~~"KUCH ROSHNI KUCH-SAJAWAT HO JAAYE"~~by Shally.

by k.shael on June 10, 2009, 09:58:06 AM
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Na u thama kar mujhe baar-baar, teri aadat na ho jaaye,
Pehle hi khud se khafa rehta hoo.n, aur na dil se bagawat ho jaaye!!

Mehfil me kis baat ki hai kami, maloom nahi mujhe magar,
Nikle jo husn-e-yaar parde se, kuch roshni kuch sajawat ho jaaye!!
 
Aaye ho jo kabr pe meri, to itminan se sun.na dastaa.n-e-dil,
Shayad yaad-e-yaar se wakif hokar, aashqo.n ki barsaat ho jaaye!!

Ek arse se jee rahe hai sharafat me, ham dono buzhdil insaan,
Kyun na aab tum awargi, aur ham mohabbat karke barbaad ho jaaye!!

Wajood tera kuch bhi nahi, dard-e-yaar ke begair Shally magar,
Likh de aaj mohabbat me, kya pata kisi ke armaan-e-dil aabad ho jaaye!!

Shally.

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«Reply #1 on: June 10, 2009, 10:00:21 AM »
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bahut umda Shally dera
kamaal likha hai aapne
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«Reply #2 on: June 10, 2009, 10:02:14 AM »
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BOhat Boat Achche Shally, Bohat Achche
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«Reply #3 on: June 10, 2009, 10:03:57 AM »
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Wow Shally ji very nice and beautiful creation. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: June 10, 2009, 10:05:13 AM »
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Nikle jo husn-e-yaar parde se, kuch roshni kuch sajawat ho jaaye!!


Waah..Bohot Khoob Shally !! Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: June 10, 2009, 10:06:53 AM »
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Wah Wah Shally Princess Bohut khoob... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Tumare yaadon ko dil me.n lagaye rakhte hain
Tumari yaadon ko janam janam tak dil me.n nisaar karte hain
Kabhi waqt ko batado ke laut aana humse milne
Aaj bhi unn yaadon ko seene me.n lagaye rakhte hain

Honeyrose..
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«Reply #6 on: June 10, 2009, 10:11:42 AM »
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Na u thama kar mujhe baar-baar, teri aadat na ho jaaye,
Pehle hi khud se khafa rehta hoo.n, aur na dil se bagawat ho jaaye!!

Mehfil me kis baat ki hai kami, maloom nahi mujhe magar,
Nikle jo husn-e-yaar parde se, kuch roshni kuch sajawat ho jaaye!!
 
Aaye ho jo kabr pe meri, to itminan se sun.na dastaa.n-e-dil,
Shayad yaad-e-yaar se wakif hokar, aashqo.n ki barsaat ho jaaye!!

Ek arse se jee rahe hai sharafat me, ham dono bujhdil insaan,
Kyun na aab tum awargi, aur ham mohabbat karke barbaad ho jaaye!!

Wajood tera kuch bhi nahi, dard-e-yaar ke begair Shally magar,
Likh de aaj mohabbat me, kya pata kisi ke dil-e- armaan aabad ho jaaye!!

Shally.



Wah wah Shally dear Bahut khoob  Applause
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«Reply #7 on: June 10, 2009, 10:14:58 AM »
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Nawab Ji,

Bahut khoob !

Kya ghazal likhi hai boss Applause Applause Applause

Really mazaa aa gaya padh kar Thumbs UP
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«Reply #8 on: June 10, 2009, 10:20:29 AM »
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Shael sahiba,
kafi umda aur khoobsurat kalaam likha hai...
Aur seedha dil men utre aisa asar hai is men...
Wah bhai wah...
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«Reply #9 on: June 10, 2009, 11:23:08 AM »
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fantastic, bahut hi badhya likha hai shally
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«Reply #10 on: June 10, 2009, 11:58:20 AM »
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wow! MA yunhe lihkte rahaen dear! bahot ahche behna!
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«Reply #11 on: June 10, 2009, 02:03:06 PM »
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Bahut khoob Shally Ji
Khubsurat rachna hai ye
Wah wah
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«Reply #12 on: June 10, 2009, 08:26:51 PM »
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Just beautiful Shally...Too good... Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: June 11, 2009, 06:43:06 AM »
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Shallyyyyyyyy...... Humesha Ki Tarah Lajawab Lafzon se, Jazzbaaton se Saji Gazal Pesh Ki hai aapne..!! Dard Ko Bakhoobi Kaagaz Par Utaara hai aapne..!! Applause Applause


Behtreen, Lajawab Aur Shaandaar Peshkash Aapki.. Dil ko Chhoo gai aapki yeh Rachna.. Bahut bahut Khooooooob.. Daad Kubool karen..!!


 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


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«Reply #14 on: June 11, 2009, 08:35:57 AM »
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bahut umda Shally dera
kamaal likha hai aapne


Shukriya Diya dear, Thread par aane aur sarahna ke liye,

Shally.
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