Mausame Gul Men KhazaaN Par Bolana Hai / मौसमे गुल में ख़ज़ाँ पर बोलना है ...Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

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पहले तो बिगड़े समाँ पर बोलना है
फिर हमें पीरो-जवाँ पर बोलना है

बेबसी है, बाग़ में यह, बाग़बाँ की
मौसमे गुल में ख़ज़ाँ पर बोलना है

बोल भी सकता नहीं है ठीक से जो
उसके अंदाज़े-बयाँ पर बोलना है

माजरा क्या है भला, क्यों ग़मज़दा हो
क्या तुम्हें आहो-फुगां पर बोलना है

खोलकर सब रख लिए हैं, ज़ख्म दिल के
अब हमें, दर्दे-निहाँ पर बोलना है

थे बहत्तर, अह्ले-बेयत, जिस में शामिल
उस मुक़द्दस कारवाँ पर बोलना है

ख़ामुशी ही से 'रक़ीब' इस बज़्म में अब
ज़िंदगी की दास्तां पर बोलना है

pahle to bigde samaan par bolana hai
fir hamen peero-jawaan par bolana hai

bebasi hai, baagh meN yeh, baaghbaaN ki
mausame gul men khazaaN par bolana hai

bol bhi sakta naheen hai theek se jo
us ke andaaze-bayaan par bolna hai

maajara kya hai bhala kyon gamzada ho
kya tumhen aaho-fugaan par bolna hai

kholkar sab rakh liye hain, jakham dil ke
ab hamen, darde-nihaan par bolna hai

the bahattar, ahle-beyat jismen shaamil
us muqaddas kaarwaan par bolna hai

khamushi hi se 'Raqeeb' is bazm men ab
zindagi ki daastaan par bolna hai

--- Satish Shukla ‘Raqeeb’
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«Reply #3 on: May 10, 2016, 03:50:24 PM »
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पहले तो बिगड़े समाँ पर बोलना है
फिर हमें पीरो-जवाँ पर बोलना है

बेबसी है, बाग़ में यह, बाग़बाँ की
मौसमे गुल में ख़ज़ाँ पर बोलना है

बोल भी सकता नहीं है ठीक से जो
उसके अंदाज़े-बयाँ पर बोलना है

माजरा क्या है भला, क्यों ग़मज़दा हो
क्या तुम्हें आहो-फुगां पर बोलना है

खोलकर सब रख लिए हैं, ज़ख्म दिल के
अब हमें, दर्दे-निहाँ पर बोलना है

थे बहत्तर, अह्ले-बेयत, जिस में शामिल
उस मुक़द्दस कारवाँ पर बोलना है

ख़ामुशी ही से 'रक़ीब' इस बज़्म में अब
ज़िंदगी की दास्तां पर बोलना है

pahle to bigde samaan par bolana hai
fir hamen peero-jawaan par bolana hai

bebasi hai, baagh meN yeh, baaghbaaN ki
mausame gul men khazaaN par bolana hai

bol bhi sakta naheen hai theek se jo
us ke andaaze-bayaan par bolna hai

maajara kya hai bhala kyon gamzada ho
kya tumhen aaho-fugaan par bolna hai

kholkar sab rakh liye hain, jakham dil ke
ab hamen, darde-nihaan par bolna hai

the bahattar, ahle-beyat jismen shaamil
us muqaddas kaarwaan par bolna hai

khamushi hi se 'Raqeeb' is bazm men ab
zindagi ki daastaan par bolna hai

--- Satish Shukla ‘Raqeeb’







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«Reply #4 on: May 11, 2016, 01:34:32 AM »
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Raqeeb Sahaab Aadaab ... !

WaaH waaH waaH janab bahut umdaa kalaam kahi hai aapne...
Mushkil zameen par khoobsurat khayaal pesh kiye hai aapne ...

Is umda kalaam par humari hazaroN dili daad o mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...
Likhte rahiye ... Bazm ko apni kalaamoN se rubaru karaate rahiye ...

Shaad O Aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez ...



