MAUSAM-E-GUL.....................................SAINI

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Mausam-e-gul khizaaN se niklegaa.
Raastaa gulsitaaN se niklegaa.

Jab bhee tootengee had zahaadat kee.
Jaane kyaa-kyaa zabaaN se niklegaa.

Chot degaa kaheeN kisee dil par.
Teer jab-jab kamaaN se niklegaa.

Sirf lafzoN kee heraa-pheree hai.
Ye hee matlab bayaaN se niklegaa.

Kar parindoN ko bhee ataa varnaa.
Inkaa daanaa kahaaN se niklegaa.

Teree chaahat jo leke niklaa hai.
Kaun us kaarwaaN se niklegaa.

Is bayaabaan meN fansaa ‘saini’.
Kis tarah ab yahaaN se niklegaa.

Dr.Surendra Saini


मौसम-ए -गुल ख़िज़ाँ से निकलेगा ।
रास्ता गुलसिताँ से निकलेगा ॥

जब भी टूटेंगी हद ज़हादत की ।
जाने क्या-क्या ज़बाँ से निकलेगा ॥

चोट देगा कहीं  किसी दिल पर ।
तीर जब -जब कमाँ से निकलेगा ॥

सिर्फ़ लफ़्ज़ों की हेरा-फेरी है ।
ये ही मतलब बयाँ से निकलेगा ॥

कर परिंदों को भी आता वर्ना ।
इनका दाना कहाँ से निकलेगा ॥

तेरी चाहत जो ले के निकला है ।
कौन उस कारवॉं से निकलेगा ॥

इस बयाबान में फ़ँसा 'सैनी' ।
किस तरह अब यहाँ से निकलेगा ॥

डा० सुरेन्द्र सैनी
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«Reply #1 on: November 09, 2013, 02:48:57 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: November 09, 2013, 06:00:44 PM »
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bahut umda Applause...mubaarak ho saini sb!
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«Reply #3 on: November 09, 2013, 06:12:25 PM »
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हमेशा की तरह से बहुत ही नायब पेशकश.......ढेरों दाद और खास तौर से

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«Reply #4 on: November 09, 2013, 06:22:07 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: November 09, 2013, 06:39:45 PM »
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«Reply #6 on: November 09, 2013, 07:31:30 PM »
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Mausam-e-gul khizaaN se niklegaa.
Raastaa gulsitaaN se niklegaa.

Jab bhee tootengee had zahaadat kee.
Jaane kyaa-kyaa zabaaN se niklegaa.

Chot degaa kaheeN kisee dil par.
Teer jab-jab kamaaN se niklegaa.

Sirf lafzoN kee heraa-pheree hai.
Ye hee matlab bayaaN se niklegaa.

Kar parindoN ko bhee ataa varnaa.
Inkaa daanaa kahaaN se niklegaa.

Teree chaahat jo leke niklaa hai.
Kaun us kaarwaaN se niklegaa.

Is bayaabaan meN fansaa ‘saini’.
Kis tarah ab yahaaN se niklegaa.

Dr.Surendra Saini


मौसम-ए -गुल ख़िज़ाँ से निकलेगा ।
रास्ता गुलसिताँ से निकलेगा ॥

जब भी टूटेंगी हद ज़हादत की ।
जाने क्या-क्या ज़बाँ से निकलेगा ॥

चोट देगा कहीं  किसी दिल पर ।
तीर जब -जब कमाँ से निकलेगा ॥

सिर्फ़ लफ़्ज़ों की हेरा-फेरी है ।
ये ही मतलब बयाँ से निकलेगा ॥

कर परिंदों को भी आता वर्ना ।
इनका दाना कहाँ से निकलेगा ॥

तेरी चाहत जो ले के निकला है ।
कौन उस कारवॉं से निकलेगा ॥

इस बयाबान में फ़ँसा 'सैनी' ।
किस तरह अब यहाँ से निकलेगा ॥

डा० सुरेन्द्र सैनी


boss!!!!!!!!!!!!! ek rau ke saath main estaqbaal karta hoon iss ghazal ka
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«Reply #7 on: November 09, 2013, 07:32:09 PM »
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Lajawaab sir ji... behad umda peshkash..

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«Reply #8 on: November 09, 2013, 07:48:11 PM »
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Mausam-e-gul khizaaN se niklegaa.
Raastaa gulsitaaN se niklegaa.

Jab bhee tootengee had zahaadat kee.
Jaane kyaa-kyaa zabaaN se niklegaa.

Chot degaa kaheeN kisee dil par.
Teer jab-jab kamaaN se niklegaa.

waah waah bohut khoob Dr. sahab
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«Reply #10 on: November 09, 2013, 09:48:45 PM »
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Mausam-e-gul khizaaN se niklegaa.
Raastaa gulsitaaN se niklegaa.

Jab bhee tootengee had zahaadat kee.
Jaane kyaa-kyaa zabaaN se niklegaa.

Chot degaa kaheeN kisee dil par.
Teer jab-jab kamaaN se niklegaa.

Sirf lafzoN kee heraa-pheree hai.
Ye hee matlab bayaaN se niklegaa.

Kar parindoN ko bhee ataa varnaa.
Inkaa daanaa kahaaN se niklegaa.

Teree chaahat jo leke niklaa hai.
Kaun us kaarwaaN se niklegaa.

Is bayaabaan meN fansaa ‘saini’.
Kis tarah ab yahaaN se niklegaa.

Dr.Surendra Saini


मौसम-ए -गुल ख़िज़ाँ से निकलेगा ।
रास्ता गुलसिताँ से निकलेगा ॥

जब भी टूटेंगी हद ज़हादत की ।
जाने क्या-क्या ज़बाँ से निकलेगा ॥

चोट देगा कहीं  किसी दिल पर ।
तीर जब -जब कमाँ से निकलेगा ॥

सिर्फ़ लफ़्ज़ों की हेरा-फेरी है ।
ये ही मतलब बयाँ से निकलेगा ॥

कर परिंदों को भी आता वर्ना ।
इनका दाना कहाँ से निकलेगा ॥

तेरी चाहत जो ले के निकला है ।
कौन उस कारवॉं से निकलेगा ॥

इस बयाबान में फ़ँसा 'सैनी' ।
किस तरह अब यहाँ से निकलेगा ॥

डा० सुरेन्द्र सैनी



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«Reply #11 on: November 09, 2013, 09:50:31 PM »
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«Reply #12 on: November 09, 2013, 09:55:05 PM »
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«Reply #13 on: November 09, 2013, 10:05:59 PM »
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khubsurat ghazal hai saini saeheb. bahut mubarakbad
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«Reply #14 on: November 10, 2013, 12:02:24 AM »
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Mausam-e-gul khizaaN se niklegaa.
Raastaa gulsitaaN se niklegaa.

Jab bhee tootengee had zahaadat kee.
Jaane kyaa-kyaa zabaaN se niklegaa.

Sirf lafzoN kee heraa-pheree hai.
Ye hee matlab bayaaN se niklegaa.

Is bayaabaan meN fansaa ‘saini’.
Kis tarah ab yahaaN se niklegaa.




Excellent ghazal sir .... dheron daad aap ko !!!
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