansuon ki tarha...

ghirte hue paton se sajhi hai aaj kabar humari,
yeh kabrastan bhi tanha nikla humari andheri zindagi ki tarha...

rote hai hum aaj kal khushion ke mausam main bhi,
yeh rota hua pal bhi adhura nikla humare pyar ki tarha...

hum toh the pagal unke pyar main aaj marr bhi gaye,
maut ka paigham bhi khushi de gaya eid ke chand ki tarha...

dil toh rona chahta tha khul ke par ankhein dokha de gayi,
woh bhi band rehgayi humare pyar ki tarha...
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«Reply #1 on: November 14, 2008, 06:41:05 AM »
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Bohot umda ghazal hai "dead heart" ji, "ghirte hue patton se saji hai aaj qabar hamari" bohot khoob kya dard bhari magar umda soch hai, isi tarah apne umda kalam se nawazte rahiye.  Applause
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«Reply #2 on: November 14, 2008, 07:34:14 AM »
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 Applause  :clap:Too good to read .. Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: November 14, 2008, 11:56:46 AM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

dekho meri kabr pe hargiz na aaya karo
mar chuke hain yakinan par yaad dilaya na karo

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«Reply #4 on: November 14, 2008, 01:00:47 PM »
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Good one Dead Heart
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«Reply #5 on: November 14, 2008, 05:11:10 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Heart......poori ghazal acchi lagai, bas doosra sher samajh main nahin aaya  icon_scratch
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«Reply #6 on: November 14, 2008, 08:33:27 PM »
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bheegi hai palkein humari ek nadi ki tarha,
ro rahe hai hum idhar aur hass rahi hai woh ek ajnabi ki tarha...

kabar ko napak samjha hai unn beimano ne,
par woh beimaan bhi wafadar nikle humare ansuon ki tarha...

ghirte hue paton se sajhi hai aaj kabar humari,
yeh kabrastan bhi tanha nikla humari andheri zindagi ki tarha...

rote hai hum aaj kal khushion ke mausam main bhi,
yeh rota hua pal bhi adhura nikla humare pyar ki tarha...

hum toh the pagal unke pyar main aaj marr bhi gaye,
maut ka paigham bhi khushi de gaya eid ke chand ki tarha...

dil toh rona chahta tha khul ke par ankhein dokha de gayi,
woh bhi band rehgayi humare pyar ki tarha...

o my god! o my god! o my god!
ub tuk yo pe jo bhi lihka, jo bhi padrha, this was by far my absolute favorite! lihkthay rahee hai! kasam-e behud pasand aaya!
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«Reply #7 on: November 14, 2008, 09:08:27 PM »
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rote hai hum aaj kal khushion ke mausam main bhi,
yeh rota hua pal bhi adhura nikla humare pyar ki tarha...

dil toh rona chahta tha khul ke par ankhein dokha de gayi,
woh bhi band rehgayi humare pyar ki tarha...

Majbooree aur dard ka sundar nikaah-e-nou jaisaa asardaar lagaa aapkaa kalaam!
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«Reply #8 on: November 15, 2008, 02:00:19 AM »
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 notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy icon_king icon_king tearyeyed tearyeyed

ohhh thanx to everyone who posted a reply...itni tariff humne kabhi nahin suni....im honoured....

"aaj kuch ansu agaye ap logon ki tariif sunkar,
 yeh aansu bhi humsafar bane rahe zindagi in kamzor behsaakion ki tarha..."

guys once again thnx...i still think that was jst too much for me...thnx..honoured
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«Reply #9 on: November 15, 2008, 02:06:28 AM »
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Bohot Khoob Heart......poori ghazal acchi lagai, bas doosra sher samajh main nahin aaya  icon_scratch

i meant dil ki kabar ko napak(i dnt noe the english word but opposite of PAK) samjha unn beimanon ne(beimaan here refers to ppl who dislike me), but those people too are true frends or imandar towards me like my tears....
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«Reply #10 on: November 15, 2008, 09:23:08 PM »
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Wonderfull lines bohat hi kamal ka ghazal likha hai Heart... Thumbs UP
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Shukriya Honeyrose jee...
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