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Aaha!!! Umda......//

Nazre inaayat aur hausala afzai ka bahut shukriya .... Raqeeb
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Nazre inaayat aur hausala afzai ka bahut shukriya .... Raqeeb
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Nazre inaayat aur hausala afzai ka bahut shukriya ..... Raqeeb

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Raqeeb Sahaab Aadaab ... !

WaaH waaH waaH janab bahut umdaa kalaam kahi hai aapne...
Mushkil zameen par khoobsurat khayaal pesh kiye hai aapne ...

Is umda kalaam par humari hazaroN dili daad o mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...
Likhte rahiye ... Bazm ko apni kalaamoN se rubaru karaate rahiye ...

Shaad O Aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez ...





Nazre inaayat aur hausala afzak ka bahut shukriya ..... Raqeeb
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«Reply #10 on: May 20, 2016, 02:03:48 AM »
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पहले तो बिगड़े समाँ पर बोलना है
फिर हमें पीरो-जवाँ पर बोलना है

बेबसी है, बाग़ में यह, बाग़बाँ की
मौसमे गुल में ख़ज़ाँ पर बोलना है

बोल भी सकता नहीं है ठीक से जो
उसके अंदाज़े-बयाँ पर बोलना है

माजरा क्या है भला, क्यों ग़मज़दा हो
क्या तुम्हें आहो-फुगां पर बोलना है

खोलकर सब रख लिए हैं, ज़ख्म दिल के
अब हमें, दर्दे-निहाँ पर बोलना है

थे बहत्तर, अह्ले-बेयत, जिस में शामिल
उस मुक़द्दस कारवाँ पर बोलना है

ख़ामुशी ही से 'रक़ीब' इस बज़्म में अब
ज़िंदगी की दास्तां पर बोलना है

pahle to bigde samaan par bolana hai
fir hamen peero-jawaan par bolana hai


rahne bhi do chupp bhi karo din raat bol-bol kar mera sar khaa gaye abb in duniyaa walo.n ko to chhor hi do naa Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard!

bebasi hai, baagh meN yeh, baaghbaaN ki
mausame gul men khazaaN par bolana hai

tum chman me.n jaayaa hi naa karo tumhaare aamad se hi khizaa.n aa jaati hai wo main hi hoon jo saalo.n se jhhel rahi hoon tumhe.n Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard!

bol bhi sakta naheen hai theek se jo
us ke andaaze-bayaan par bolna hai

acha to abb mujhe bolna bhi nahin aataa .pahle to bade fidaa-fidaa se rahte the mere bolne per ye kayaa thaa drama mujhe rijhhane kaa acha to ab main dekhti hoon kyaa bolte ho Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard!

maajara kya hai bhala kyon gamzada ho
kya tumhen aaho-fugaan par bolna hai

nahin mujhe mehfil me.n tumhaari harkato.n per bolna hai Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard!

kholkar sab rakh liye hain, zakham dil ke
ab hamen, darde-nihaan par bolna hai

achaa aur  bhi  dard baaqi hain paas tumhaare main ne to tumhe tanhaa chhor diya hai ab kyaa takleef aan padi ji Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased!



the bahattar, ahle-beyat jismen shaamil
us muqaddas kaarwaan par bolna hai

pahle full study kar lo detail me.n phir kahna warna apna bayaa.n anticipation me.n do ge to bawaal khada ho jaaye gaa samjhe Feared. Feared. Feared. Feared. Feared. Feared.!

khamushi hi se 'Raqeeb' is bazm men ab
zindagi ki daastaan par bolna hai

Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard ye to be-baaki se bolo yaa khaamosh hi raho dono kaam ek saath nahin ho saktaadar gaye dar gaye dar gaye!

--- Satish Shukla ‘Raqeeb’




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bahut khoob satish ji rau in sha allah baad me.n icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!

Nazre inaayat aur tanqeed ka bahut shukriya Mohtarma Sheba Sahiba ...... "the bahattar, ahle-beyat jismen shaamil / us muqaddas kaarwaan par bolna hai" .... she'r men aapne eitraaj kiya hai usmen kuchh detail se kahen agar zaroorat huee to tabdeel kar doonga ..... Raqeeb
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aap ka rau haazir hai icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
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Bahut shukria ..... Mohtarma Sheba Sahiba ....... Raqeeb
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