Miltaa naheen hai chain kabhee, par, binaa miley!!

by abdbundeli on August 25, 2009, 09:55:21 AM
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Yaadoun ka meyree, yaar key dil mein diyaa jaley!
Hon khatm kabhi bhi na, ye yaaree key silsiley!!

Toubaa kareyngey baarahaa, "Dar par na aayengey!"
Miltaa naheen hai chain  kabhee, par, binaa miley!!

Woh aayen, aur dil key taar jhanjhanaa uthheyn;
Gaatee ho andleeb aur shaakh-e-gul hiley!

Lab thartharaaye baarhaa khushaamdeed ko;
Gulafsaan nigah daal, gul-e-baatinee khiley!

Unkee galee mein khaar-o-sang, go ki, hain bahut;
Haazir hain saath paanw key chhaaley chhiley huye!

Ham sochatey they, shikwey kareyngey hazaar roz!
Aaye hain lout: kyaa karoon, khaamosh hain giley?

Jaatey hain, loutatey bhi naheen hain sabhee, 'abd',
Chaltey raheyn hain yuun hi zamaanoun sey qaafiley!

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«Reply #1 on: August 25, 2009, 10:16:13 AM »
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 nice gazal....abdji... Applause



Yaadoun ka meyree, yaar key dil mein diyaa jaley!
Hon khatm kabhi bhi na, ye yaaree key silsiley!!

Toubaa kareyngey baarahaa, "Dar par na aayengey!"
Miltaa naheen hai chain  kabhee, par, binaa miley!!

Woh aayen, aur dil key taar jhanjhanaa uthheyn;
Gaatee ho andleeb aur shaakh-e-gul hiley!

Lab thartharaaye baarhaa khushaamdeed ko;
Gulafsaan nigah daal, gul-e-baatinee khiley!

Unkee galee mein khaar-o-sang, go ki, hain bahut;
Haazir hain saath paanw key chhaaley chhiley huye!

Ham sochatey they, shikwey kareyngey hazaar roz!
Aaye hain lout: kyaa karoon, khaamosh hain giley?

Jaatey hain, loutatey bhi naheen hain sabhee, 'abd',
Chaltey raheyn hain yuun hi zamaanoun sey qaafiley!

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«Reply #2 on: August 25, 2009, 10:19:28 AM »
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Abd Ji,

Bahut acchi Ghazal pesh ki hai aap ne Applause Applause Applause

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«Reply #3 on: August 25, 2009, 10:26:32 AM »
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Bohat Achche Abd Ji,.
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«Reply #4 on: August 25, 2009, 03:17:19 PM »
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nice gazal....abdji... Applause

Shukriyah smardia ji!
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«Reply #5 on: August 25, 2009, 03:19:26 PM »
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Abd Ji,
Bahut acchi Ghazal pesh ki hai aap ne Applause Applause Applause

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Shukriyah Rajbir ji!
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«Reply #6 on: August 25, 2009, 03:20:50 PM »
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Bohat Achche Abd Ji,.
Shukriyah Azeem ji!
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«Reply #7 on: August 25, 2009, 03:30:16 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Abd Saheb Ji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: August 25, 2009, 03:38:35 PM »
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waah waah Abd ji .. aap tho sachi mea kamaal ho aur aap ka likha tho MashaAllah Kya hai.. Dil kush kar deta hai.. bahoot bahoot Khubsoorat Ghazal hai .. Bahoot Khoob!
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«Reply #9 on: August 25, 2009, 03:44:37 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Abd Saheb Ji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Shukriyah khwaish ji!
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«Reply #10 on: August 25, 2009, 10:07:56 PM »
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nice abdbundeli ji....
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«Reply #11 on: August 25, 2009, 10:29:22 PM »
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Good one Abd Ji
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«Reply #12 on: August 25, 2009, 11:49:29 PM »
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Wah wah bahut khoob Abd ji,beautiful gazal, Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Thumbs UP
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«Reply #13 on: August 26, 2009, 06:59:39 AM »
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waah waah Abd ji .. aap tho sachi mea kamaal ho aur aap ka likha tho MashaAllah Kya hai.. Dil kush kar deta hai.. bahoot bahoot Khubsoorat Ghazal hai .. Bahoot Khoob!
Thanks a lot, Sophi!
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«Reply #14 on: August 26, 2009, 07:02:04 AM »
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nice abdbundeli ji....
Thanks a lot, brokenbyluv ji!
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