KYA POOCHH RAHE HAIN ..........................HASAN

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Kya  ho  gaya  RindoN  ko , yeh  kya  poochh  rahe  haiN  ,
Maikhaane   ka  ,  Zaahid  se , pata  poochh  rahe  haiN


Nikle   haiN   iraade  se  woh  jaaN   lene  ke  shaayed  ,
Kya   Qatl   pe  miltee  hai  Sazaa   poochh  rahe   haiN


MehmaaN   ko   Dar-e-Dil   pe  hi   rokay  hue  kab  say  ,
Bus   Naam  , ba-sad  Naaz - o - Ada ,  poochh   rahe  haiN


HaathhoN   meiN   laga   doosre   ke   naam   ki   menhdee  ,
Kaisa   hai   chadhaa   Rang - e - Hina  poochh  rahe  haiN


Nadaani   pe    Qurbaan  , ' Hasan '  ,  aap  ki   jaaooN  ,
Zaalim  se  hi  ZakhmoN   ki   dawa   poochh   rahe   haiN
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«Reply #1 on: April 20, 2013, 07:24:02 PM »
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Siddiqui Sahaab Aadaab...!


WaaH jee waaH kya baat hai bahut khoob bahut hi umdaa gazal rahi janab...
Sabhi ashaar behad khoob rahe.. Usual Smile


Muqtasar se ashaaroN meiN gazal ko mehdood mat kijiye sahaab aap umda shaayad hai jinke zyaadaa se zyaadaa ashaar padhne ko jee chahta hai.. Usual Smile

Meri dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye..

Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #2 on: April 20, 2013, 07:31:30 PM »
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Hasan Sahab,
            Aadaab !

Waaah waaah bahut khoob......laajwaab ghazal
har she'r bahut achchha hai....is she'r par
khusoosee daad qubool farmaayen...

"HaathhoN   meiN   laga   doosre   ke   naam   ki   menhdee  ,
 Kaisa   hai   chadhaa   Rang - e - Hina  poochh  rahe  haiN"

Raqeeb Lucknowi
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«Reply #3 on: April 20, 2013, 07:44:25 PM »
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waah. Kya baat hai hasan ji. badi hi khoobsurat ghazal pesh ki aapne. sabhi ashaar khoob rahe. maza aa gaya hai padh ke mujhe yeh do ashaar bahut jyaada pasand aaye

HaathhoN meiN laga doosre ke naam ki menhdee ,
Kaisa hai chadhaa Rang - e - Hina poochh rahe haiN


Nadaani pe Qurbaan , ' Hasan ' , aap ki jaaooN ,
Zaalim se hi ZakhmoN ki dawa poochh rahe haiN
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: April 20, 2013, 07:52:23 PM »
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waah waah bhaaijaan bahut hee laajawaab kalaam dheron daad
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«Reply #5 on: April 20, 2013, 07:59:02 PM »
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Bahut badhiya Sir
Poori ki poori ghazal..mujhe to aise laga ki ek -2 sher..ek ghazal ke barabar hai..
phir aapki behad sadhee huee adaygee..dil khush ho gaya..
in sawaaloN ka javaab..bas dil se mahsoos kar sakte hai..

CharoN taraf dard..aur phir ye sher
HaathhoN   meiN   laga   doosre   ke   naam   ki   menhdee  ,
Kaisa   hai   chadhaa   Rang - e - Hina  poochh  rahe  haiN
Maza aa gaya..jaise 2 rangoN ko mila ke teesra colour..
wah wah wah
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«Reply #6 on: April 20, 2013, 08:00:42 PM »
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BAHUT KHOOB Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: April 20, 2013, 08:11:05 PM »
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Kya  ho  gaya  RindoN  ko , yeh  kya  poochh  rahe  haiN  ,
Maikhaane   ka  ,  Zaahid  se , pata  poochh  rahe  haiN


Nikle   haiN   iraade  se  woh  jaaN   lene  ke  shaayed  ,
Kya   Qatl   pe  miltee  hai  Sazaa   poochh  rahe   haiN


MehmaaN   ko   Dar-e-Dil   pe  hi   rokay  hue  kab  say  ,
Bus   Naam  , ba-sad  Naaz - o - Ada ,  poochh   rahe  haiN


HaathhoN   meiN   laga   doosre   ke   naam   ki   menhdee  ,
Kaisa   hai   chadhaa   Rang - e - Hina  poochh  rahe  haiN


