Marz aisaa hai: eik hi tabeeb hai jis kaa!

by abdbundeli on December 29, 2008, 07:30:53 AM
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Eid key chaand hain: kyoun roz nazar aayengey?
Lag rahaa kyoun hamain, ki, aaj nazar aayengey?

Khoob karwaatey intizaar: par, aatey to hain!
Eik din hogaa, roz shaam-o-sahar aayengey!!

Waa’adah ho, to, taS****e ho, muntzir hon ham!
Un kee marzee hai, ho sakaa to, idhar aayengey!!

Kahaan hain wo? Patah naheen! Kahaan talaasheyn ham?
Raah detkheyngey; aur, yuun hi guzar jaayengey!!

Marz aisaa hai: eik hi tabeeb hai jis kaa!
Wo na aayaa to, haqeeqat hai, ki, mar jaayengey!!

Kisee kaa jor naheen un pai: ham kareyn kyaa-kyaa?
Umeed hai, ki, ‘abd’, lout key ghar aayengey!!

                                   - abd bundeli
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«Reply #1 on: December 29, 2008, 09:21:33 AM »
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Bohat khoob bade bhai.....

aa chaa.Ndanii bhii merii tarah jaag rahii hai
palako.n pe sitaaro.n ko liye raat kha.Dii hai

ye baat ki suurat ke bhale dil ke bure ho.n
allaah kare jhuuTh ho bahuto.n se suunii hai

vo maathe kaa matalaa ho ki ho.nTho.n ke do misare
bachapan kii Gazal hii merii mahabuub rahii hai

Gazalo.n ne vahii.n zulfo.n ke phailaa diye saaye
jin raaho.n pe dekhaa hai bahut dhuup ka.Dii hai

ham dillii bhii ho aaye hai.n laahaur bhii ghume
ai yaar magar terii galii terii galii hai

                        -Bashir Badr-
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«Reply #2 on: December 29, 2008, 10:18:07 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on December 29, 2008, 09:21:33 AM
Bohat khoob bade bhai.....

aa chaa.Ndanii bhii merii tarah jaag rahii hai
palako.n pe sitaaro.n ko liye raat kha.Dii hai

ye baat ki suurat ke bhale dil ke bure ho.n
allaah kare jhuuTh ho bahuto.n se suunii hai

vo maathe kaa matalaa ho ki ho.nTho.n ke do misare
bachapan kii Gazal hii merii mahabuub rahii hai

Gazalo.n ne vahii.n zulfo.n ke phailaa diye saaye
jin raaho.n pe dekhaa hai bahut dhuup ka.Dii hai

ham dillii bhii ho aaye hai.n laahaur bhii ghume
ai yaar magar terii galii terii galii hai

                        -Bashir Badr-
Thanks a lot, Sajid bhai!
Bashir Badr is one of the most read modern poets of Urdu. When he sings, he brings together the whole environment around into his preview. You have quoted a lovely gazal from him. I'm happy you're reading quite a variety of Urdu poets now-a-days.Keep it up.
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«Reply #3 on: December 29, 2008, 02:11:53 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on December 29, 2008, 07:30:53 AM
Eid key chaand hain: kyoun roz nazar aayengey?
Lag rahaa kyoun hamain, ki, aaj nazar aayengey?

Khoob karwaatey intizaar: par, aatey to hain!
Eik din hogaa, roz shaam-o-sahar aayengey!!

Waa’adah ho, to taS****e ho, muntzir hon ham!
Un kee marzee hai, ho sakaa to, idhar aayengey!!

Kahaan hain wo? Patah naheen! Kahaan talaasheyn ham?
Raah detkheyngey; aur, yuun hi guzar jaayengey!!

Marz aisaa hai: eik hi tabeeb hai jis kaa!
Wo na aayaa to, haqeeqat hai, ki, mar jaayengey!!

Kisee kaa jor naheen un pai: ham kareyn kyaa-kyaa?
Umeed hai, ki, ‘abd’, lout key ghar aayengey!!

                                   - abd bundeli


Wow... It's so beautiful... More than Perfect..
Bahut khoob gazal hai Abd Ji..

And

Again... Great Sharing Sajid Ji..
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«Reply #4 on: December 29, 2008, 03:02:17 PM »
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Quote from: Mahiya on December 29, 2008, 02:11:53 PM
Wow... It's so beautiful... More than Perfect..
Bahut khoob gazal hai Abd Ji..
And
Again... Great Sharing Sajid Ji..
Grateful thanks for your kind comments, Mahiya ji!
                            - abd bundeli
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«Reply #5 on: December 30, 2008, 06:21:53 AM »
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Wah Abd ji bohat khoobsurat ghazal likha hai aapne... Applause

Wah Sajid ji great sharing .... Applause
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«Reply #6 on: December 30, 2008, 06:50:17 AM »
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Quote from: honeyrose on December 30, 2008, 06:21:53 AM
Wah Abd ji bohat khoobsurat ghazal likha hai aapne... Applause

Wah Sajid ji great sharing .... Applause
honeyrose ji, thanks a lot!
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