Mazeed ho rahe naye naye sitamon ki eejaad se nikal.................................................

by aqsh on November 11, 2013, 01:21:20 PM
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«Reply #30 on: November 11, 2013, 08:58:02 PM »
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icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower bohut khud aqsh ji
thnxxxxxx jeet jainam ji...
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«Reply #31 on: November 11, 2013, 08:58:53 PM »
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Feared.
hmmm aap kya mssg dena chah rahe ho nahin samajh mein aaya.. khair padhne ke liye bahut bahut shukriya kittoo ji...
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«Reply #32 on: November 11, 2013, 09:00:34 PM »
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Bahut waqt gawaah diya hai, uska intezar karte karte
Mita kar uski har nishaani ko, dard ke mee’aad se nikal
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Aapka bahut bahut shukriya Sudhir ji...
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«Reply #33 on: November 11, 2013, 09:01:44 PM »
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Hum karte rahe minnateiN is baat ka unhe guroor tha
Unke sangdil hone mein sirf hamara hi qusoor tha



Waaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh 


Kahte haiN mere jazbaat ki, shab e barbaad se nikal
laboN par apni haNsi saja, aur puraani yaad se nikal


bahot khoob......



Uske liye kya sochna, jisne wafa ke saath wafa na nibhaya
KyuN mudh mudh kar use dekhna, dar e fariyaad se nikal


acchaa sher kaha hai..............


Bahut waqt gawaah diya hai, uska intezar karte karte
Mita kar uski har nishaani ko, dard ke mee’aad se nikal

sahi soch rahi ho...... jaldi niklo.. 


Jo kuch dikh raha hai uski aankhon meiN, sab fareb hai
Dil meiN dabe har, ehsaas o gam ki buniyaad se nikal


 Applause Applause


Pahele hi qismat ne kuch, kam sitam nahiN kiye”Aqsh”
Mazeed ho rahe naye naye sitamon ki, eejaad se nikal

Waahh waahhh waahhhhhhh Ash.... what a beautiful poetry.... khoob se khoob likhti hai aap... Masha Allah... likhti rahiye.. bahot si daad...








Sidra
Bahut bahut shukriya Sidra....
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«Reply #34 on: November 11, 2013, 09:02:21 PM »
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Haye!!! Aqsh ji aapne mera dil garden garden kr diya... masha allah kya khoob peshkash hai...
thank you sooooooooo much chweeety..
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«Reply #35 on: November 11, 2013, 09:03:07 PM »
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aqsh ji , bahut khoob likha hai .
sabhi ashaar khubsurat aur ba-maani
hsin . bahut bahut daad aur mubarakbad.
aapka bahut bahut bahut shukriya hasan ji...
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«Reply #36 on: November 11, 2013, 09:03:43 PM »
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Bahut waqt gawaah diya hai, uska intezar karte karte
Mita kar uski har nishaani ko, dard ke mee’aad se nikal

Applause


Shad o Aabaad Rahiye

Shihab
bahut bahut shukriya shihab ji...
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«Reply #37 on: November 11, 2013, 09:04:17 PM »
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thnxxx a lottttttt risk...
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«Reply #38 on: November 11, 2013, 09:04:49 PM »
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Applause Applause Applause Applause
thnxxxxxxxx a lotttttttttt adil ji...
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«Reply #39 on: November 11, 2013, 09:29:03 PM »
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बहुत बहुत खूब अक्श जी......क्या बात है.....
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«Reply #40 on: November 11, 2013, 09:36:59 PM »
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बहुत बहुत खूब अक्श जी......क्या बात है.....
thnxxxxxx a lotttttttt amit ji...
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«Reply #41 on: November 12, 2013, 01:33:42 AM »
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Hum karte rahe minnateiN is baat ka unhe guroor tha
Unke sangdil hone mein sirf hamara hi qusoor tha



Kahte haiN mere jazbaat ki, shab e barbaad se nikal
laboN par apni haNsi saja, aur puraani yaad se nikal

Uske liye kya sochna, jisne wafa ke saath wafa na nibhaya
KyuN mudh mudh kar use dekhna, dar e fariyaad se nikal

Bahut waqt gawaah diya hai, uska intezar karte karte
Mita kar uski har nishaani ko, dard ke mee’aad se nikal

Jo kuch dikh raha hai uski aankhon meiN, sab fareb hai
Dil meiN dabe har, ehsaas o gam ki buniyaad se nikal

Pahele hi qismat ne kuch, kam sitam nahiN kiye”Aqsh”
Mazeed ho rahe naye naye sitamon ki, eejaad se nikal


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Laaaaaaajjjaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwaaaaaaaaaaaabbb bbbbbbbbbbbbbb aqsh jee..
Har ek aashar bahut hi khoob raha..
Dhero dhero daad..happy9
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«Reply #42 on: November 12, 2013, 12:41:35 PM »
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Laaaaaaajjjaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwaaaaaaaaaaaabbb bbbbbbbbbbbbbb aqsh jee..
Har ek aashar bahut hi khoob raha..
Dhero dhero daad..happy9

Thnxxxxxxxxxxxxx a lotttttttttt Ashwani....
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«Reply #43 on: November 12, 2013, 07:35:59 PM »
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Hum karte rahe minnateiN is baat ka unhe guroor tha
Unke sangdil hone mein sirf hamara hi qusoor tha



Kahte haiN mere jazbaat ki, shab e barbaad se nikal
laboN par apni haNsi saja, aur puraani yaad se nikal

Uske liye kya sochna, jisne wafa ke saath wafa na nibhaya
KyuN mudh mudh kar use dekhna, dar e fariyaad se nikal

Bahut waqt gawaah diya hai, uska intezar karte karte
Mita kar uski har nishaani ko, dard ke mee’aad se nikal

Jo kuch dikh raha hai uski aankhon meiN, sab fareb hai
Dil meiN dabe har, ehsaas o gam ki buniyaad se nikal

Pahele hi qismat ne kuch, kam sitam nahiN kiye”Aqsh”
Mazeed ho rahe naye naye sitamon ki, eejaad se nikal


naaaaaaaaice
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«Reply #44 on: November 12, 2013, 08:36:22 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
waah waah waah waah kyaa kehne Aqsh ji, bahut bahut khoob likhaa hai aapne....!!!!!
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