Maut hai kareeb koi kafan pahnane nahi aaya---Kumaar

by kumaar on December 02, 2014, 11:24:50 AM
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BarsoN se koi shaks mujhe rulane nahi aaya,
Jalti huvi in aankhoN ko bhujhane nahi aaya!!

Kasme thi sang jeene marne ki jis rishte mei,
Rutha huN aaj to koi mujhe manane nahi aaya!!

Har deewar par thi tasveer mohabbat ki hamari,
Feeka pad gya ab rang koi deewar sajane nahi aaya!!

Kabhi hoti thi har shaam khushnuma uski bahoN mei,
Ab gham mei hai har sab meri koi hasane nahi aaya!!

Hai baki ab kuchh hi saanseiN 'Kumaar',
Maut hai ab kareeb koi kafan pahnane nahi aaya!!

Jai Kumar
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«Reply #1 on: December 02, 2014, 12:10:23 PM »
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श्री कुमार जी ,आख़री गजल की लाईने दिल को दहलाने वाली थी पेश है:- चुरा लेंगे मौत को भी,भले ही कोई कफन पहराने नही आया,प्यार करने वाले हम वो शक्स है,जो कभी तुम्हारे सामने नही आया -आर के रस्तोगी
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«Reply #2 on: December 02, 2014, 12:28:06 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: December 02, 2014, 12:39:13 PM »
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श्री कुमार जी ,आख़री गजल की लाईने दिल को दहलाने वाली थी पेश है:- चुरा लेंगे मौत को भी,भले ही कोई कफन पहराने नही आया,प्यार करने वाले हम वो शक्स है,जो कभी तुम्हारे सामने नही आया -आर के रस्तोगी

bahut bahut Shukriya sirji aapne jo kaha bahut khoob ek martaba fir se aapka aabhar
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«Reply #4 on: December 02, 2014, 12:41:59 PM »
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Shukriya raman bhaijan
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«Reply #5 on: December 02, 2014, 01:38:25 PM »
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waah waah waah waah Jai Kumar ji , kyaa kehne, kyaa khoob likhaa hai aapne, humein aapki yeh rachnaa bahut pasand aayi....!!!

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«Reply #6 on: December 02, 2014, 03:21:42 PM »
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Kumaar Jee Aadaab ... !

Bade hi khoob khayaaloN ko umdaa lafz diye haiN aapne ...
Sabhi sher khoob rahe ...

Humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye ...
Likhte rahiye ... bazm meiN aate rahiye ...

Shaad O aabaad rahiye ...
Khuda Hafez ...

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«Reply #7 on: December 02, 2014, 04:02:11 PM »
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bahut khoobsurat misre hain aapkee ghazal mein Kumar Sahib, dheron daad.
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«Reply #8 on: December 02, 2014, 05:15:36 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob.
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«Reply #9 on: December 02, 2014, 11:22:28 PM »
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What a fabulous creation Mr. Jai as everyone said mind-blowing and superb creation.

keep writing
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«Reply #10 on: December 03, 2014, 01:00:14 AM »
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..ietni khubsoorat jazbaat..dil choo Gaye ..bahut umda likha hai...apni diary me likhni hi padi....
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«Reply #11 on: December 03, 2014, 03:29:51 AM »
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waah waah waah waah Jai Kumar ji , kyaa kehne, kyaa khoob likhaa hai aapne, humein aapki yeh rachnaa bahut pasand aayi....!!!

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thanks a lot hriday bhaijan
bahut khushi huvi aapka reply jankar
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«Reply #12 on: December 03, 2014, 03:31:24 AM »
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waah waah waah waah Jai Kumar ji , kyaa kehne, kyaa khoob likhaa hai aapne, humein aapki yeh rachnaa bahut pasand aayi....!!!

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thanks a lot hriday bhaijan
bahut khushi huvi aapka reply jankar
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«Reply #13 on: December 03, 2014, 08:24:12 AM »
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Kumaar Jee Aadaab ... !

Bade hi khoob khayaaloN ko umdaa lafz diye haiN aapne ...
Sabhi sher khoob rahe ...

Humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye ...
Likhte rahiye ... bazm meiN aate rahiye ...

Shaad O aabaad rahiye ...
Khuda Hafez ...



parwaaZ ji Shukriya
i guess this is ur first reply on my post
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«Reply #14 on: December 03, 2014, 08:28:11 AM »
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bahut bahut Shukriya surindarn bhaijan
aapke comment hamesha meri hosla afzaayi karte hai tah-e-Shukriya
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