Kuchh kareyn: aap bhi idhar aayen!

by abdbundeli on February 07, 2013, 11:42:44 AM
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Kaash, wo lout apney ghar aayen!
Kaash, yeh ghaaw-o-qasb bhar jaayen!!

Roshnee mein chhupey hain woh, yaa Rab!
Deed-e-asahaab kahaan sey laayen?

Ham hain sahrey mein, dilrubaa rah mein:
Durd-e-aab-e-baqaa kahaan paayen?

Aasmaan chup hai: aap kyoun chup hain;
Haaziree mein hun, kuchh to farmaayen?

Kaash unkee mahaktee zulfoun key
Narm saayey mein abra itraayen!!

Zeest key dar sey hashra tak, kaisey
Ham khayaaloun ko roz bahlaayen?

Koun kousar kaa nahaayaa hai yahaan?
Ham mukhaatib hain, ab kahaan jaayen?

Ham tah-e-jaw key raahrou hain, ‘abd’,
Kuchh kareyn: aap bhi idhar aayen!!

                - abd bundeli
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«Reply #1 on: February 07, 2013, 11:53:05 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
waah waah. bahut khoob. har ek sher bahut khoob rahe. dili mubarakbad ko qubool kare
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«Reply #2 on: February 07, 2013, 01:12:58 PM »
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Abd Sahaab Aadaab!


Kia kahne janab, badi hi gehre aur umdaa kalaam kahi hai aapne....
Sabhi ashaar aik se badhkar aik rahe... Usual Smile

Is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul
kijiye... Usual Smile


Likhate rahiye.. bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: February 07, 2013, 01:17:06 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on February 07, 2013, 11:42:44 AM
Kaash, wo lout apney ghar aayen!
Kaash, yeh ghaaw-o-qasb bhar jaayen!!

Roshnee mein chhupey hain woh, yaa Rab!
Deed-e-asahaab kahaan sey laayen?

Ham hain sahrey mein, dilrubaa rah mein:
Durd-e-aab-e-baqaa kahaan paayen?

Aasmaan chup hai: aap kyoun chup hain;
Haaziree mein hun, kuchh to farmaayen?

Kaash unkee mahaktee zulfoun key
Narm saayey mein abra itraayen!!

Zeest key dar sey hashra tak, kaisey
Ham khayaaloun ko roz bahlaayen?

Koun kousar kaa nahaayaa hai yahaan?
Ham mukhaatib hain, ab kahaan jaayen?

Ham tah-e-jaw key raahrou hain, ‘abd’,
Kuchh kareyn: aap bhi idhar aayen!!

                - abd bundeli


Wah wah abd bundeli jee.. aapne bahut bahut acha likha hai. Aapka kuch purane kalam bi maine pada aur bahut acha likhte hai. aapka likhne ka andaz alag hai. bahut bahut daad
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«Reply #4 on: February 07, 2013, 03:01:20 PM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #5 on: February 07, 2013, 04:27:34 PM »
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Bahut khoob Abd saheb.
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«Reply #6 on: February 07, 2013, 04:46:27 PM »
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Bahut khoob Sir
Aasmaan chup hai: aap kyoun chup hain;
Haaziree mein hun, kuchh to farmaayen?

Kaash unkee mahaktee zulfoun key
Narm saayey mein abra itraayen!!

Zeest key dar sey hashra tak,
kaisey Ham khayaaloun ko roz bahlaayen? Applause
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«Reply #7 on: February 08, 2013, 05:25:34 AM »
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Quote from: aqsh on February 07, 2013, 11:53:05 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
waah waah. bahut khoob. har ek sher bahut khoob rahe. dili mubarakbad ko qubool kare

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Aqsh ji!
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«Reply #8 on: February 08, 2013, 05:27:07 AM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on February 07, 2013, 01:12:58 PM
Abd Sahaab Aadaab!
Kia kahne janab, badi hi gehre aur umdaa kalaam kahi hai aapne....
Sabhi ashaar aik se badhkar aik rahe... Usual Smile
Is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul
kijiye... Usual Smile
Likhate rahiye.. bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, 'ParwaaZ' ji! Namaskaar!
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Quote from: suman59 on February 07, 2013, 01:17:06 PM
Wah wah abd bundeli jee.. aapne bahut bahut acha likha hai. Aapka kuch purane kalam bi maine pada aur bahut acha likhte hai. aapka likhne ka andaz alag hai. bahut bahut daad

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Suman ji!
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Quote from: sksaini4 on February 07, 2013, 03:01:20 PM
bahut khoob

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Saini ji!
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Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on February 07, 2013, 04:27:34 PM
Bahut khoob Abd saheb.

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Iftakhar ji!
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Quote from: mkv on February 07, 2013, 04:46:27 PM
Bahut khoob Sir
Aasmaan chup hai: aap kyoun chup hain;
Haaziree mein hun, kuchh to farmaayen?

Kaash unkee mahaktee zulfoun key
Narm saayey mein abra itraayen!!

Zeest key dar sey hashra tak,
kaisey Ham khayaaloun ko roz bahlaayen? Applause


Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Mukesh ji!
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«Reply #13 on: February 10, 2013, 06:22:20 AM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on February 10, 2013, 06:22:20 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Shukriyah, 'Hriday' ji!
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