Koun yuun bahkaa rahaa hai aaj fir: aaou idhar!

by abdbundeli on April 10, 2010, 12:15:28 PM
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Door koyee gaa rahaa hai aaj fir: aaou idhar!
Aasmaan muskaa rahaa hai aaj fir: aaou idhar!

Kisliye yeh gul khiley hain baag mein: kis sey kahoon?
Abra rah mahkaa rahaa hai aaj fir: aaou idhar!

Jag rahey hain parindey bhi aaj, kiskee chaah mein?
Wasl unhain jagaa rahaa hai aaj fir: aaou idhar!

Kabhee meiney dooriyoun ko dooriyaan samjhaa na thaa:
Hijra bahut sataa rahaa hai aaj fir: aaou idhar!

Baahuoun mein ghir na jaaney kyoun chhitak kar door ho?
Koun yuun bahkaa rahaa hai aaj fir: aaou idhar!

Shab andheyree thee, nazar aataa nahin thaa kuchh kaheen;
Shafaq raah dikhaa rahaa hai aaj fir: aaou idhar!

Saath ley raana'aiyoun ko, yah fazah-e-khushnumaa,
Baar-baar manaa rahaa hai aaj fir: aaou idhar!

Aaj bhi, gar, mil na paaye, kal na jaaney hon kahaan?
Yaar, 'abd' bulaa rahaa hai aaj fir: aaou idhar!

                                 - abdbundeli

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«Reply #1 on: April 10, 2010, 05:55:46 PM »
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Wah wah Abd ji bahot khoobsurat creation hai ye aapki. Padhkar mazaa aa gaya. Do ashaar aapki nazr hain:

Abr mein chaand niha.n raat hai tanha tanha
Aaj ho jaao ayaa.n raat hai tanha tanha
Koi saaya nahi, dastak nahi, aahat bhi nahi
Dil nahi lagta yahaa.n raat hai tanha tanha
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #2 on: April 10, 2010, 06:45:58 PM »
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Door koyee gaa rahaa hai aaj fir: aaou idhar!
Aasmaan muskaa rahaa hai aaj fir: aaou idhar!

Kisliye yeh gul khiley hain baag mein: kis sey kahoon?
Abra rah mahkaa rahaa hai aaj fir: aaou idhar!

Jag rahey hain parindey bhi aaj, kiskee chaah mein?
Wasl unhain jagaa rahaa hai aaj fir: aaou idhar!

Kabhee meiney dooriyoun ko dooriyaan samjhaa na thaa:
Hijra bahut sataa rahaa hai aaj fir: aaou idhar!

Baahuoun mein ghir na jaaney kyoun chhitak kar door ho?
Koun yuun bahkaa rahaa hai aaj fir: aaou idhar!

Shab andheyree thee, nazar aataa nahin thaa kuchh kaheen;
Shafaq raah dikhaa rahaa hai aaj fir: aaou idhar!

Saath ley raana'aiyoun ko, yah fazah-e-khushnumaa,
Baar-baar manaa rahaa hai aaj fir: aaou idhar!

Aaj bhi, gar, mil na paaye, kal na jaaney hon kahaan?
Yaar, 'abd' bulaa rahaa hai aaj fir: aaou idhar!

                                 - abdbundeli



Bahut khoob likha hai aap ne Abd Ji
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #3 on: April 10, 2010, 06:47:03 PM »
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Wah wah Abd ji bahot khoobsurat creation hai ye aapki. Padhkar mazaa aa gaya. Do ashaar aapki nazr hain:

Abr mein chaand niha.n raat hai tanha tanha
Aaj ho jaao ayaa.n raat hai tanha tanha
Koi saaya nahi, dastak nahi, aahat bhi nahi
Dil nahi lagta yahaa.n raat hai tanha tanha


AAp ne bhi achchha likha hai Riyaz Ji
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abdbundeli
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«Reply #4 on: April 11, 2010, 06:20:20 AM »
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Wah wah Abd ji bahot khoobsurat creation hai ye aapki. Padhkar mazaa aa gaya. Do ashaar aapki nazr hain:

Abr mein chaand niha.n raat hai tanha tanha
Aaj ho jaao ayaa.n raat hai tanha tanha
Koi saaya nahi, dastak nahi, aahat bhi nahi
Dil nahi lagta yahaa.n raat hai tanha tanha


Shukriyah riyaz106 ji!
Kyaa baat hai janaab!!
"Aaj ho jaao ayaa.n raat hai tanha tanha"
Baaqayi bahut hee khoob!

Ab mein thahraa ikahattar-saalaa; aur aap hain khaasey noujawaan-e-surkhuroo! Bas itnaa hi farq hai! Waisey, shayaroun kaa dil to martey dam tak noujawaan hi banaa rahtaa hai: yah to aapney bhi zaroor hi sunaa hogaa!!


Baahuoun mein qayaam-e-khwaab tum miley ho mujhey:
Shafaq sey shaam huyi hai, mizaaj hai taazah!
Raat aaney ko hai, khushboo-e-badan lahree hai;
Neend aaye to kahoongaa, ki, dobaarah aajaa!!

                       - abd bundeli

  

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«Reply #5 on: April 11, 2010, 06:25:36 AM »
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Bahut khoob likha hai aap ne Abd Ji

Thanks Rajesh ji!

      - abd bundeli
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«Reply #6 on: April 11, 2010, 06:29:02 AM »
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Bahut Khub Abd Babu.....
Aur Riyaz Bhai Aapke Ashaar Bhi Achche Rahe....

Yun Hi Bazm Ko Roshan Karte Rahiye...

Khush Rahiye...

~Shihab~


Thanks shihab ji! Aap bhi 'sapariwaar' tandurust rahiye, khush rahiye!

                                                 - abd bundeli
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