......Maut ko roka tha hamne jindgi ki chav me......

Maut ko roka tha hamne jindgi ki chav me.
Aa gayi h jindgi ab maut ki panah me.

Log jo kal tak aankhe dikhlaya karte the.
Rakhte h ab sabse upar hamko duwa-ao me.

Abi to sab hath milakar ja rhe h log.
Dekhna h kab tak nhi chubhegi meri khusiya nigaho me.

Ab kise h wakat etna jo kisi bat pe gaur kare.
Hal-e-dil kiyo btaau usko m bekar me.

Aadmi hi aadmi se dushmani rakhne laga.
Dost ko fir dhundne jao m kis bazaar me.

 
Good effort,MSji.Lekin agar saare sher
similar  sounding  words  pe  end  hon
to shairy mein aur khubsurti aa jaaye.
...Just ,a suggestion...

bahut khoob....