Main us gali se guzarta huN sar Jhukaaye hue

by vipul kumar on July 21, 2011, 01:51:31 PM
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Ek Tarhi misre 'Guzar gaya hai Zamana Gale lagaye hue' par Likhi hui ghazal______


Khataa-e-Tarq-e-Maraasim ka ghum Uthaaye hue......
Main us gali se guzarta huN sar Jhukaaye hue......
[mistake of breaking relations]

Ab k GaliyoN me Bhatakta huN Tera Naam Liye,
yaad-e-Maazi ki KirchiyoN se Zakhm Khaaye hue....
[Maazi=Past; Kirche=pieces]

Hamne socha tha Mohabbat me Sahal Guzregi,
Haaye Kya Sakht Guzarti Hai Dil Lagaaye Hue......
[Sahal=easy]

Dil-e-Betaab-e-Mohabbat Zaraa Khayaal Rahe,
Unse Milna to magar Dard ko chhupaaye hue.....

Ham Aseeraan-e-Wafaa Sir Utha ke Chalte haiN,
Gunaah-e-ishq ki tohmat Gale Lagaaye Hue.....
[Asiiran=Prisoners; Tohmat=blame]

Khalq dekhegi sar-e-mahshar giraftaar-e-wafa,
DiloN ke khoon me Zaalim Tujhe Nahaaye Hue....
[Khalq=people; mahshar=Kayaamat]

Hamne aabad Kiya YaaRa Sukhan ka ye aalam,
warna Phool adab ke the sab kumhalaaye hue.....!!




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kamal aggarwal
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«Reply #1 on: July 21, 2011, 03:18:17 PM »
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very nice vipul ji  Applause

meaning ke saath read karne me easy raha thanks
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vipul kumar
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«Reply #2 on: July 22, 2011, 07:24:39 AM »
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ShUkriya kamal ji....Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: July 22, 2011, 08:13:31 AM »
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aapki ghazal behat khubsurat hai
soch mein gahrai bahut hai
hume bhi aise ghazal kahna sikhayiye plz
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«Reply #4 on: July 22, 2011, 06:44:36 PM »
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ek_tamanna ji...
'Soch' sikhayi nahi jaati. haaN siikhi jarur ja sakti hai. Agar sach me siikhna hai to ek salaah dunga. Achhe se achhe kalaam jyada se jyada padhiye. Aap jaisa padhengi uska 10% hi likh paayengi....
Main jab likhta hu to Faiz aur Ghalib ko hi padhta hu aksar. Kyonki agar unka 10% bhi likh paaya To bahut hoga.
Shayri ko fikr-o-fun kaha jata hai. Dono cheezeN jaruri hai. Fikr padhne se aata hai aur fun ke liye Seniors se isi tarah poochhte rahiye.....(well, I am not senior :D)
Jab dono chiizeN paas hogi to bahut aala darje par likhogi.

(Waise ye sab paane ka khwab sab dekhte hai par mehnat koi nahi karna chahta. aap bhi shayd dekhogi aur chhod dogi.)
Anyways, Shukriya Padhne aur pasand karne ke liye. Aur Best of luck Shayri ke liye.
Meri duayeN tamam ShayroN ke saath hai:)
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