Mohabatt ke fasane mei.N, Kahaa.N Har Baat aayi hai

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Mohabatt ke fasane mei.N, Kahaa.N Har Baat aayi hai
Jahan tak dooba hai sooraj, wahi tak raat aayi hai

Muqaddar mei.N nahi hai, ishq ki galiyon ka yaarana
Jahan bhi dil tatola hai, wahi par maat khayi hai

nahi hotey hain saare apne jo, apne se lagtey hain
ki jub bhi pankh khola hain hawayen kaat khayi hain

Laga kar dil se kaataa.N, jis kali ko raat bhar seecha
Subah Uss phool ko le jane ghar, baraat aayi hain

Nahi aaya kabhi koi, mujhtak waqt ke rehte
Nashemann khaakH hua jalkar, ki ab barsaat aayi hai

Thehernaa hi padega waqt ko, aaj iss mukaa.M aakar
Bahut siddat se manga hai, toh yeh mulaqat aayi hai

Kisi ke julf mei.N faskar, ujala reh gaya hoga
Warna kya wajah hai, raat ke baad raat aaayi hain

‘Deepak” yeh pathar raah ke, ab thokar nahi dete
Yeh dil becahara hai.N, unke samajh baat aayi hain

Deepak Srivastava "Deepak"
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«Reply #1 on: May 01, 2012, 04:41:33 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: May 01, 2012, 06:45:05 AM »
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Waah ji waah janab aap to bhut achcha likhte h.
Es khoobsurat gazal pe hamari daad kabool kare.
Esi tarah likhte rahe khush rahe...
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Quote from: sksaini4 on May 01, 2012, 04:41:33 AM
bahut khoob

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Quote from: Shihab on May 01, 2012, 06:21:13 AM
Bahut Bahut Khub Janaab Applause

Shad o aabaad rahiye...

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«Reply #5 on: May 01, 2012, 07:13:59 AM »
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Quote from: masoom shahjada on May 01, 2012, 06:45:05 AM
Waah ji waah janab aap to bhut achcha likhte h.
Es khoobsurat gazal pe hamari daad kabool kare.
Esi tarah likhte rahe khush rahe...


kosish kar lete hain, aap logo ke encouragement se housla badhta hain, thank you
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«Reply #6 on: May 01, 2012, 09:25:46 AM »
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Quote from: livingbytheday on May 01, 2012, 04:09:18 AM
Mohabatt ke fasane mei.N, Kahaa.N Har Baat aayi hai
Jahan tak dooba hai sooraj, wahi tak raat aayi hai

Muqaddar mei.N nahi hai, ishq ki galiyon ka yaarana
Jahan bhi dil tatola hai, wahi par maat khayi hai

Laga kar dil se kaataa.N, jis kali ko raat bhar seecha
Subah Uss phool ko le jane ghar, baraat aayi hain

Nahi aaya kabhi koi, mujhtak waqt ke rehte
Nashemann khaakH hua jalkar, ki ab barsaat aayi hai

Thehernaa hi padega waqt ko, aaj iss mukaa.M aakar
Bahut siddat se manga hai, toh yeh mulaqat aayi hai

Kisi ke julf mei.N faskar, ujala reh gaya hoga
Warna kya wajah hai, raat ke baad raat aaayi hain

‘Deepak” yeh pathar raah ke, ab thokar nahi dete
Yeh dil becahara hai.N, unke samajh baat aayi hain

Deepak Srivastava "Deepak"


Bahut Bahut Aur Bahut Khooob!!!

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Quote from: khwaish on May 01, 2012, 09:25:46 AM

Bahut Bahut Aur Bahut Khooob!!!

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thank you for words of encouragement
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«Reply #8 on: May 01, 2012, 04:13:55 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob Deepak ji....!!!
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on May 01, 2012, 04:13:55 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob Deepak ji....!!!

thank you
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«Reply #10 on: May 02, 2012, 11:52:04 AM »
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bohut khoob kaha apne dear
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Quote from: saahill on May 02, 2012, 11:52:04 AM
bohut khoob kaha apne dear

thank you saahil ji
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beautiful
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Quote from: himanshuIITR on May 03, 2012, 11:35:56 AM
beautiful

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