Nadaani   pe    Qurbaan  , ' Hasan '  ,  aap  ki   jaaooN  ,
Zaalim  se  hi  ZakhmoN   ki   dawa   poochh   rahe   haiN


Wah,Wah,Wah, Mukammal ghazal kahi hai aapne.Mubarak ho hasan sahab.
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«Reply #8 on: April 20, 2013, 08:59:52 PM »
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Kya  ho  gaya  RindoN  ko , yeh  kya  poochh  rahe  haiN  ,
Maikhaane   ka  ,  Zaahid  se , pata  poochh  rahe  haiN


Nikle   haiN   iraade  se  woh  jaaN   lene  ke  shaayed  ,
Kya   Qatl   pe  miltee  hai  Sazaa   poochh  rahe   haiN


MehmaaN   ko   Dar-e-Dil   pe  hi   rokay  hue  kab  say  ,
Bus   Naam  , ba-sad  Naaz - o - Ada ,  poochh   rahe  haiN


HaathhoN   meiN   laga   doosre   ke   naam   ki   menhdee  ,
Kaisa   hai   chadhaa   Rang - e - Hina  poochh  rahe  haiN


Nadaani   pe    Qurbaan  , ' Hasan '  ,  aap  ki   jaaooN  ,
Zaalim  se  hi  ZakhmoN   ki   dawa   poochh   rahe   haiN


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«Reply #9 on: April 20, 2013, 11:16:03 PM »
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Nadaani   pe    Qurbaan  , ' Hasan '  ,  aap  ki   jaaooN  ,
Zaalim  se  hi  ZakhmoN   ki   dawa   poochh   rahe   haiN[/b][/color]
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Siddiqui sahab bahut hi umda bahut khoob dheron Daad
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«Reply #10 on: April 20, 2013, 11:55:53 PM »
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Kya  ho  gaya  RindoN  ko , yeh  kya  poochh  rahe  haiN  ,
Maikhaane   ka  ,  Zaahid  se , pata  poochh  rahe  haiN



Nikle   haiN   iraade  se  woh  jaaN   lene  ke  shaayed  ,
Kya   Qatl   pe  miltee  hai  Sazaa   poochh  rahe   haiN



MehmaaN   ko   Dar-e-Dil   pe  hi   rokay  hue  kab  say  ,
Bus   Naam  , ba-sad  Naaz - o - Ada ,  poochh   rahe  haiN


HaathhoN   meiN   laga   doosre   ke   naam   ki   menhdee  ,
Kaisa   hai   chadhaa   Rang - e - Hina  poochh  rahe  haiN


Nadaani   pe    Qurbaan  , ' Hasan '  ,  aap  ki   jaaooN  ,
Zaalim  se  hi  ZakhmoN   ki   dawa   poochh   rahe   haiN



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«Reply #11 on: April 21, 2013, 12:38:25 AM »
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Siddiqui Sahab Kya Khoob Likhte Ho. Jawab Nahin. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #12 on: April 21, 2013, 03:47:55 AM »
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Nice.
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«Reply #13 on: April 21, 2013, 11:11:51 AM »
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Kya  ho  gaya  RindoN  ko , yeh  kya  poochh  rahe  haiN  ,
Maikhaane   ka  ,  Zaahid  se , pata  poochh  rahe  haiN


Nikle   haiN   iraade  se  woh  jaaN   lene  ke  shaayed  ,
Kya   Qatl   pe  miltee  hai  Sazaa   poochh  rahe   haiN


MehmaaN   ko   Dar-e-Dil   pe  hi   rokay  hue  kab  say  ,
Bus   Naam  , ba-sad  Naaz - o - Ada ,  poochh   rahe  haiN


HaathhoN   meiN   laga   doosre   ke   naam   ki   menhdee  ,
Kaisa   hai   chadhaa   Rang - e - Hina  poochh  rahe  haiN



Nadaani   pe    Qurbaan  , ' Hasan '  ,  aap  ki   jaaooN  ,
Zaalim  se  hi  ZakhmoN   ki   dawa   poochh   rahe   haiN


Excellant ghazal Hasan sb. Bahut bahut daad.
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«Reply #14 on: April 21, 2013, 11:34:35 AM »
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very nice hasan sir veri impresive lines
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