Loo Ab Marnaa Bhee Tal Jaayegaa.......masoom:Ghazals

Masoom Shahzada

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Unkee aaNkhoo kaa vaar kahaaN jaayegaa.
Gunahgaar ham hai, hamaaree taraf hee aayegaa.
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Puraanee hai ye haseenoo kee adaa , nayaa kuch bhee nahee.
Aayegaa wo najdeek aour muskurakar gujar jaayegaa.
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Ek tootaa huaa pattaa hee too hai insaan.
Jidhar le jaaye hawaa , udhar jaayegaa.
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Hak ne aaj rishtoo koo toodne kee daan lee hai.
Dekhe, Bhai maNgega hissa yaa rishtoo pe maan jaayegaa.
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Pyaar bad naa saka too dhat jaayegaa.
Insaan kee fitrat hai badal jaanaa, badal jaayegaa.
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Unkee chaahat hai muttee me kaid jugno see.
Band rakhkhee to dam ghutegaa, khoolee too uad jaayegaa.
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Teer muhabbat ka chalaa ke jindagee cheen lee usne "Masoom".
Aour dawaa pilaa ke kahaa, "Loo ab marnaa bee tal jaayegaa".


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soudagar

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Re: Loo Ab Marnaa Bhee Tal Jaayegaa.......masoom

«Reply #1 on: July 28, 2012, 03:55:59 AM »

Wah wah wah....... Masoom ji kya pqalaam pesh kiya hai.... Jitni daad di jaye kam hai...... Behad khubsurat umda aur besqeemti qalaam.......... Hajaro salaam aapke is qalaam ke naam.......aur ek rau bhi...


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Sanjeev kash

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Re: Loo Ab Marnaa Bhee Tal Jaayegaa.......masoom

«Reply #2 on: July 28, 2012, 04:23:58 AM »

BAhut BAhut Khub Applause


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Re: Loo Ab Marnaa Bhee Tal Jaayegaa.......masoom

«Reply #3 on: July 28, 2012, 09:26:05 AM »

bahut khoob, badhai


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Re: Loo Ab Marnaa Bhee Tal Jaayegaa.......masoom

«Reply #4 on: July 28, 2012, 10:14:56 AM »

waah waah bahut khoob


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BANSI DHAMEJA

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Re: Loo Ab Marnaa Bhee Tal Jaayegaa.......masoom

«Reply #5 on: July 28, 2012, 10:48:41 AM »

wah wah kiya baat hai Applause


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mkv

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Re: Loo Ab Marnaa Bhee Tal Jaayegaa.......masoom

«Reply #6 on: July 28, 2012, 10:59:17 AM »

Barhiya Masoom bhai
Bahut bahut acche ehsaas o khayaal ko likha hai aapne.
vaah vaah vaaaaaaaah
3rd sher...bahut bahut khoob raha.
Applause


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livingbytheday

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Re: Loo Ab Marnaa Bhee Tal Jaayegaa.......masoom

«Reply #7 on: July 28, 2012, 05:21:03 PM »

bahut khoob


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Re: Loo Ab Marnaa Bhee Tal Jaayegaa.......masoom

«Reply #8 on: July 28, 2012, 05:39:33 PM »

bahut bahut khoob maasoom ji... Usual Smile

daad daad.. Applause


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masoom shahjada

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Re: Loo Ab Marnaa Bhee Tal Jaayegaa.......masoom

«Reply #9 on: July 30, 2012, 02:32:44 PM »

Quote from: soudagar on July 28, 2012, 03:55:59 AM

saudagar jee aadaab
Saudagar jee sayad jitnee tareef aapne es ko bakhsee sayad ye etna mustahak nahee tha par aapne esko jitnee ejjat se nawaja uska main sukargujar hoo.
Jab es tarah koi hausla badata to likhne ka dil karta hai aour soch ke darwaje washee hote chale jaate hai.
Barhaal aaka bahoot bahoot sukriya.
....masoom.....


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masoom shahjada

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Re: Loo Ab Marnaa Bhee Tal Jaayegaa.......masoom

«Reply #10 on: July 30, 2012, 11:56:08 PM »

Quote from: Sanjeev kash on July 28, 2012, 04:23:58 AM

BAhut BAhut Khub Applause

sukriya sanjeev ji


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masoom shahjada

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Re: Loo Ab Marnaa Bhee Tal Jaayegaa.......masoom

«Reply #11 on: July 31, 2012, 09:05:18 AM »

Quote from: nandbahu on July 28, 2012, 09:26:05 AM

bahut khoob, badhai

thanks a lot nandbahu jee


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masoom shahjada

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Re: Loo Ab Marnaa Bhee Tal Jaayegaa.......masoom

«Reply #12 on: July 31, 2012, 10:48:57 AM »

Quote from: sksaini4 on July 28, 2012, 10:14:56 AM

waah waah bahut khoob

sukriya bhai


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masoom shahjada

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Re: Loo Ab Marnaa Bhee Tal Jaayegaa.......masoom

«Reply #13 on: August 01, 2012, 04:41:34 AM »

Quote from: BANSI DHAMEJA on July 28, 2012, 10:48:41 AM

wah wah kiya baat hai Applause

sukriyaa basni jee


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pankajwfs

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Re: Loo Ab Marnaa Bhee Tal Jaayegaa.......masoom

«Reply #14 on: August 01, 2012, 05:19:27 AM »

Quote from: Masoom Shahzada on July 28, 2012, 03:16:02 AM

Bahut bahut khoob khayalat rakhe hain aapne Masoom ji is gazal me ek se badh ke ek ye aasa'r mujhe khaas pasand aya
"Hak ne aaj rishtoo koo toodne kee daan lee hai.
Dekhe, Bhai maNgega hissa yaa rishtoo pe maan jaayegaa."... Clapping Smiley


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